[Riverfall Ink] The Finest Canvas (Saib)

Razkar seeks out an artist worthy to work on his body, and meets an unusual "Myrian" in the process

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Built into the cliffs overlooking the Suvan Sea, Riverfall resides on the edge of grasslands of Cyphrus where the Bluevein River plunges off the plain and cascades down to the inland sea below. Home of the Akalak, Riverfall is a self-supporting city populated by devoted warriors. [Riverfall Codex]

[Riverfall Ink] The Finest Canvas (Saib)

Postby Razkar on November 13th, 2012, 3:41 am

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"I...I've never fought or killed anyone or anything..."

Now that Razkar found hard to believe, arching both eyebrows as he heard the words. Every Myrian, regardless of age, gender or temprament, killed. At least for food. They weren't farmers, after all, aside from maize and the fruit they collected. They were hunters, carnivores, the apex predators of the Falyndar jungles. But this one had never killed?

Razkar frowned minutely. It... may not have been so bizarre. Saib would most likely have been shunned by his peers, even the adults, made to do other things but hunt. Razkar felt an unfamiliar pang of pity for the Akalak. It was hard enough being Myrian for the Myrians; Myri alone knew what it must have been like for such a rank outsider.

"Myri must ashamed to have me worship her..."

The pang became a swell, and though he closed his eyes to better concentrate on the pain rippling through him, Herrlock doing his job with stoic, clinical care, his words reverberated through the room.

"I don't think so, my brother. Myri favors and challenges us all in different ways. Yours were... more extreme. But you claim yourself as one of her children and honor her with your devotion."

He opened his eyes and locked his dark coals onto the Akalak's purple, smiling slightly.

"Skulls and scalps are not all the Goddess-Queen demands. You will find your own way."

"Umm, I want to get a stud in my eyebrow and a ring or bone through my nose like you have. I know he probably doesn't do them but I thought he'd know someone who did."

"I might know someone," Herrlock murmured, never taking his eyes off the skull he was etching painstakingly (and painfully) onto Razkar's back, "Once I've done here, we'll talk."

He finished one skull and began another, cleaving and ripping fresh skin with a new needle, and Razkar gritted his molars and stared ahead with glazed eyes, welcoming the agony...
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Postby Saib on November 14th, 2012, 1:38 am

Saib smiled a litle bit at Razkar's kind words and shrugged a little. "Thanks. I...I just wish that Myri would have given me her mark when I was born...Maybe I wouldn't have been rejected so much if I had her recognition..."

Fluffy licked him and made a cooing noise and Saib leaned back, nodding at Herrock's words. "I wonder if I could earn her mark if I killed something and made a sacrifice to her...but I don't want to do it alone..." He sat back thinking this over until a thought came to him and he sat up with a soft
"Oh!" He bit his lip and shifted in his chair before asking in Myrian, "Razkar...can I go hunting with you one day? I want to show Myri my faith and dedication to her. I want to make offerings to her and try to earn her mark..."
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Postby Razkar on November 14th, 2012, 4:09 am

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"Thanks. I...I just wish that Myri would have given me her mark when I was born...Maybe I wouldn't have been rejected so much if I had her recognition..."

Razkar sighed but did not comment further. The Akalak's concerns were started to border on self-pity, and he had no patience for that. Instead he closed his eyes again and let the biting, insistent pain wash over him. It was hard to distinguish one skull from another, but judging by the pauses... he guessed there was only two left. Herrlock worked fast, and accurate.

Razkar smirked a little. He probably handled his lakan the same way.

"I wonder if I could earn her mark if I killed something and made a sacrifice to her...but I don't want to do it alone..."

The Myrian's (no, the born Myrian's) eyes snapped open and he decided to quiet this boy. Well... he might not be a boy, though. Akalak's being Akalak's he could be twice Razkar's age. But he did not come here to hear the mewlings of a whelp, he came to have a master work on the finest canvas. So, this was going to-

"Razkar...can I go hunting with you one day? I want to show Myri my faith and dedication to her. I want to make offerings to her and try to earn her mark..."

The air stilled. Even Herrlock's steady, unstoppable and unflappable needle paused for a moment, as if it wanted to know what the answer would be. Razkar actually glared at Saib for a few moments. Oh, of all the... the...

He is your brother. Of your people. Of the jungles and a child of Myri.

With a sigh that could have come from a much older being, Razkar closed his eyes again and nodded, or nodded as well as one could with his head lying on a stone pillar.

"I'll help you, Saib. We will do it today." He heard the hitch in the Akalak's breath and didn't even open his eyes before speaking next: "Twilight is the best time for hunters. The setting sun throws off the shadows and the light. It makes it easier for us, believe me. Once we are done here, we shall go."
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[Riverfall Ink] The Finest Canvas (Saib)

Postby Saib on November 19th, 2012, 3:38 pm

Saib started to shrink against the chair as Razkar glared at him, wondering what he had done wrong and how he had angered the Myrian. He started to mutter an apology as he looked down at his hands but his words were cut off by Razkar's answer. He gasped a little, suprised because of the way he, and most others, looked at him and thought of him. "Oh gods, really?!" Saib looked at Razkar in disbelief for a second then a big smile came across his face. "Thank you!! Uh...umm...I'm going to run back to where I'm staying before we go so I can lock Fluffy in my room."Saib thought excitedly about going hunting for the first time then realized he had nothing to hunt with. "Shyke! I don't have a bow or anything Razkar...." Saib bit his lip and watched him as he waited for his reply, hoping not to get another glare or dissapointed sigh.
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Postby Razkar on November 19th, 2012, 7:59 pm

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"Shyke! I don't have a bow or anything Razkar...."

