[Flashback] Fall From Grace Chpt.1 (Solo)

[Ruins of Nial] A simple retrieval job turning out to be much more than that. The first event in a series of events that would forever change Eri's life.

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While Sylira is by far the most civilized region of Mizahar, countless surprises and encounters await the traveler in its rural wilderness. Called the Wildlands, Syliran's wilderness is comprised of gradual rolling hills in the south that become deep wilderness in the north. Ruins abound throughout the wildlands, and only the well-marked roads are safe.

[Flashback] Fall From Grace Chpt.1 (Solo)

Postby Eridanus on February 24th, 2012, 12:55 pm

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A hooded figure stepped forward, pushing off his hood back to reveal the face of a young adult with a clean-shaven face, crew-cut hairstyle and a confident glimmer in his eyes.

"I can take him, Middleman," He smirked, walking towards the pinned ethaefal.

"Medal, remove your projection," the bent figure who they call Middleman croaked, and Eridanus felt the invisible force loosen up, allowing him to drop to the ground.

He watched the approaching man warily, and he brought his hands up in a combat-ready stance.

"You see that, peeps? He's all ready to fight!" Coinsmith shouted to the rest of the group, some of which laughed nervously with his words.

"Enough with the chatter, Coinsmith. Just do what you're told," Middleman chastised.

Eridanus did not approach, instead he began to calm down his frenzied panting in order to force more oxygen into his brain. He spread his legs out comfortably, bending them slightly and he raised both hands, his left hand spaced out in front while his right hand staying close to his cheek.

Coinsmith walked casually to the ethaefal, and just outside of striking distance he suddenly leaped in with a high-aimed blow. Eridanus swatted it away, but in the process of doing so the man angled forward on his right, jabbing his elbow into Eri's collarbone, causing him to wince sharply at the pain.

He lashed out of a kick in response, and he felt the man's arms disappear as he used them to soften the impact of the kick, pushing him backwards.

"Bugger's got some kick in him," Coinsmith huffed.

"Enough with the puns, Coinsmith, just do your job," the loud bass that belonged to the one they called Messenger resounded.

He rushed forward again, but this time Eridanus was ready for him. The ethaefal kicked the man's rushing figure, but surprisingly he managed to somehow absorb the blow with his torso, the kick only reducing some of his momentum. Eridanus had not quite expected that, and his hands were unprepared when Coinsmith slapped his head quite painfully against the stone wall behind.
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NOTICE: I am currently mostly inactive til August. As such, guild activities are temporarily halted (watch out for major revamps, changes and organizations when I'm back in full force). Any activity with Eri will be rather slow as well, but I am slowly readjusting back to "Mizahar life", so to speak, so do PM me if we have a thread that I left hanging and we'll talk.



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[Flashback] Fall From Grace Chpt.1 (Solo)

Postby Eridanus on February 24th, 2012, 1:04 pm

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Eridanus raised his hands to block the next attack, and from the corner of his eyes saw Coinsmith's knee coming up from the side. He raised his own leg in response to intercept the knee kick, only to feel a palm strike against his torso, stumbling him against the wall. He breathed raggedly as he blocked another palm strike aimed at his chest, and he blindly lashed out with a flurry of blows, some of which Coinsmith managed to block, others he avoided.

The ethaefal took this moment of respite to run away, getting some space between his attacker, but as soon as he did he felt an invisible force slam against his legs, and he reached out his hands in order to break his fall, tumbling as he did so.

"Medal! No interference dammit!" Coinsmith whined, provoking a muttered apology from one of the hooded figures.

The ethaefal quickly recovered from his tumble, stepping one foot back to provide stability as he brought his hands up again. As the man strode towards him, he began to focus on the djed streams within him.

