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Built into the cliffs overlooking the Suvan Sea, Riverfall resides on the edge of grasslands of Cyphrus where the Bluevein River plunges off the plain and cascades down to the inland sea below. Home of the Akalak, Riverfall is a self-supporting city populated by devoted warriors. [Riverfall Codex]

Lost, Lost, and More Lost (Ardea)

Postby Vanari on August 10th, 2013, 8:49 am






Though the beauty of her surroundings lifted her spirits, Vanari could not ignore the incessant protests of her body. The tolls of the day were wearing down on her and each patch of grass began to look as soft and inviting as a bed made of clouds.

When it became clear she could go no further, Ardea wordlessly halted and began clearing an area for a fire. The young Vantha looked about them nervously, unsure of what to do. She was no stranger to camping outdoors, but this wasn't exactly a tranquil forest, nor was she traveling with safety in numbers. This was pure wilderness, and her only guide appeared no older than she.

A sudden motion seemed to confirm her fears, leaving her wholly unprepared for the Kelvic's abrupt transformation. There was a blinding swirl of light, and then a powerful, magnificent golden tiger appeared where the young girl once stood. It crushed something in its jaws; Vanari leaned a bit to the side and saw it was an enormous snake. Then, as swiftly as it all happened. Ardea shifted back into her human form, her dazed expression very much identical to that of her Vantha companion.

Vanari was about to collapse with relief, had her friend not suddenly whelped in pain and stumbled into the clearing, her hand pressing tightly to her side. Oh, gods. She was bleeding!

Their bad luck, it seemed, was far from over. A strange rustling erupted in the grass, and the Vantha only had to take one look at Ardea's horrified expression to know that it probably wasn't a handsome young doctor arriving just in time to save the day.

Well, one can hope.

Thinking fast, she quickly untied the bundle of food and yanked out a large slab of smoked meat. Then, pulling back her arm and holding her breath, she chucked it as hard and far as she could. The meat went spinning in the air and landed somewhere in the jungle foliage. Instantly, whatever had been rustling ominously earlier pelted helter-skelter after the noise.

Having presumably bought them some time, Vanari started frantically ripping off the edge of her tunic. The young Vantha had less than adequate knowledge of first aid, but it was all they had at the moment. She tied the strip of cloth around Ardea's waist once or twice, then threw a second hunk of meat, just for good measure. Actually, might as well get rid of it all. She took the remaining pieces and hurled them as far as possible, all in different directions.

"Are you alright?" Vanari whispered hoarsely, badly shaken but determined to survive. She looked up at a large tree nearby, then stared desperately into Ardea's eyes. "What should we do? Can you fight in your condition? If you can't, maybe we could...I don't know, climb that tree? Petch, this is not good."

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Postby Ardea on August 11th, 2013, 12:12 am

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Absolute agony clouded Ardea's mind. Petch it hurt, more than anything the youthful Kelvic had ever experienced in her brief lifetime. Blinking deliberately, she watched Vanari work rhythmically, feeling as though she was invading in on someone's life, observing through eyes that were not her own. A sudden bout of nausea took her, the whole world seeming to spin as she attempted to steady herself, though she wasn't moving. No longer did she possess the strengthen to restrain the tears that accompanied the pain, they breached her eyes now, cascading down her cheeks and rolling along her neck. Ardea's initial fear had faded now, though her stomach was emanating waves of crippling agony, the Kelvic did not feel her life force being drained. In fact, her heart thumped determinedly in her chest, so hard that she fretted that it might burst out and her lungs took sharp, but bountiful breaths. No, she was not dying.

No sooner had the nausea arrived than it had left. It seemed Vanari's removal of most of the venom had at least done that for her. The whole situation seemed extremely odd to the Kelvic, she had found herself in a place of eerie calm amongst the storm. After a while, she believed that either the pain might have lessened or she would have grown used to it, but it seemingly continued at the same level of utter discomfort and the sharp, frenzied tears continued at the same rate.
"What should we do? Can you fight in your condition? If you can't, maybe we could...I don't know, climb that tree? Petch, this is not good."
Vanari's voice did little to liberate her mind from its torture, however she managed to gather up what little mental strength she had left to reply.
"Fire. Glassbeaks. Use fire."

Clenching her teeth together, Ardea loosened the Vantha's makeshift dressing slightly. Inhaling gradually, the Kelvic shifted once more. If she were to climb the tree, she would require the physical prowess that her most feral form possessed. Although Vanari's dressing felt tight around her torso, she daren't remove it for even through the white, scorching pain, the Kelvic could feel blood gushing from the bite wound. Summoning up every last scrap of strength that still remained inside her, Ardea turned and lumbered towards the tree. Petch. Oh Gods this is going to hurt. With that delightful, optimistic thought settled firmly in her mind, she pushed off from the ground with remarkable agility and gripped the trunk of the tree with her curved talons. Every single muscle in her body screamed at her to stop, to give up, but the Kelvic pressed on, navigating up the branches, moving to any that would hold her weight. At last, she came to a rest, too weak, too bewildered by unspeakable pain to feel proud of what she had achieved.