The Myrian - no, not the purple one, the other one - felt the needle on his back pause, and then stop entirely. Herrlock stepped into his sight and he looked up.

"Done."

Razkar got his his feet, wincing slightly at the pain in his newly-tender skin. He could... yes... feel the new skulls. His new offerings to Myri. Herrlock directed him to the mirror in one corner of the room, a full-length affair that Razkar turned his back to, looked over his shoulder...

And smiled.

"You do good work."

"Of course."

Then he turned his attention back to Saib, now looking at him like a lost puppy. He grimaced slightly, but finally just shrugged and began rummaging through his pockets. Who was he to complain? He didn't have a bow when he first arrived in Riverfall, either.

"Go to your lodgings and put the hairball up," he said in their native tongue, and was rewarded with a low growl from Fluffy, "I will wait..."

He found what he was looking for: his cheap wooden pipe and a pouch of tobacco. Good, strong Myrian blend. He packed it carefully into the bowl of the pipe, worked it in his mouth a little to help it find a good groove, and walked to the door.

To Herrlock, he said: "I be back when need more."

He took a candle from near the doorway and lit the pipe carefully, not drawing too quick or too shallow. The tobacco caught and glowed, burning steadily after a few puffs. He inhaled... held it... and with eyes closed... exhaled...

Ahhh... too long...

Finally, he seemed to remember the still-waiting Akalak-slash-Myrian. He faced him and pointed at low wall opposite Riverfall Ink, just tall enough for him to sit at, and said: "I'll be there."
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Postby Saib on November 26th, 2012, 2:34 pm

Saib sighed a bit with relief and nodded, stroking Fluffy to quiet him. As they walked out, he examined the new tattoo on Razkar's back and smiled. "He does do good work. Maybe someday I'll come back for a tattoo." he thought to himself, waving goodbye to Herrlock. He shifted from foot to foot as he watched Razkar smoke, unsure whether to go now and come back or what.

"I'll be there"

Saib nodded and said,
"Ok. I'll be right back!" He started running towards Atri's Place. He wasn't running all out but close to it. He was excited, as well as a little nervous, and thus had a lot of energy. "I might as well burn off the energy now! I know I'm gunna have to stand still for a while while hunting and restlessness could scare stuff away." He panted a bit as he went inside and smiled a bit at Atri as he raised his eyebrows at him. He now realized he was sweaty and blushed a bit. He went to his room and gently tossed Fluffy onto the bed then closed the door securely. "I'm going hunting!"He exclaimed to Atri with a huge grin.

"Have fun!" he replied with a small smile.

Saib nodded and started walking back, this time at a normal pace, so that he could catch his breath and to let himself cool down.
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Postby Razkar on November 26th, 2012, 6:06 pm

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Those passing outside Riverfall Ink that day would have seen the strange and paradoxical sight of a contented Myrian. Razkar was aware of the whispers of those that passed him; he even smiled a little when he heard footsteps speed up noticeably when they passed him. All the better for them not to spoil his relaxation.

He was seated on the wall, but length-ways, so he was almost lying, eyes looking up to the sky. Smoke drifted lazily from the bowl of his pipe, thin wisps and then languid puffs when he exhaled. He was glad he'd kept that pouch safe.

"Her hair spoke of nightfall,
And her lips of red wetness,
When she and I went a-dancing,
Dancing by the moon."


The words spilled out of him lowly, almost as a whisper, then rose to a song as he lay there in the sun, eyes closed. His pipe was between his teeth, smoking gently. An old song he'd learned in Taloba, reminiscent of the wistful soldiers songs known the world over.

"We whirled and we laughed,
We fought and we loved,
But when day broke the night sky,
She faded with the mist."


His eyes opened and he was aware of a purple figure walking swiftly towards him. He took another pull on his pipe, taking the final measure of flavor from the diminished bowl.

"So seek me in deep jungle,
Where the shadows are longest,
Fine me waiting, and waiting,
For the one that I love.

Evermore shall I stand vigil,
Shall hope and keep watchful,
Til jungle does reveal her,
And we are together again..."


Saib stopped before him. Razkar tapped out the ashes from his bowl and pocketed it, jumping to his feet and stretching stiff muscles. He cracked his neck from side to side and smiled up at the taller man, slapping him on the arm.

"We shall go to the Sea."

He said simply, and the started walking, waiting for Saib to follow, beating feet to the grassland ocean beyond the walls.

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[Riverfall Ink] The Finest Canvas (Saib)

Postby Gossamer on December 10th, 2012, 7:11 am

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Character: Razkar
Experience: +4 Observation, +2 Diplomacy, +2 Planning
Lore: Some Myrians are Akalaks. Having Patience. Accepting Outsiders. Offering to help the helpless.


Character: Saib
Experience: +1 Rhetoric, +4 Observation +1 Interrogation
Lore: Admitting ones weaknesses to a stranger. Asking for help.


Additional Notes Have to admit it. I nearly lost it when I started laughing at you mistaking the barber shop for a temple of Myri, Raz. This was an odd little thread. You both, I assume, got the tats and piercing you desired. Thanks for letting me grade it.

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