Hay Dev I read over the sheet and see a few problems.
“Various” Located in your language, should be common.
You need to label one language: Fluent, Basic, Poor
You’re missing fifteen points from the human’s racial bonus. Make sure not to split up those fifteen racial points!
((Optional.)) You’re missing a family heirloom. It’s an item that means something to your character.((It doesn’t have to, but most like it that way.)) BTW, its value can’t be more than fifty gold.
((Optional, you don’t need the mizas or the house/horse.))I see you didn’t pick a house or horse. If you don’t want either of those you can start with six hundred mizas, instead of the regular one hundred.
You’re missing two starting lores. Lores aren’t skills, but more like knowledge your character can expand one. I would suggest “Being righteous is the only way of life.” and “The quest for knowledge has no bounds.”
Other than those qualms, its looks great!
