Learning From A Student [Elem Bree]

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Learning From A Student [Elem Bree]

Postby Nira'lia on April 13th, 2012, 4:11 pm

"Yes, Avalis is the Goddess of Visons and Divination. The Konti are her children. Most of us are born with her mark," she explained with a smile.

She felt rather comfortable with him, especially as he had just told her that she was welcome to look in his chavi whenever she felt like it. That was not a common thing a stranger would tell her, as most thought that someone peering into their past without permission was a trespass on boundaries. The Konti liked listening to him. He seemed to know what he was saying, and so she stared right at him, finding his every word interesting.

"A season, huh...?" she repeated, barely a whisper. "I would like that... and I probably will. Listening to you speak about your classes just makes me want to do so even more."

Nira'lia found herself daydreaming for a second. She imagined in herself in one of the classrooms, taking down notes, and maybe even seated right beside her new friend, Elem! Maybe she could even meet other people -- the thought made her smile in excitement.

The Konti chuckled to herself as she stared at the sky. "Yes, I might do that... don't worry, we Konti live a long life. Maybe it'll take me a decade more, but I know I'll be able to enrol someday. However, you most likely would be a doctor by then," she looked at him and grinned, her eyes twinkling.

Standing up, she straightened out her dress before her.

"Well, Mister Elem Bree, I should be going now. I've taken so much of your time already... please, have a safe trip home," she said with a smile. Carefully, she put a hand on his shoulder and squeezed it gently as a way of saying farewell. Then she nodded and turned around, practically hopping as she continued to daydream.

On her entire way home, she found herself thinking about their conversation. It was true that she had so many years before her, and even if she couldn't enrol right away, she surely would find the right time to do so.
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Learning From A Student [Elem Bree]

Postby Echelon on April 14th, 2012, 7:53 pm

Adventurer's Loot

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A Gift
Experience is it's own reward.
Elem's Loot :
Elem Bree

Skill XP Reward
Interrogation +1XP
Botany +1XP
Observation +1XP
Socializing +1XP
Medicine +1XP

Lore:
Nira'Lia: Can See The Past, Avalis Gnosis: Appearance, Avalis Gnosis: Etiquette, Avalis: Goddess of Visions and Divination, Konti: Most Born with Avalis' Mark, Polite Introduction


Items or Consequences:
None

Notes: For more skills points you could go into more detail. When you were noting the muscled of the hand that was great. But your dialogue lacks the tone of an herbalist, who could naturally list of common names of local plants. Some research might help increase XP growth.


Nira'lia's Loot :
Nira'lia

Skill XP Reward
Observation +2XP
Interrogation +2XP

Lore:
Suppressed by Family, Interpersonal Curiosity, Radiant Smile, Intrusive Readings, Elem Bree: Medical Student


Items or Consequences:
None

Notes: None

(This was an enjoyable little slice of life. Though, I have to be honest, it all seemed to lack of certain purpose. In the future, perhaps try to think about what your characters might really get out of encounter before just throwing them together [literally.]) - if you have ANY questions or concerns about this grading, please PM me.
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