Nala U'Surabi

[Nala U'Surabi]

Physical Description Name: Nala U'Surabi Race:Kelvic Age:3 Birthday:12th, Summer of 509 Character Concept Human form~ She is 5'7 and weighs 90 pounds. She has long golden hair( almost like a leopard) with dark golden curls. Her eyes are blue and are like a leopard's. Deadly looking. She has beautiful lips but her canines are like the leopards. In her human form she wears a short blue dress that can be easily slip up since its so light. It supports her beautiful figure. Cheetah form~ She stands 63 cm tall, with the unique pattern of a cheetah. The only difference between her and any other cheetah is she has beautiful blue eyes. Her chest not like the rest, very fluffy and what looks like a heart. Personality~ Like a cheetah she observe what's around her. Intelligent and mature. She protects people she loves and helps others in need. When you're on her good side she'll be her silly loving self but with strangers and enemies, she gives a cold shoulder. She is quick to battle people mess with her and she has a temper. She forgets her humanity sometimes. Life Goals~ Her life goals is to find a bondmate. And start a happy little family. She wants to be something great. Character History The birth of Nala was funny to her parents, Lisa and Monte. Both Kelvics in Endrykas. Lisa was a albino Squirrel, Monte was a field mouse. Both fell in love when they found the same nut and argued over it. By the next week, Lisa was pregnant. When Nala came they were excited to start a family but when Nala first changed forms it frighten them but it was humorous. They loved introducing their daughter as a cheetah since they were both rodents. But the people of Endeykas didn't find it funny, they were afraid she would eat their animals, horses and Striders particularly. So when Nala was old enough to start her adventure, she did. Nala started off in the Sea of Grass where she wasn't really welcomed. It was to dangerous for her( in her human form). So she turned to the Riverfall. She became a slave for a Akalak. She just turned 2( her reproductive age). She had her first child, A Akalak boy she couldn't look at since it was a pain giving birth to him. Since the Akalak man wasn't her bondmate she wanted to fled. She soon did and headed for Syliras. There she wasn't really welcomed by the Jamouras. But they let her stay. She learned how to survive there and the language and other stuff from them. But her time there was mostly spent with a young Jamoura... She found the the the baby in a very bad situation. She couldn't recall what happened because she came at the last moment. Just miles away from Spires layed five dead Jamouras. A alpha male, his females-three of them- and a very young Jamoura. All were dead. She predicted a predator attacked. But no one could take them all down, a weapon had to be used. She observes them in respect and disappointment. She thought someone would think it was her doing. But she couldn't take down these intelligent animals. When she started heading off, a grunt came from one of the females. Between her body and the ground was a baby Jamoura, looking about Three to six months. She took the child and for some reason the name Rasha came to her and that's what she called the baby. Nala new that it would be difficult raising a baby Jamoura. She was a cheetah. But she manage to get through it, and is still doing it. NPCs: Secret : Rasha is very young. Born in the spring of 512 AV. She thinks of Nala as her mother more and is very clingy to her. At her young age she can barely crawl but she uses her hands mostly as a tool. When Nala is in her cheetah form, she makes sure Rasha is holding on tightly around her neck. Possessions 1 Set of Clothing Clothing is entirely optional and varying in the Spires. -Simple Shirt -Simple Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Cloak/coat -Simple Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Wood) -Brush (Wood) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel Heirloom: A unique acorn that has a gold and silver color all over it, it's a necklace. 100 Golden Mizas Housing: Permanent Housing There are 3 Residential Neighborhoods resting on the Inner Petals. Homes will often be very akin to things found in nature, and manufactured items and materials are rare. Glass and metal are nearly nonexistent. Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Skills, Lores, Magics, Gnosis, Languages Common Skills: Skill EXP Total Proficiency Intelligence # 8SP #8 Novice Wilderness Survival # 26SP #26 Competent Hunting # 10RB, # 16SP #26 Competent Fluent Language:Common Basic Language:Jamourab Grunts Poor Language:N/A Helpful Lores: (Pick 2) Lore of The Spires Layout Lore of Jamouran Culture Thread List

[Kraken]

Hi there!

I'm Kraken, your friendly neighbourhood Character Sheet Liaison! I'm here to help make your experience on Mizahar go as smoothly as possible. Now, there are just a few quick points we need to sort out in order for your character to move forward. If you have any questions whatsoever, please don't hesitate to ask!

Good work on your character sheet, Nala. You've created an interesting character, and I look forward to see her develop during her time in the Spires. I've just included some important notes for you to address before you continue forward.

• Gender: While it may seem obvious, we do ask that you explicitly state your PC's gender on your character sheet.
• Possessions: Please be sure to choose either a cloak or a coat.
• Housing: Please be sure to state exactly where your PC is living. Currently, you just have template text.
• History: Nakivaks in Riverfall cannot escape. They are fitted with a bracelet which locates where they are at all times, and no Nakivak has been known to escape in recent times. Please review the lore I linked above, and revise your history.
  
  • You also state that, "She soon did and headed for Syliras" but then speak of her in the Spires. This is just a small typo. If you could change "Syliras" to "the Spires," that would be wonderful.
  • You'll need to check with the ST of The Spires regarding the dead Jamoura your PC came across. This may not be realistic for the domain, and your storyteller will want to know about any major deaths occurring in her region.
• NPC: You will need to apply for your Jamoura NPC travelling companion at the Help Desk. If approved, you'll receive a Storyteller Secrets link to put in your profile. You can find an example NPC application on the Q&A thread.

Once you address these notes and make the proper changes, please send me a private message and I'll gladly remove this post.

Thanks, and happy writing!

Kraken