Tandsra Lespeh (evolving still)

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Tandsra Lespeh (evolving still)

Postby Tandsra Lespeh on January 15th, 2012, 8:18 pm

    -Name: Tandsra Lespeh
    -Race: Charoda
    -Birthday: Season of Fall, Day 29, 496 AV
    -Age: 15
    Gender: Female
    -Physical Description: 5', 150 lbs, with light blue skin.
    -Character Concept: She is quiet, but outspoken when it comes to the issues she is passionate about. Chief among those is a sense of equality, and the importance of empathy. She is incredibly sensitive, and has found herself unable to make her points at times because of that. She has learned as much as she can with her people, and wants to explore the outside world mainly to learn more. She is very empathetic, to the point of pain sometimes when she witnesses somebody else getting made fun of/hurt.
    -Character History (Pre-Creation): She had a fine childhood, a warm and supportive environment, and a family who loved her. She greatly enjoyed learning, and because of that, was a favorite among her elders/tutors. However, because of her history of depression and sensitivity, her peers found it difficult to get close to her. She found that because her people did not know how to handle her mental illness, she did not have anybody who really understood her, and thus nobody to trust. She grew up with no close friends, and stopped trying after awhile. She is not very trusting because of her past (and her people's past), but she hopes to find people in the outside world to prove her wrong. She is the eldest in her family, and while her parents wanted her to stay and help with her younger siblings (two brothers and three sisters), she knew that she would not be happy if she did not at least try to find a way to better her life. After much convincing, her parents finally understood and gave her their blessing.
    -Starting Package: 1 set of clothing, 1 waterskin, 1 backpack, an heirloom (a coral bracelet and ring set that has been passed down for five generations. it is her mother's parting gift to her, a wish for prosperity, health, and success in her journeys), 600 gold rimmed mizas, a seahorse. Skills are: 10 riding, 10 wilderness survival, 10 storytelling, 20 reimancy, and 10 coral manipulation (racial). Lores are: lore of charoda history and lore of dira. She is fluent in Char and Basic in common.
    She has just finished her tutoring/basic learning at home, and is beginning to prepare for her journey to Zeltiva.
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Tandsra Lespeh (evolving still)

Postby Ghost on February 5th, 2012, 5:51 pm

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Liaison Intervention

Hello!

I’m Ghost, and I’m a Character Sheet Liaison. I’m here to help others with their Character Sheets and the Lore. I have found a few issues with your Character Sheet. Don’t worry. A lot of people make mistakes when they create their Character Sheets.

Your PC owns a seahorse. A seahorse costs 100 gold mizas. Please deduct those.

You have only picked two languages. You can pick a third one at "poor" if you like.

I've seen that you picked the Wilderness Survival skill. When choosing Wilderness Survival as a starting skill, you must also take a lore pertaining to Wilderness Survival directly, in other words a wilderness survival technique.

Please also consider making your PC's physical description more detailled.

Send me a PM when you have made the corrections, and I’ll remove this intervention. Have fun in Mizahar and don’t hesitate to PM me if anything is still unclear or you have questions.

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