Character Sheet Help (Locked and Relocated)

by **Claude Van Inkaa** on January 12th, 2012, 2:34 am

I appologize for the double post, but at what point am I free to start roleplaying. Do I have to wait for an eacceptance, or am I free to begin at any point?

by **Cilion** on January 14th, 2012, 4:43 pm

an overview of my character sheet would be great, thanks.

by **Gossamer** on January 14th, 2012, 5:07 pm

Claude- you can play anytime after your CS is posted

Cilion- your sheet looks fine other than you spelled Avanthal without an L consistently throughout your CS. You're lores need work too. Poisonous plants is too general. It can be poisonous plants of northern Taldera if your living in and around Avanthal. The second lore, Animal knowledge, is way to general. What kind of knowledge?

by **Daske Baggywrinkle** on January 17th, 2012, 5:57 pm

I have created a draft character sheet and would like someone to evaluate it and make suggestions. This is a Svefra character and I have sent a PM to Trident, but I'm not sure it actually went out. So ... anyway ... if someone can look at it for me, I'm excited about getting started.

by **Gossamer** on January 17th, 2012, 6:10 pm

Daske-

It looks good but you need to give yourself two lores. Also:

10 points tent making (starter package). Learned from Drykas. Some transferrable skill to sail making.
10 points long sword (starter package). Learned from Drykas. Some transferrable skill to cutlass.

Skills aren't transferable. So you need weapon (Cutlass) to use a cutlass if you start with Weapon (Long Sword).

Tent making isn't a skill. You'd have 'sewing' and that covers tent making and sail making.

Otherwise, you look good.

by **Cilion** on January 17th, 2012, 10:56 pm

Also, check your outbox, if it's not there it means he has read the message, if it's there he hasn't just yet. But, it's on it's way.

This is concerning the msg to trident you mentioned

by **Daske Baggywrinkle** on January 17th, 2012, 11:17 pm

I made a few changes to my character sheet per Gossamer's suggestions and changed Daske's age from 20 to 28 (in real life I'm a LOT older than that). Pending further suggestions, I will go with this character.

Thanks to Gossamer for the suggestions.

And thanks to Cilion for clarifying the outbox issue.

by **Emmadalor** on January 21st, 2012, 7:54 pm

Hi. I just finished my character sheet and wanted to have someone double-check it, to make sure I'm not in any gross violation of Mizahar lore.
Also, I looked on the price list, but I wasn't sure how to go about having a waterproof backpack. My character is going to be swimming a lot, so I was hoping there was some way of carrying her more perishable supplies in a waterproof bag or container of some sort.

Thanks in advance for any assistance.

by **Coriander** on January 22nd, 2012, 8:27 pm

Hello ^^~

If anyone would like to glance over my character sheet and give advice or suggest modifications, I'd be really grateful.

I'd like to make sure I'm not in horrific violation of any rules or grossly inaccurate with the lore or something terrible like that >.>;

by **Na'Leigh** on January 25th, 2012, 12:48 am

^_^ Just wondering if you could look over my Character Sheet? Just to make sure I'm not missing anything or made a mistake when referencing cultural/historical things.