This time, he focused on the streams in his legs, nudging them gently upwards to his arms and chest. He would need as much arm power for what he was about to do, and the appropriate chest strength to support his impromptu strategy. It was clear this Coinsmith did not take him seriously, and he would triumph using this underestimation.
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NOTICE: I am currently mostly inactive til August. As such, guild activities are temporarily halted (watch out for major revamps, changes and organizations when I'm back in full force). Any activity with Eri will be rather slow as well, but I am slowly readjusting back to "Mizahar life", so to speak, so do PM me if we have a thread that I left hanging and we'll talk.



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[Flashback] Fall From Grace Chpt.1 (Solo)

Postby Eridanus on February 24th, 2012, 1:07 pm

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He began backing against a wall to create more distance and buy more time as his mind whirred to complete the imagery required for the spell to function correctly. It was like going against the flow of gravity, and going against nature, for pulling his djed streams from his legs up to his arms and chest was akin to forcing flowing water from a river up a waterfall. He encountered spiritual resistance, but he continued pushing, feeling the strength in his legs deflating as his arms grew in strength.

His spell was done, and he could feel a slow but steady djed consumption instinctively as his body struggled to maintain the spell.

Coinsmith came nearer.

Suddenly, he lashed forward again, and Eridanus pushed his back against the wall to provide him the stability that his now-weakened legs could not. He only needed to get one hit in. Coinsmith landed a series of blows on the ethaefal, and he responded sluggishly, barely blocking some while suffering some hits.

His mind was beginning to black out from the pain, but it was not over yet. He could not allow himself to show his trump card, not when there was no opening.

There!

Finally, in a moment of arrogance Coinsmith left an opening to deliver a flashy uppercut, probably confident that his opponent was in no shape to counter. With all the repressed strength, magically augmented with djed streams unnaturally pulled from the other parts of his body, Eridanus slammed a fist into the young man's chin, the impact pushing him back several feet as he flew up and backwards, landing in a confused jumble.

It was evident that he was knocked out cold in that single attack.
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NOTICE: I am currently mostly inactive til August. As such, guild activities are temporarily halted (watch out for major revamps, changes and organizations when I'm back in full force). Any activity with Eri will be rather slow as well, but I am slowly readjusting back to "Mizahar life", so to speak, so do PM me if we have a thread that I left hanging and we'll talk.



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[Flashback] Fall From Grace Chpt.1 (Solo)

Postby Eridanus on February 24th, 2012, 1:08 pm

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The congregation began to titter again, and Messenger laughed loudly, clapping his hands.

"He's all yours, Middleman. Just make sure to follow the usual," Messenger chuckled, before turning around and leaving the building through another exit at the opposite end of the obelisk.

"Take him out," Middleman told the hooded figure named Medal, and the woozy ethaefal felt another invisible force slamming his body up high against the wall.

It was then when he finally blacked out, losing consciousness from the physical and mental toll the ordeal had taken from him.

His future was bleak.
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NOTICE: I am currently mostly inactive til August. As such, guild activities are temporarily halted (watch out for major revamps, changes and organizations when I'm back in full force). Any activity with Eri will be rather slow as well, but I am slowly readjusting back to "Mizahar life", so to speak, so do PM me if we have a thread that I left hanging and we'll talk.



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First winner of the prestigious Mirage's No Kill Medal.
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[Flashback] Fall From Grace Chpt.1 (Solo)

Postby Emblem on February 27th, 2012, 11:47 pm

Congratulations!
You Get Glorious Experience!

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Skills
    Dual Wield- 5 XP
    Observation- 5 XP
    Longsword- 4 XP
    Flux- 4 XP
    Acrobatics- 4 XP
    Unarmed- 4 XP
    Intimidation- 3 XP
    Running- 2 XP
    Stealth- 1 XP
    Navigation- 1 XP
    Persuasion- 1 XP
Lores
    Battle in the Ruins
    Location: Ruins of Nial
    Knocked Out
    Good Fortune Gone Bad
    Fighting Fire

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Highly entertaining combat thread! Well done! Hopefully all the skills and lores make sense to you, and if not, feel free to shoot me a PM or message me in chat!
Currently working at new job so I am still trying to balance it out with Miza. I apologize for any delays.
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