[Flashback] Bestest Birthday (Solo)

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The Wilderness of Cyphrus is an endless sea of tall grass that rolls just like the oceans themselves. Geysers kiss the sky with their steamy breath, and mysterious craters create microworlds all their own. But above all danger lives here in the tall grass in the form of fierce wild creatures; elegant serpents that swim through the land like whales through the ocean and fierce packs of glassbeaks that hunt in packs which are only kept at bay by fires. Traverse it carefully, with a guide if possible, for those that venture alone endanger themselves in countless ways.

[Flashback] Bestest Birthday (Solo)

Postby Colt on January 25th, 2012, 7:06 pm

He stayed there for a long time before looking up. He took a deep breath and stood, keeping his emotions as controlled as he could as he scanned the tables or anything he hadn’t tried.

There. There were five of them set expertly on one of the more cluttered table, and Khasr surveyed them for a few moments before cautiously taking one in his hand. It was light and springy, perhaps the quarters of an inch at the middle and tapering gracefully to wicked points at both ends. He twirled it as he had the spear, and it did so gracefully. His anger gone, a grin started to creep into his face as he twirled it again. He stopped when he almost hit a helmet, then giggled and rushed outside, twirling it around and around.

He sighted the target, drew back, and let fly. It sliced through the air so gracefully it could have been dancing, soaring clear over the target and continuing for another twenty feet. Khasr heard the hollow sound of wood as it skidded five more along the ground. He just stood there, awed at the sheer distance, and jumped when he heard two laughs from behind him.

“Looks like you’d found your weapon,” Daha said, and there was pride in his voice.

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[Flashback] Bestest Birthday (Solo)

Postby Lariat on March 5th, 2012, 7:20 pm

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I didn't award you much xp or lore because you didn't do much besides throw the javelin. To get better in it I would recommend describing how you are throwing it, and working with each throw to be more accurate, or get the spear farther. Good piece of writing though and I look forward to reading more of your work. If you have any questions just send me a pm!
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