Closed Clumsy Thief (Eleazar)

Amora finds herself in the same situation she seems to always get in, luckily someone is nearby to help.

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Clumsy Thief (Eleazar)

Postby Amora Jade on March 28th, 2015, 6:47 pm

The young thief watched as the injured boy stumbled his way across the room to his bed, she almost jumped to help him there but she figured he could make it on his own. The loud thud that was made when his knees hit the floor made Amora wince. She knew the amount of pain he was in had to be completely unbearable, and it was all her fault.

Slowly she entered his home while she watched him search through his things. On instinct she closed the door behind her, it wasn’t safe to leave it open in a city like that. The cold air was beginning to settle on her and chill her to the bone. It was insane to her how cold still air could be, the fire needed to be lit fast if they had any hope of not catching pneumonia.

Amora picked up the tools Eleazar pulled from the bag underneath his bed before returning to the hearth. Beside it a pile of firewood sat ready to be used. The thief set the flint, steel, and tinder on the stone of the base and gathered three pieces of the wood from the stack. The girl moved her hair from in front of her shoulders to behind to keep it out of the way as she stacked the wood neatly in the firepit and positioned herself in front of it comfortably. She wasn’t at all unfamiliar with lighting a fire in a hearth; she and her mother did it in their home on a daily basis, so it wouldn’t be too much of a task.

Without caring how much more filth was on her, she used her hand to sweep away the ashes in the bottom to keep them from interrupting the process of lighting the wood- the last thing she wanted was to blow into the sparks and be blinded by the ash that would jump back at her. With her right hand the scooped up the flint and steel and in her left she grabbed the tinder she’d be lighting. She set the tinder down in front of her on the stone and began to strike the lighting tools against each other. The familiar scratching sound of them hitting each other filled the air around her, along with the visible presence of her breath. The cold had gotten to her, it caused her body to shake and her teeth to chatter slightly.

A small spark jumped from the tools and landed on the tinder, but she wasn’t fast enough to get a flame going. With only slight hesitation she began again with the rapid motion to get another spark. By the third appearance of one she was able to being her face down fast enough to start the fire. Quickly she transferred the small flame into the hearth and added more tinder to keep it going. It didn’t take long for the flames to begin to take an interest in the wood and eat away at it, leaving a black trail behind.

The wonderful warmth kept the thief still for more than a few ticks. It felt amazing against her cold, bruised skin. She held her hands up to the hearth, palms facing outwards, to try and regain the feeling through the numbness that had settled in them. Amora looked back at the boy, “You should get closer to it until you warm up, you look awful.

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Clumsy Thief (Eleazar)

Postby Eleazar Victor Syroin on April 2nd, 2015, 10:26 pm

Somewhere in his subconscious, Eleazar had noted the door lock and the he fire tools being snatched up. Resting against his bed he listened to them scratch together till the crackle of flame on wood followed by the scent of smoke was achieved. It was almost annoying how easily Jade had managed to get the fire going. He was normally fumbling about with such things for a quarter of bell before a spark presented itself. Either way with the fire now lit the room began to slowly heat up. Soft glows casually wormed their way over his eyelids before the sound of the females voice called out to him.

" Urgh, Ay look lovely~"

Despite his sarcasm, the thief did attempt to lift his head from the bed. A loud crack signalled that his neck objected to the notion, coaxing a pained groan from his throat. Ouch. Atleast his spine had been realigned. Digits massaged at the ache as Eleazar slumped forwards away from the bed onto his hands. Blinking at the light now ramming itself into his tired open eyes, the golden silhouette of the woman he had helped filled his vision. With a little more effort he half walked half crawled over to the warmth of the fire pit. Laying down next to her, his head near Jade's knees, the teen curled himself around the edge of the hearth. Suitably comfortable, his muscles relaxed again, letting his eyes fall shut.

