Waiting for a sign(Thread Complete/RP finished)

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The Wilderness of Cyphrus is an endless sea of tall grass that rolls just like the oceans themselves. Geysers kiss the sky with their steamy breath, and mysterious craters create microworlds all their own. But above all danger lives here in the tall grass in the form of fierce wild creatures; elegant serpents that swim through the land like whales through the ocean and fierce packs of glassbeaks that hunt in packs which are only kept at bay by fires. Traverse it carefully, with a guide if possible, for those that venture alone endanger themselves in countless ways.

Waiting for a sign(Open)

Postby Desmus Marrudius on January 11th, 2012, 3:34 am

As the morning past and mid-day grew closer, the sun warned the cold air that blew through the plains. Desmus and the others had finished eating and packing the rest of the camp up easily and were ready to move along to the port city of Riverfall,a place Desmus never dreamed of going. Desmus had been so trusting by welcoming all these people he barely knew into his camp and he couldn't help but think that maybe he was using them to substitute for the comfort of the Pavilion which he was used to.

Desmus looked at the others all doing their own thing clearly waiting for him to say his silent goodbyes to his weathered makeshift home. With the last of his things packed Desmus called Drakor to tie the packs to him. Drakor's eyes smiled at Desmus, his legs were restless and he was ready to move on even if he was just carrying packs.

Desmus gave one last glance back at the site before saying to scratch "Lead the way, to this place of Riverfall".
"I watched as the lamb opened the fourth of the seven seals and I heard the fourth of the living beasts say in a voice like thunder come and see, and I saw and behold a pale horse and he sat on him was death and behind him, hell followed" - Revelations 6:8
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Waiting for a sign(Thread Complete/RP finished)

Postby Stranger on January 17th, 2012, 4:02 am

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XP Award!


Desmus Marrudius –

Wilderness Survival +1
Horsemanship +1
Socialization +3
Observation +2
Investigation +1


Scratch –

Tracking +1
Observation +2
Rhetoric +1
Manipulation +2
Socialization +2
Leadership +1


Tion –

Observation +2
Socialization +3
Cooking +1
Investigation +1


Emersyn –

Observation +2
Manipulation +3
Socialization +3


Notes: What a motley crew! Overall, good work, guys. Let me know if I missed anything. Also, as Mizahar is a 'writers rpg' and we are all about improving, I'd like to suggest that you consider fleshing out your responses. Being verbose doesn't necessarily equate to good writing, but it is difficult to express much in only a sentence or two. A few of you were better about this than the others, but I'll not name names and hurt feelings. :) Just check yourself. Are you putting in the absolute minimum as far as effort, description, thought, and so forth - or are you working to bring each post to life?

Happy travels to Riverfall!
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