Character Sheet Help (Locked and Relocated)

[jben88]

im new, and I honestly dont now where to post a character sheet or what a thread is, please help?

[Scar]

im new, and I honestly dont now where to post a character sheet or what a thread is, please help?

Hello,

I am Scar the character sheet liasion. I will be happy to help you find your way around but you really do need to read the starting guide all the way through first. If you have specific questions I can help, but every thing is laid out here.

Also you will need to change your name before you create a character sheet. If you need help with a certain aspect please feel free to message me.

Scar

[Carsten]

Well, I just posted my CS, and I would really appreciate any feedback on it!

[Reo]

Hey, I'm new round these parts. Not only to the site but to rolePlaying in general. I was wondering if I could get any tips to help improve my Character Sheet.

Much Appreciated.
Reo.

[Neoma Curtnal]

Hello, I'm new here and looking to start role-playing.

would you check over my character sheet ( http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic14648.html ) and see if its okay, please?

Much thanks, Neoma Curtnal

[Darik]

*pops in*
Lets see if I can give you peeps some good advice.

Carsten:
Beside from a few grammatical and spelling mistakes, I really enjoyed reading your cs. You had a very realistic story about the Ano Cult, which is very hard to do! Though I feel like in your history you didn’t mention the captain again. You murdered a captain. There has to be some consequence for that!

Reo:
Feedback you say? I can help with that.
((All of these are my preferences BTW.))
I would like you to add what season and day your character was born. Check out this link if you need help with that: http://www.mizahar.com/lore/Time
How about on your skills you specify were your points came from? Like in this cs: http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic13863.html It shows which one came from the starting package, from the racial bonus, and it will help you be more organized when you start getting skills from threads.
A description and picture of your red tailed hawk.
Because you don’t have a house ((you shouldn’t need one as a dek)) you should have six hundred gold mizas instead of one hundred. However, you are free to start with one hundred regardless.
Have the thread list in your framepic. Let’s look at this one again: http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic13863.html You see that? It has the thread name, date, and its progress. That will help you immensely when you organize it.

Neomai:
First off, you deduct the expenses at the end of the season, not each day. So remove “-1 GM a day for accommodation -1.5 GM a day for living expense”
Next, is your characters age. Fourteen years old? That’s a tad young in this game. But ohh well, your choice.
You say Neomai’s mother went through Sunberth being kind? Sorry, I can say that woman would have died. No matter her skills, she would have died and stolen from. Try to give a reason why she didn’t die?((Other than her skillset))
I feel like you don’t give enough reason why she moves away. People at the age of fourteen just don’t move away for that kind of things. ((But then again it is your character))

[Neoma Curtnal]

Thanks Darik, is this any better? just small changes

[Darik]

Yes.

[Spencer]

I'm confused with the mizahar time, so If I wanted my character to be 18 yrs old, how would I put his birthday in the character sheet?? [December 12 [[Real time]]

[Darik]

73 Winter, 493 Av
If you need to look at the timestamp again check out this lore: http://www.mizahar.com/lore/Calendar