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Postby Vanari on August 11th, 2013, 4:35 am






Vanari watched wide-eyed as Ardea transformed once more and pounced onto the tree. Heavy muscles rolled beneath golden fur as the Kelvic's claws dug into the trunk, shredding a rain of bark as her enormous bulk disappeared up into the canopy of leaves.

"Just when you think you've seen it all," the Vantha murmured, before diving back into action herself.

Vanari fished out Ardea's carefully crafted bundle of tinder from under some dried grass and threw it in with the pile of food. Already, several things--glassbeaks, as her companion had claimed earlier--could be heard rapidly approaching through the jungle foliage.

There was no time to panic. Vanari simply tied the tablecloth to her own pack--which she thanked all the gods in Mizahar for having not lost--and began scaling the tree herself. It was a bit of a struggle, but by the time the predators finally burst from the leaves, she was already settling down beside the exhausted, bleeding Kelvic.

Vanari sagged against the tree, closing her eyes in a moment of overwhelming relief. That is, until the young Vantha opened her eyes and was greeted by the sight of ashen skin and dark, dried blood. The Kelvic was no longer in the form of a tiger and looked alarmingly fragile, but at least her wound was not fatal and had stopped bleeding under the makeshift bandage.

Below, the horrid predators yipped and yapped, confused at the disappearance if their prey. They were wolfish looking creatures, though leaner and scruffier looking than the arctic beasts she was accustomed too in the North. Somehow, it was a relief; these probably were not the glassbeaks Ardea had spoke of, and therefore not as deadly. It was all Vanari could do to hope they would lose interest and eventually go away. Clearly, they couldn't climb the tree, and perhaps were unable to get much of a scent as well. As she waited, Ardea's steady breathing flowing softly beside her, she slowly, slowly started nodding off.

A bell or two later, Vanari flinched as a leaf fell on her face, startling her awake. She looked below, holding her breath. The wild dogs were gone, presumably to chase after easier dinners. She sighed in relief, then looked over at the Kelvic.

"Ardea," Vanari whispered. "I'm going to have to get you down. I'm sorry, I know this is going to hurt."

She waited for a few heartbeats, just to make sure the glassbeaks had truly decided to leave them alone. Then she gently dropped her pack, along with all the tavern fare. Plop, plop, plop. The various breads, cheeses, and meats fell clumsily to the floor beside her belongings, rolling haphazardly in different directions.

Vanari shook out the table cloth and tied one end to the sturdiest branch she could find, before turning back to Ardea's prone form. She was a little hesitant at first, knowing how much the Kelvic prided in her self-reliance, but this was no time to be polite. Carefully balancing herself on the large branches, she hovered over the girl and pulled her as gently as she could into an awkward embrace. Then she placed Ardea's arms over her shoulders and wrapped one hand around the Kelvic, while the other clutched nervously at the tablecloth.

There was no point in waiting. It had to be done, before her palms got too sweaty.

Vanari took a deep breath, tightened her hold on Ardea, and then tipped them both over the branch. As they fell from the tree, she held her death grip on the tablecloth and they violently stopped only a few feet from the ground. The tigress cried out in pain and Vanari's arm felt like it was being ripped right from its socket, but the worst of it was over.

The tablecloth suddenly came undone and the two tumbled roughly onto the ground. Vanari was pretty sure something was very not right about her left arm, but she scrambled to her feet all the same. Laying out her cloak, she carefully helped Ardea position herself over it, then she grabbed the tablecloth and quickly collected all their supplies, stuffing it all into her pack.

There was little more she could do for wound, but since it was a bite it would not require stitches. Vanari removed the bloodied cloth, tore free some more, and tied the fresh strip around the tigress's side with her one good hand, using her teeth to complete the knot.

As soon this task was finished, she sighed with immense relief. Taking out the flint and stone from her pack, she used the bundle of kindle Ardea had gathered earlier and set it ablaze, stoking it until it became a healthy sized fire. She would stay awake until Ardea was strong enough to take care of herself, and then...well, they would see.
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Postby Ardea on August 12th, 2013, 12:31 am

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Ardea barely registered anything that had happened around her, but she knew that they were no longer in danger and, as the Vantha pressed a fresh piece of cloth to her wound, the kelvic was overwhelmed by a deep sense of gratitude and trust. Alarm washed over her as Vanari's head lowered gradually onto her porcelain, lightly-freckled legs. Clenching her teeth together and crashing through the pain, she reached a panicked finger forehead and pressed it to her ally's neck.

