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Ashka ran her hands over the sides of her canoe, having stowed most of the contents in and around their tent. She found no flaws or problems, so she placed the paddles inside it and called Chaya over. They both leaned in to shove it down the beach and out onto the rising tide. Chaya jumped in first, taking her position in the bow, and then Ashka pulled herself up, over the stern, and grabbed her paddle to propel it out into the blue waters of the bay. She dug the paddle into the clear water and held it there, and thirty feet of canoe pivoted around the paddle and wound up parallel to the beach.
Unfortunately, although showy, that kind of turn wasn't one a more skilled sailor would have chosen, because it also killed all the canoe's forward speed. Ashka heaved with all her might to get it moving again before the tide dumped them back on the sand. It was hard work, paddling alone, and her arms ached by the time the canoe had built up a decent amount of speed again. Chaya squeaked as a fish darted under the canoe, and leaned over to watch it, rocking the boat in the water despite the outriggers. Next, the kid bobbed up to watch the shore, trying to name each of the buildings that they passed. "There's the Mercantile with the boot centipede! And there's..."
Ashka paid only partial attention. The rest of it was focused on keeping the canoe steady, and afloat, pulling outward against the tide, and forward along the beach. The sound of a dog barking its defence against an intruder broke through her focus, as did a particularly loud squeal from Chaya. She looked over at the shore and saw the dome of woven bamboo just visible under the tree line, another canoe pulled up on the beach, and another young woman working near it. Her own canoe drifted shorewards before she thought. "Hello?" she called, as she made the turn steeper and more deliberate, so that it would be easier to launch again later. "We're heading along the coast to see what's there - do you want to come?" A few more strokes and the bow of the canoe would nudge firmly into the beach allowing them to climb off - or another person to climb in.
WordcoundWords: 392
Running total: 4491
Ashka ran her hands over the sides of her canoe, having stowed most of the contents in and around their tent. She found no flaws or problems, so she placed the paddles inside it and called Chaya over. They both leaned in to shove it down the beach and out onto the rising tide. Chaya jumped in first, taking her position in the bow, and then Ashka pulled herself up, over the stern, and grabbed her paddle to propel it out into the blue waters of the bay. She dug the paddle into the clear water and held it there, and thirty feet of canoe pivoted around the paddle and wound up parallel to the beach.
Unfortunately, although showy, that kind of turn wasn't one a more skilled sailor would have chosen, because it also killed all the canoe's forward speed. Ashka heaved with all her might to get it moving again before the tide dumped them back on the sand. It was hard work, paddling alone, and her arms ached by the time the canoe had built up a decent amount of speed again. Chaya squeaked as a fish darted under the canoe, and leaned over to watch it, rocking the boat in the water despite the outriggers. Next, the kid bobbed up to watch the shore, trying to name each of the buildings that they passed. "There's the Mercantile with the boot centipede! And there's..."
Ashka paid only partial attention. The rest of it was focused on keeping the canoe steady, and afloat, pulling outward against the tide, and forward along the beach. The sound of a dog barking its defence against an intruder broke through her focus, as did a particularly loud squeal from Chaya. She looked over at the shore and saw the dome of woven bamboo just visible under the tree line, another canoe pulled up on the beach, and another young woman working near it. Her own canoe drifted shorewards before she thought. "Hello?" she called, as she made the turn steeper and more deliberate, so that it would be easier to launch again later. "We're heading along the coast to see what's there - do you want to come?" A few more strokes and the bow of the canoe would nudge firmly into the beach allowing them to climb off - or another person to climb in.
WordcoundWords: 392
Running total: 4491