Character Sheet Help (Locked and Relocated)

by **River Mahican** on October 26th, 2011, 5:14 pm

hey, i finally think i finished my character sheet and wondered if theres anything else i need to do on it, could you please check it for me?? Thankyou!

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic14994.html

by **Scar** on October 26th, 2011, 10:21 pm

River Mahican wrote:hey, i finally think i finished my character sheet and wondered if theres anything else i need to do on it, could you please check it for me?? Thankyou! http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic14994.html

I looked over your CS,

First thing right off the bat: Might want to change the font hon. It's a little hard to read.

A couple of things I would consider and a few things that need changing.

age of just 12 and has been alone ever since. .

This contradicts your age.

Also your languages, you are allowed up to three but you do not have to choose three. Make sure your languages fit your history. If there is no reason for your character to know those languages then you may want to reconsider adding those to your CS.

Also Navigation is more a skill than a lore. Might need to make that a bit more specific.

Just some suggestions hon.

by **River Mahican** on October 27th, 2011, 6:34 am

Thankyou for looking it over, i have changed the bits you suggested

by **Cowboy** on October 28th, 2011, 12:12 am

Hey, River.

Everything looks good to go. Please remember to link your CS to your profile. Go to User Control Panel and it's a setting under the Profile tab.

Thanks!

Cowboy

by **Ciera** on October 29th, 2011, 8:28 pm

I think I've done my CS now but I'd appreciate it if someone could have a look at it to see if I've missed anything out. http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic15039.html
Also, do I have to wait for the CS to be checked before I post?
Thanks.

by **Cowboy** on October 29th, 2011, 8:36 pm

Hey Ciera,

I noticed a few things with your CS:

Your character only speaks Nari, which may make it difficult to talk to others, depending on what language they speak and understand. The majority of Mizahar speaks Common.

It's not necessary for you to put the "actual" birthday of your character in your CS.

There's a typo when you wrote her race, it should be "Inarta."

That's all I can see. You can start playing right away once you make the appropriate changes. I won't do an Intervention on your CS if they're made.

Cowboy

by **Ciera** on October 29th, 2011, 8:41 pm

Thank you, I've changed it now.

by **Cowboy** on October 29th, 2011, 8:43 pm

You're good to go. Get writing!

Welcome to Mizahar.

C

by **Sullie** on October 30th, 2011, 4:12 pm

Um I'm a new member and i need a little help on my character page.
Can you help me with the age and equipment of the ghost race please and thx.

by **Cowboy** on October 30th, 2011, 11:54 pm

Hey Sullie,

If you could post the Character Sheet you have in progress with the "WiP" (Work In Progress) tag, we can help you out that way. With nothing to work with, all I can do is point you to the Lore about ghosts. :/

Please post something and then we can work on making it right!

-Cowboy