Rocky relations (Eoin)

Trying to take a bath and calm her straying thoughts, Rista gets harrassed by other yasi when Eoin enters the bath...

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Rocky relations (Eoin)

Postby Rista on September 20th, 2011, 5:54 pm

oocOkay, sounds good. :) I've thoroughly enjoyed this, you're an amazing writer and Eoin is just awesome in every way.. Thanks for playing with me!

Avoiding tactic as it might have been from the start, it still didn't take many words from the man before he had the full attention of the dark-haired girl. Her face was calm, the eyes unreadable and dark but that she listened was clear as her features didn't shift and change like normally; she remained still and quiet, taking in what he said and let her mind process it quietly. It wasn't just the words he said but how he spoke, the tone of his voice... Ah, they were similar. Not the same, their situations couldn't have been more different, but they were sharing something none the less. It was hard to say what it was exactly. Where Eoin was calm and patient Rista was restless and flammable, where she stood out he blended in, he was of a high caste, she was of a low one... In may ways they were polar opposites, and yet she somehow felt secure in his company. Could it be that there was no deceit in either of them? Maybe it was the honesty they shared, a wish to do good and to belong. Perhaps there was the uncertainty as well, that lingering wonder whether they truly belonged where they were...

Sensing his anxiety as the voice faded away, Rista acted without really thinking. It felt like she had to do something about that lost tone of his, she didn't like the loneliness she thought she saw on his face. The short girl pushed herself away from her side of the basin and waded through the water towards her friend, her eyes never leaving his face even as a faint, almost unnoticeable smile touched upon her lips. When she got close enough she lifted a damp, copper-skinned hand from the water and reached up, stretching the hand out until she could place it on his head, the short-cropped ginger hair soft and tickling under her fingers. Her stomach churned nervously, not used to being close to people and certainly not to touching them so familiarly like this, but.. He really was so similar to Karva sometimes.

"I like you" she said bluntly as the smile grew and warmed the young features. "You're nice, and you helped me even thought you didn't have to. I don't know your mother or your sister, and I don't know what they might be feeling... But at the very least, to me you couldn't be more welcome." It was a little embarrassing to speak like she did, but the words passed over her tongue before she could stop them. Her voice sounded so assertive, strong and determined.. It was a good thing that he didn't know how vulnerable she was on the inside, ready to break after lowering her protective shields so much. Rista was a lonely girl, used to standing on her own and defending herself against the harsh climate within the yasiry. As a consequence of going against the unspoken rules and the pecking order she didn't have many friends, none that she could fully trust or depend on.

Her words of friendship that had been extended to Eoin was as much a question as it was an offer; he was her friend, but was she a friend to him too? It could so easily become a one-sided situation where someone only gave or received. She didn't want that. She wasn't actually sure what she wanted, other than to perhaps see him smile back at her... That would be plenty.

Her hand lingered for a while on his head, but soon began to retreat again, withdrawing uncertainly as she didn't know what he felt about this intrusion of his private space. The smile wobbled a little, eyelids lowering to shield the blackness of the gaze behind dark lashes. This was the only thing she could do. A brief touch, a few well meant words... She could only hope that they would be received in a good way. A yasi like her didn't have anything more to give; she could only be herself and hope that it was enough.
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Rocky relations (Eoin)

Postby Eoin on September 23rd, 2011, 12:37 am

oocNah, I should be saying that about you and Rista. Whenever you feel like having another thread for these two, just let me know. I’ll always be up for it. :)

It was comforting the way Rista’s hand rested on top of his too orange hair, as if to reassure him of his genealogy. The gesture was so strange and unexpected that Eoin completely caught off guard, his attentive gaze the clearest indicator. Her words were frank and thoughtful, but were not completely successful at dissuading his feelings of inadequacy. If anything, he felt it was generous of the Yasi to regard him so highly after what he had done to her. Another moment passed before the man to realize what had transpired was more than kind words, but an offer he had long dismissed. His red lashes parted gently in surprise, holding their position until Rista began to retreat, her hand and gaze falling. A strange silence surfaced as he considered the idea, assessing his act of retribution in comparison to the harm he inflicted. To Eoin, he wasn’t forgiven, not for lashing out and taking advantage of another. However, could he leave Rista alone now, what with her vulnerabilities and trust resting delicately within his palm? He felt as though he was entrusted with a promise, an obligation, but he knew that the source of his reasoning was the loneliness that restricts his heart.

“Rista.” He addressed the Yasi with a tone of sincerity and warmth that matched her strength. When met with her gaze, he returned a small, muted smile. “As do I.” His words were a bit misplaced, but the thought was there; the intent of friendship. Either way, it was expected that the man lacked certain eloquence with spoken language. Eoin then dwelled in the comfortable atmosphere, feeling the cool waters against his skin, relaxing his guard if for the moment. However, the thought of the kitchens returned to him within minutes and pulled him from his brief reverie. Nonetheless, the man did not feel reluctant, but rather, the responsibility and desire to return. Even so, he wished to spend more time with Rista, if only in silent company.

“I must return now.” Eoin spoke precisely, but almost too succinctly for the Yasi to gain any more information. There were remnants of his smile in his eyes, now a livelier green, as he bid his farewell. “I will see you again.” With a promise and an undertone of stubborn determination, the Avora left.
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Rocky relations (Eoin)

Postby Indigo on October 6th, 2011, 4:15 pm

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Character: Rista
Skills: +1 Brawling, +1 Unarmed Combat, +1 Socialization, +1 Storytelling
Lore: Hurt by a hand on your shoulder, Being bullied, Feeling guilty, Standing up for Eoin, Coming of Age, Growing up, Introspection, Making a friendly gesture

Character: Eoin
Skills: +1 Cooking, +1 Brawling, +1 Unarmed Combat, +1 Socialization
Lore: Feeling guilty, Avora to the Rescue, Standing up for Rista, Using Might instead of Right, Being checked out, Offering medicine, Introspection, Reluctant sharing, To trust or not to trust

Notes: Great thread! I liked how Rista shared her story so openly. Eoin, your PC's choice to use strength instead of status makes for good insight. My only complaint is the thread was too short! I can't wait to read more threads from both of you.
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