[Issues found by Harrier] Cherie Meltagh

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Cherie Meltagh

Postby Cherie on January 3rd, 2012, 9:38 am

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Physical Information
Slender, delicate and short, butsurprisingly strong. With unblemished pale skin apart from the pale scar on her back stretching from her shoulder blade to her hip. However her most striking features are her eyes, which are beautifully shaped, with light green irises. Cherie's dark red hair comes up to her waist, when she is hunting she often wears a leather strip to prevent her hair from falling into her eyes.

Race
Inarta, Caste- Chiet (A commoner)

Birthday & Age
Season of Spring, day 8, 493 AV - 19 Years old

Gender
Female

Personality
Cherie's personality can vary depending on her mood and surroundings. When she is with people, Cherie is secretive but friendly. There is an air of mystery around her that many people lack. It is difficult to upset her but she will act if she sees something which she believes is wrong. Cherie is very close-minded and stubborn, often refusing to admit she is wrong. Cherie often needs time alone to think.

Ethics
She believes in the equality of all race and would never harm a disadvantaged being for fun.

Likes
Being with her eagle (not a wind eagle) River, practicing archery, being alone.

Dislikes
She hates it when people eavesdrop and are nosy. She also hates people that kill/harm any living creature for fun.

Pre-Creation
She was born in the high altitudes of Wind Reach, in Mount Skyinarta. Cherie was raised by her father's older sister for her parents both went out hunting and never came back when Cherie was only a few seasons old. Her aunt is competent in archery and taught Cherie the basics of it.


 
Possessions
Equipment
• 1 Set of Clothing (Vinati, Bryda, and Katinu included)
• 1 Waterskin
• 1 Backpack
• 1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
• Food for a week or 1 bottle of embalming fluid (for Nuits)
• 1 eating knife
• Flint & Steel

Family Heirloom
Her fathers archery set (recurve bow, arrows and quiver.)

Money
100 gold rimmed mizas

Housing
1 furnished Darniva common room, somewhere out of the way because she likes peace and quiet.
 
Skills
Hunting
15/100 (15 from starting package)

Birdkeeping
15/100 (15 from starting package)

Weapon-Recurve Bow
10/100 (10 from starting package)

Glassworking
5/100 (5 from starting package)

Inteligence
5/100 (5 from starting package)

Archery
10/100 (10 from racial bonus)

Rhetoric
2/100 (thread)

Observation
2/100 (thread)

Hunting
2/100

Running
2/100

Stealth
1/100

 
Lore
Lore of bargaining
Lore of convincing
Lore of non educated in Mizahar's Races
The Kill No One Saw
Mistaken for Endal
Surprise! A Yasi and a Dire Bear
Pity for the Animals



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Last edited by Cherie on August 20th, 2013, 8:11 am, edited 13 times in total.
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Cherie
If you want to be happy, be.
 
Posts: 43
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Joined roleplay: January 1st, 2012, 10:11 am
Race: Human, Inarta
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Cherie Meltagh

Postby Harrier on August 19th, 2013, 2:45 pm

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Hello adventurer, I'm Harrier, one of the Wind Reach AS's and I've been looking through your character sheet and noticed a few issues.

  • You can't have the entire archery set as that is more than one item. It can only be one item for your heirloom. See Price List for prices.
  • I saw your PC has an eagle (that's neither listed in your inventory nor explained how it was acquired). While it's not a problem to have a bird, an eagle is not something that can be taken care of by someone with less than Competent in falconry. There is also no documentation for how it was purchased.
  • Just as an aside: if you do plan to be more active now, we'll need to arrange a specific job for Cherie in WR. We can talk it over in PM's if you'd like and get you an SS thread for your seasonal XP.
  • Please delete the post beneath this just and PM me so that once all issues are amended, I can remove this intervention. :)

Once you've fixed these issues, PM me and I'll remove the intervention. If you have any questions about the above, feel free to PM me and I'll be happy to assist!

Fly On ~Harrier


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Cherie Meltagh

Postby Cherie on August 20th, 2013, 8:14 am

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Hi,
Thanks for helping out and pointing out the problems. I have fixed them although I'm not sure about the heirloom. Would I be able to have the whole archery set or do I have to chose one item? If I do only get one item, where could I find the cost of arrows, quivers, etc. ?

If you do find more mistakes please point them out and I will edit them.
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T.V --- Such an ugly piece of furniture.
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Cherie
If you want to be happy, be.
 
Posts: 43
Words: 16664
Joined roleplay: January 1st, 2012, 10:11 am
Race: Human, Inarta
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