(Archery Range) See, Aim, Fire! (Open)

by **Risa Moontide** on September 23rd, 2011, 6:58 am

Risa gathered the blackened bolts from the ground. One by one she put the round balls back into their pouch, carefully cupping her hand to let the bullets roll out of her hand. They clang together as they fell together, Risa focusing on the movement more than the conversation or setting around her anymore. She looked back from her distraction, focusing back on Aiven.

Risa divided the rest of the fish among the two, eating her part in the warm sun of the shooting range. She planned to walk back to her ship earlier today, get some rest on boat and probably prepare for a long fishing day tomorrow. Still, Risa wanted to get moving. Fala pecked at the air several times, motioning for Risa to hand-feed him another sliver of fish. Risa did so and enjoyed the rest of the meeting with this curious archer.

Finally Risa wished the girl a friendly good-bye and gathered the rest of her things. She left the archery range satisfied for the friendly encounter, another piece of Wind Reach solved.

by **Indigo** on October 6th, 2011, 5:39 pm

Character: Aiven
Skills: +1 Archery Planning, +1 Observation, +1 Interogation,
Lore: Ignoring Archery protocol causes injury, Sharing your culture, Pessimism,

Character: Risa
Skills: +1 Slingshot, +1 Ammunition Prep, +1 Oservation, +1 Hiking, +1 Bird Handling,
Lore: Learning the Slingshot, Determination, Ignoring Archery protocol causes injury, Sharing your culture, Optimism,

Notes: Risa you asked for critique, so, I'd recommend trying not to repeat words so closely together as it confuses the reader. "She eyed up the location, choosing a location near the end to practice." Risa is fun with a charming personality. I'd love to see more of her interactions with the Inarta.
If you have any questions or comments about your grade, please don't hesitate to PM me.