Wings the Kelvic

[Wings]

Wings

Race: Kelvic (Wolf)

Birthday: 18th of Autumn, 509

Age: 2

Gender: female

Parents:
Oak- a male blue jay Kelvic
Michele- a female rabbit Kelvic
Physical Appearance

Height: 5 feet, 4 inches

Weight: 106 lbs

Skin Color: a light-tannish color, much like honey

Eye Color: bright green

Hair Color: jet black
Basic Information

Wings is from: The Spires of Taldera

Personality: Wings can be extremely short-tempered. She travels alone, a very dangerous task; she doesn’t go far from The Spires. She is a leader in most situations; the ones she isn't, she doesn't cooperate well.

Interests: trees, living off the land, music, and meat…..lots of it!

Goals: Wings hopes to make a group of Kelvic wolves in the forest outside of The Spires. She wishes to lead them and maybe someday have a mate, but the pack would be first.

Fears: She fears upsetting and/or hurting the ones she is bonded to, devoted to, or the ones she cares for. Ghosts also spook her every once in a while.

Weaknesses: She isn’t very intelligent, and she often gets angry. When she becomes angry, she is blind to the ones around her and can go crazy. She also is having trouble shifting when she wants to (2/3 times she wants to shift, it works)

Strengths: Wings is able to live off the land, and is very social. She has fairly good physical strength.

Skills:
• Wilderness Survival- 15 (+15@SP)
• Leadership- 10 (+10@SP)
• Cooking- 10 (+10@SP)
• Playing of Wooden Flute (+15@SP)
• Hunting- 10 (+10 RB)

Lores:
• Animal tracks identification
• Healing Plants in Taldera

Languages:
• Common (fluent)
• Jamouran Grunts (basic)

Equipment:
• a dark blue (almost black) velvet cloak
• dark brown moccasins made from deer hide
• a deer hide waterskin
• Wing’s father’s longbow

Backpack Inventory:
• porcupine quill brush (@SP)
• razor (@SP)
• brush (@SP)
• soap (@SP)
• dried meat days left: 7 (@SP)
• eating knife (@SP)
• flint and steel (@SP)

Money: 100 gold-rimmed mizas (@SP. This parenthesis will be deleted when money is gained/lost)

Housing: large tent (4 person) (@SP)
• large tarp (@SP)
• 100 ft of rope (@SP)
• flint & steel (@SP)
• lantern (@SP)
• 2 torches (@SP)
• Bedroll (@SP)
• Blanket (@SP)
• fishing tackle & hooks (@SP)
• a dark bay Zavian named Naomi. 16.6 hh. He’s used for packing and riding throughout The Spires value: 100 gm. When she settles down, she wishes to sell him, for she has no use for him. (@SP)
• a full set of tack (@SP)
• a large set of saddlebags (@SP)

Thread List:
23rd of Winter 511 AV- Leaves home
87th of Winter 511 AV- Arrives at The Spires

History:
Wings was raised on the road, always moving from place to place. Her parents were always selling or trading their goods. They traveled with a group of people, one of them her father's and mother's master.

Few of the people were nice and generous. Most of them were theives or merchants, like her folks. She leaned how to protect herself with a dagger and bow-and-arrow, for there were evil creatures and horrible people. One man in particular was the worst of them all. His name was Daran.

Daran was a tall, shaggy-haired boy. He was a few years older than Wings, but never wiser. He had dark hair and ice blue eyes that would glare down at her at night. He wanted what Wings would not give, so rage forced him on the road to abuse. Daran hit her when she would refuse to him, even to share her bread crumbs.

Wings remembers the night she ran so vaguely.

It had been a dark night, for the moon was covered with storm clouds that had no chance of pouring their fresh water. She listen to her father tell a story about an enchanted city, one that was hidden well. He called it the Hidden City or the Spires.

"In fact, the Hidden City is in that very forest over to the north," Oak said, pointing wildly with his stubbed finger. He had lost it to a rabid bear that had attacked Wings's mother.

Wings looked to the north, and sure enough, the shadows of a forest boomed on the horizon. She scanned the campsite for a face looking her direction then sped off toward her tent. She packed for a week and set off. A while away from the traveler's camp, a hard hand grabbed her shoulder. She flung back and slapped the man behind her. He gasped in pain.

Realization struck her like an arrow through her chest. Oak, her father.

"Goodbye..." His hand clasped his face where a large red mark stood out. "Have this." He handed her a nicely carved bow and arrows made with hawk feathers.

Wings was utterly surprised. "I-I'm sorry, Oak. Thank you."

With that, her father sent her on her way. In that forest, just as her father had said, she found the Spires.

On a dark, moon-covered night, Wings's father told a story of a hidden city in the forest they were near. He called it The Spires, and Wings was intrigued. As the darkness enveloped her, she ran away, away from the people she had become to trust, and away from Daran.

There she found the Spires.

[Shepherd]

Hello new adventurer! Welcome to Mizahar! My name is Shepherd, and I am here to assist you in completing your Character Sheet in a manner that is respectful to the Lore and overall theme of Mizahar. I have found a few areas of confusion and error, and I'm here to work with you to set things straight. Things Needing Fixed   Age There seems to be some confusion with the age of your Kelvic. Kelvics age extremely rapidly until they are 1 or 2, which is equivalent to mid to late teens. From that point on they age as their animal would. With your birthday in 496, that would make your Kelvic 15 years old, which is extremely old for a Kelvic.   Real World Terms I recommend finding a way to describe your skin color other than Asian, simply because Asia and Asians don't exist within the fictional world of Mizahar.   Heirloom Wing’s father’s bow and his arrows, which I assume is your heirloom needs adjusting. You need to specify as to what type of bow this is. There are Shortbows, Longbows, Crossbows. Also your arrows cannot be included in the Heirloom and must be purchased and deducted from your ledger. Please refer to the Price List.   Minor Notes These things do not need to be changed, but I would recommend you looking into some adjustments. You mention knowing how to use a dagger and a bow, but have no weapon skills to accompany this knowledge. Examples include Weapon: Kris Dagger or Weapon: Shortbow. So unless you add these in, your PC would have no idea how to use either of these. Also your Poor Language of Soon to Come either needs removed or to have a language put in its place. You do not have to have 3 languages after all. Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here. Shepherd