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You're really rocking the elephant. And you know what they say about long memories... oh wait, I forgot. There are just a couple tweaks to be made so it's sparkling and ready for roleplaying:
1. Birth Place: Since you have your starting location listed as Syliras, it would be helpful to include that he was born in Falyndar.
2. Language: As a kelvic you get to be fluent in your animal language. Typically people take the animal Latin name (or genus) and make it sound like a language name. For example for an elephant it might be: Loxodon
3. Mother’s (mouse) lifespan: Since his mother was a mouse kelvic, she would only live to be about 2 or 3 at most (from Wikipedia in regards to the ‘house mouse’). Additionally, you’d have to factor in the fact that she has to be an adult to have offspring. Therefore, she would have died maybe when he was 2.
4. Syka (History): Syka is actually a very very new settlement. Its location was discovered in-game and it was founded around Summer 516 AV. Therefore, we don’t let any new PC ‘start’ there or have history there, unless they have only just arrived upon its shores. Taloba and Zinrah are both acceptable cities in Falyndar, and Taloba even has a few kelvics among its many Myrians.
Once you have made the necessary changes, please PM / Private Message me (using the envelope button) and I'll remove this intervention. I'm also happy to answer any questions you may have.
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