Closed Delving into Divinity [Lynx]

Before he can fulfill a request, Jek must first learn more about the gods who walk the city.

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Built into the cliffs overlooking the Suvan Sea, Riverfall resides on the edge of grasslands of Cyphrus where the Bluevein River plunges off the plain and cascades down to the inland sea below. Home of the Akalak, Riverfall is a self-supporting city populated by devoted warriors. [Riverfall Codex]

Delving into Divinity [Lynx]

Postby Mayhem1 on November 3rd, 2014, 3:19 am

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You're an excited PC roaming around a thread.

You're not paying attention that the story's over.

Then...BAM! You're hit with a Grade.

I'm Mayhem, the ever-present Junior ST of Cyphrus. If you have any questions or concerns regarding this grade, please don't hesitate to shoot me a PM! And please, please remove or edit your grading request once you see this. Thank you!

 
Ashar
XP
  • Socialization - 2
  • Reading - 2
  • Observation - 4
LORES
  • Copying is a Job
  • Lynx: A Copyist
  • Lynx: No Last Name
  • Lynx: Interested in Leth
  • Difference Between Creative Writing and Copying
  • Copying: Pen Knife
  • Leth's Story
  • Valterrian: Plunged the World Into Darkness
  • Spring 1st: Moon Turns Red
MISCELLANEOUS
    I loved the inner dialogue between Ashar and Jek, and the fact that this thread took place while the darker brother was in control. It was overall very interesting to read!


 
Lynx
XP
  • Socialization - 3
  • Copying - 3
  • Teaching - 1
  • Storytelling - 1
  • Observation - 4
LORES
  • Ashar/Jek: Father is an Author
  • Jek: Interested in Akajia and Wysar
  • Jek: Curious About Leth
MISCELLANEOUS
  • I liked the detail that went into describing how Lynx got ready to copy, and how you wrote her skills as that of a novice, and still managed to keep it from getting boring. Very nice!


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- Mayhem
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