Today had been a long day and his body was exhausted. Rubbing at one of cuts along his cheeks, the thief flinched when his prodding found his right eye. The seemingly innocent bruise had swollen up to the beginning of a beautiful black eye. Well shyke. That must have been from when the axe had been thrown at them. His nose hurt too. Urgh, come tomorrow he was going to hate himself. Especially if any of these went nasty. Oh well at least he was nice and warm now. Yawning loudly, Eleazar almost dosed off there before he remembered about his guest. Jolting himself awake, he craned his head to look up at his partner in crime for the day.

“Ye can stay fer ' night if ya want. Ay'm not goin' ta chuck ya out, not when it's gettin' cold 'n' dark. At won't sit right wi' mi head.”

Settling back down again, he pillowed his head against his arm. The thief gave a soft yawn and lay still as his breathing steadily deepened. After a few chimes a snore broke free of his throat signalling the beginning of a peaceful dreamless sleep.

OOCQuick reply so we can get this thread wrapped up. I like the way it ended up ending and yes Eleazar is a snorer sorry. Hope Amora can sleep through that. :P
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Postby Amora Jade on April 7th, 2015, 3:34 am

Eleazar’s half comment made Amora laugh a bit. It was the same thing he had done before when they were outside after she had dragged him out of immediate danger. She winced at the loud popping sound his neck made when he moved, then watched as he crawled his way over to the hearth to get closer to the fire and heat up. The beautiful symphony of crackling and the hypnotic way the flames danced over the wood had the thief in a trance.

Exhaustion and pain began to overwhelm her as the heat thawed the numbness. It was nice to be warm, but it was also nice to not feel all that hurt from falling through the roof. Images of the house caving in on them began to flash in her mind as she watched the fire. It was absolutely terrifying to think about. They could have been killed.. over bread.

The boy’s voice startled her and snapped her right out of the trance the flames put her in. She hadn’t even considered leaving once she had the fire started, though she didn’t think about the fact she would be actually staying there either. Her eyes trailed over the slim body of the bruised up boy. The bruising on his face looked awful and he seemed to be completely out of it. It was a good thing she decided to help him out by starting a fire for him, he probably would have just fallen asleep right there beside his bed to never wake up again.

It only took a few moments for Eleazar to pass out and begin snoring so loudly the entire building shook (not really- but still, loud.) Amora shook her head and grinned before adding a couple more pieces of firewood to the hearth. The thief looked around the boy’s apartment, and let her eyes settle on his bed. There was no way she was going to sleep on the ground after a day like that- she decided it wouldn’t hurt to sleep there for the night since he was already on the ground.

OOCYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYY!!!! Done.

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Clumsy Thief (Eleazar)

Postby Ashar on May 9th, 2015, 3:17 am

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Skill XP Earned
Observation 3
Stealth 1
Running 2
Larceny 1
Endurance 3
Climbing 1
Acrobatics 2
Body Building 1
Wilderness Survival 1

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Larceny: Heavier Objects Need Exit Strategies
Stealth: Spatial Awareness Helps
Eleazar: Strange Concerns
Eleazar: Fast and Far Runner
Eleazar: Prioritizes Survival
Eleazar: Good Intentions
Acrobatics: Running Before a Leap Gains Distance
Climbing: Using Another for a Boost
Climbing: Pulling Another Up Onto a Surface
Endurance: Regulating Breathing
Street Law: An Eye for an Eye


Eleazar Something Something
Experience
Skill XP Earned
Observation 2
Brawling 2
Running 2
Larceny 1
Land Navigation 1
Climbing 1
Acrobatics 3
Endurance 2

Lores
Larceny: Taking Advantage of Distractions
Brawling: The Power of a Brick’s Edge
Brawling: Too Much Force Can Kill a Man
Climbing: Boosting Another for Height
Climbing: Using Another’s Hands to Pull Oneself
Endurance: Regulating Breathing
Street Law: An Eye for an Eye
Street Law: Don’t Tempt an Armed Man
Acrobatics: Slowing a Slip on Uneven Surfaces
Jade: Emotionally Impulsive
Jade: Possesses a Moral Conscience
Jade: Reciprocates Aid



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