Maudit Faust WIP

[Faust]

Maudit Faust Basic Information Race: Kelvic Birthday & Age : 5 years old (Season of Spring, Day 55, 511AV) Gender: Female Physical Description Her human form is 5'4, lanky and all tone, tanned muscle, years of working as a guard have kept her body in peak condition. As in her animals her hair is a medium brown, her eyes the same, she looks remarkably normal for a Kelvic save for her fingers. Maudit's fingers are oddly skinny with the ring finger being the longest, rather than her middle. She keeps her hair short, her clothes flexible and looks to be about 16. In her animal form she is a strange creature indeed. Her kind are not seen often, especially out of their own territory but she is no pure-breed, she is a Kelvic. Slightly coarse hair covers her entire body but her ears are bare, her fingers a long and bony with the ring finger being the longest, her body and tail are long though her face is short and round. Her eyes large on such small features, she walks on all fours, a funny mildly creepy looking little creature.

[Faust]

Character History Born in the Spring Season in the city of Ravok, Maudit was bred specifically to be a slave (or house-bred Kelvic, as she so fondly calls it), she never knew her father and her mother she was only allowed to stay with for her weaning period, after which she was immediately thrust into bonded to a mercenary for training to be a guard (due to the fact that her she and her sister were mixed up; her sister is a wolf Kelvic). By the end of her first year she was pulled from her bond and placed at an auction from which she was promptly sold. She was considered a ‘blank-slate’ having picked up little of her previous bond-masters tendencies other than his fighting skills she had no likes, dislikes, fears, etc. Sold into a family passing-through (very quickly might I add) who had little knowledge of Kelvics other than what they were told in Ravok (that Kelvics are slaves and by default tools, with no mind of their own) and this proved to be mostly true, Maudit was told what to do and she did it. Whether it be guarding the cart during their travels or serving the children dinner and watching that they did not get hurt. It went well for all of six months, perhaps it because she had taken on more of her first bond-masters personality than noticed or perhaps she developed her own sense of pride and felt wrong but the most likely reason is much simpler, she is and always will be an animal and as such if you corner an animal in a threatening manner you can only expect to be attacked. And this is precisely what happened, the people that owned her were not cruel but they were not kind either, she was slave and therefore beneath them, it made sense to punish her when she was ‘bad’ or ‘wrong’ but never before that day had they any problems after the punishment. What exactly happened is not spoken of and technically speaking it was not her that killed the child but improper treatment of the wounds all the same it was still her fault. The death of the child that she was meant to guard severed her bond and she fled, not awaiting whatever punishment the family would give and refusing to slip into her human form enabled her a quick escape. For three years she wandered aimlessly, lost and living simply because. Her mind a little frayed around the edges and she could not remember who or what she really was. She would have lost herself in her animal form, never seeking another bond or seeking to change into human form if it was not for one simple event. It was a young child, who looked alarmingly like her previous master, untangling her from a trap she had gotten herself stuck in that triggered something in her and she changed forms right then and there and followed the girl home. The family she stayed with welcomed her and tried to get her to bond but she shied away from the idea but in time she picked up more human characteristics and found she loved to simply be near them, to make them happy. Though the idea annoyed her little seeing as she never wished to be bonded again but since then she has never left the company of humans, only traveling with caravans or others she makes friends with. It seems as if her life is separated into three bits: The first being that of her indentured time. The second being of her wild life. The third being the most recent, her life with humans and during this time is seems that she rarely enters her animal form (even though it is more comfortable to her), content to search for her purpose in life (though she loathes to admit it, she is searching for a bond-mate). Through her brief meetings with people she has been able to pick up the…kinder traits of humans as well as the more unsavory ones. Currently she roams Alvadas looking for a way to ease the bursts of guilt she feels for her past indiscretions and something she cannot (or in this case, will not) name. During her wanderings she offers herself as a guard for coin. Training   Skills Skill Earned SP/RB Total Weapon (Jian) -- 15(SP) 15 Acrobatics -- 7(SP) 7 Hunting -- 10(RB) 10 Massage -- 7(SP) 7 Unarmed Combat -- 21(SP) 21   Lore Lore of Human Anatomy (Vital Points) Lore of Pressure Points   Languages Fluent~~~~Common Fighting Style : Maudit's fighting style begins first with her sword, knowing vital point she will often attack but avoid killing by striking around the vital points. Considering her sword is not her strongest fighting style and she is still learning she will often fall back to her unarmed combat. Her form of unarmed combat takes her knowledge of human pressure and vital points and uses them against the person by striking to paralyze or severely injure, her hands staying in a stiff palm-like position. There is also much throwing and counters involved, though she doesn’t seem to use her legs much when attacking. In that same vein she uses her knowledge of pressure and vital points mixed with massage to heal her opponents, though this a work in process and she is not yet very skilled.

[Mirage]

Hello! I am Mirage, ST of Alvadas who is giving our awesome CS Liaisons a hand! I am here to help you out and get your Character sheet up and running with plenty of time to start your RP experience! Don't worry, this is not a death sentence! I am just here to help you with a few tweaks First off if you character is 5 years old she would have been born in 506 AV not 511 AV. I think you meant that to begin with, but probably just forgot about the year haha. I noticed that you never really say WHAT your animal form is, or if you did I must have missed it. In either case please put the name of her animal form somewhere in your opening so that we can all google it and see the awesomeness of what this unusual creature is XD Your character is also allowed a 20x20 cottage in Alvadas, or you may cash this in and get your 500 GM instead. You also don't seem to have any money at all. Was it intentional? If not please add your ledger and your housing, as well as your possessions. All of this can be found in the Starting Package Finally, Welcome to Alvadas! I look forward to seeing your threads soon Question your Reality, Mirage