Luchiana

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Luchiana

Postby Luchiana on January 22nd, 2012, 7:39 am

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Basic Information

Name: Luchiana
Race: Kelvic
Birthday & age: Summer 507, 12th day
Gender: Female
Height: 5 '9" in human form 10' 3'' feet long and same height in tiger form.
Weight: 124 lbs in human form 426 lbs in tiger form

Languages: Common

Physical Description:
Luchiana is a tiger Kelvic and so she has the commonality of slanted pupils as other felines do. Her iris' are a bright yellow color and she has blonde hair that flows down her back. She has pale skin in her human form and deep orange colored fur with rich black stripes in her tiger form. Luchiana in her human form is small with a thin waist but larger hips and an hourglass figure, in her tiger form she is large and powerful often able to run with quick grace and power, that even by the feline race is not easily achived.

Character Concept:
Luchiana loves to hunt and play. But one of her favorite things to do is to curl up by a fire in her tiger form and sleep like a lazy cat. She's fun loving and can tend to be a little hyper at times. she's bubbly and almost childish but there is one thing that she takes very seriously, and that is the protection of her master and anyone that her master deems to be his friends. She likes to give rides on her back in her tiger form and most of the time prefers to be in her animal form rather than her human form.

History:

Pre-creation: Luchiana wasn't one to stay home for very long and right from the get go, she was off. The only thing that she took with her was her parents wedding rings that she wore on a loose chain that is most of the time tucked under her clothes in her human form and when she is going to turn tiger she slips the chain off along with anything else she is wearing. she decided to explore the world, which for her kind was not uncommon. However she longed for companionship and wandered around looking for someone that she would choose to be with. she was too free spirited to be a slave and was more seeking companionship. Being a feline, she didn't like to be held down and had her own freedom that she would kill for. she is still looking for that companion.

Family Heirloom: A pair of weddings bands that belonged to her parents.

Skills:
Escape artist: | 20 |
Hunting: | 20 |
Camoflauge: | 10 |
Persuasion: | 10 |

Lore:
Lore - understanding others emotional needs
Lore - Finding good sources of food

equipment and possessions:

1 Set of Clothing (cloak/coat & footwear included)
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
-Food for a week
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel

Ledger:
Starter Package + 100 gold Mizas
"cash-in" shelter + 500 gold Mizas
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Last edited by Luchiana on February 10th, 2012, 5:58 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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Lucifel

Postby Ghost on February 8th, 2012, 2:09 pm

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Liaison Intervention

Hello!

I’m Ghost, and I’m a Character Sheet Liaison. I’m here to help others with their Character Sheets and the Lore. I have found a few issues with your Character Sheet. Don’t worry. A lot of people make mistakes when they create their Character Sheet.

First of all, „Lucifel“ is not an acceptable name for a PC in Mizahar. Please change it.

I’m also wondering as to why she has red eyes. She doesn’t seem to be an albino, and tigers don’t have red eyes either.

Her weight as a tiger is at the upper end of the weight chart for a male tiger. Female tigers are usually smaller and weigh less, so it would be a good idea to adjust her weight a little.

You’ve picked a lore called „Tracking“. Please remove it and pick a different lore instead. Tracking is a skill, not a lore.

Please also list your exact possessions rather than simply writing „starting package“.

I’ve seen that you have decided to start without a house. This is fine, but your PC still needs a place to stay somewhere. You need to think about where she sleeps.

Send me a PM when you have editted your Character Sheet, and I’ll remove this intervention. Have fun in Mizahar and don’t hesitate to PM me if anything is still unclear or you have questions.

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