Thump... Thump... Suddenly she realised how silly her action had been, of course Vanari wasn't dead! Nobody just died like that, if she hadn't been in so much pain, she might have chuckled. Blaming her rash decision on the agony that hung over her mind like a darkening thunder cloud, she lay back on the cape, arching her back in a feline manner. The kelvic's naked, pale frame warmed by the soft glow of the fire, she cast one solemn glance at the ebon sky, at the little sparks that floated up into the night and allowed herself to fall into the welcoming embrace of darkness.

OOCFeel free to RP anything you want to happen during the night, but I'm just going to skip to morning
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Ardea was awakened early the following morning, her exposed form shivering against the harsh chill of the morrow. Gradually, her eyelids fluttered open and for a brief, blissful moment, she forget about the previous night's events. Her gaze fell to Vanari, still deep in slumber, her head resting on Ardea's legs and, from the twinge in her feet, she knew that she'd been there a while. Surprisingly, her pain had subdued, now only a dull ache in the back of her mind, that she was able to deal with well.

Quivering, Ardea carefully adjusted Vanari, moving her head carefully onto the floor. Freed, the kelvic rose onto her feet, nude against the bleak morning sky. Taking a tentative step forward, she scanned the surrounding grassland for her regalia. It did not take long for her to identify it and she approached the area with utmost caution. Bending down, she examined her torn clothing critically, none of it was wearable. Cursing under her breath, her gaze fell upon the crushed torso of the snake. She tensed. Then lowered herself carefully to the ground,
"I'm sorry." She murmured gently into the breeze.

Looking upon it now she identified it as a Copperhead and felt a little guilty for murdering it, even though it had been a split-second reaction. However she did not have time to mull over the carcass, her shuddering had almost doubling since she had awoken. Unsure what to do, she picked up her- it couldn't really be called a shirt anymore, it was more... bloodied shreds of material. Petch. That was my favourite shirt. Stifling a sigh, Ardea's gaze turned back to the dwindling embers of the campfire that her friend had made, what felt like, a lifetime ago.

Retrieving the flint and steel from the ground nearby, she reignited the remains of the fire, picking some more grass and dry leaves from the tree to add to the blaze. Once she had completed her task, she carefully removed the makeshift dressing and examined the damage. It had healed well overnight, but it was by no means any less visible, the area was heavily swollen and caked in dried blood, but she was no longer bleeding. Adding the used dressing to the flames, she shifted into an array of lights, grateful for the warmth of her golden fur. Positioning herself on the cape, she looked much like an overgrown house cat. The tigress then nudged Vanari gently onto her flank, so that the Vantha could use her silky, dense fur as a pillow. Finally, basking in the revived warmth of the campfire, Ardea once more allowed herself into the clutches of slumber.


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Postby Ardea on August 12th, 2013, 10:29 pm


FIN

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Lost, Lost, and More Lost (Ardea)

Postby Magpie on September 8th, 2013, 9:23 pm

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Vanari :
XP:
Observation +5
Subterfuge +1
Socialization +5
Medicine +2
Wilderness Survival +2

Lores:
Akalaks: Intimidating Slabs of Muscle
Escaping Uncomfortable Attentions
Riverfall: A Beautiful City
Ardea of the Kelvics: Owed a Debt
The Joy of a New Friendship
The White Crane
Lapis Park
The Sea of Grass: Beautiful but Deadly
Wrapping a Snake Bite
Starting a Fire with Flint
Staying Focused While in Danger

Additional: Thanks so much for working with me on changing that scene!


Ardea :
XP:
Observation +5
Subterfuge +2
Socialization +2
Leadership +1
Wilderness Survival +2
Unarmed Combat +1
Climbing +1

Lores:
Identifying a Vantha
Men: More Talk than Action
Vanari of Skyglow Hold: Traveler and Artist
Enduring Human Niceties
Testing the Mettle of a New Acquaintance
The Novelty of Friendship
Pushing Back the Predator
Rejecting Amorous Looks
Behaving for the Sake of a Friend
Escape, Rather than Maul
A Change of Scenery to Calm the Nerves
Wilderness Survival: Building a Fire
Sea of Grass: Stay Alert or Get Ambushed
The Regret of a Slain Enemy

Additional: Vanari and I spoke about changing the Glassbeaks scene, as they wouldn’t be frightened off by fire, would have assuredly found you in a tree, and would have eaten you as you slept in the night. However, since you don’t do much with the glassbeaks yourself, we can pass off your ramblings as delusional. Additionally, we’re saying the snake bite wasn’t poisonous, as sucking the venom from a wound doesn’t actually work.


Notes :
Phew! I'll admit, I was a bit skeptical when you two decided to venture out into the Sea of Grass, but I'm glad you stayed true to the very real danger of the place. And an additional thank you to splitting up your threads; it does make grading a bit painful when you're plodding through a massive thread.

Sad to see you guys didn't stay in Riverfall, but I hope to see you again!


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