Yuma

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Yuma

Postby Yuma on April 15th, 2012, 3:44 am

Yuma


Info:
Age: 4
Birthday: Winter, Day 7, 507
Name: Yuma
Race: Kelvic
Animal: Sand Cat
Sex: Female
Height: 5’4”
Weight: 103
Bondmate: Shina (PC)
Religion: Makutsi (very lightly)
Homeland: Eloab, Eyktol
Current Land/City: Ahnatep, Eyktol
Seasonal Living Expense:
Appearance:
In human form Yuma looks like a 20 or 21 year old girl with sandy blonde hair that hangs down her back and dark olive skin. Her eyes are greenish yellow and the pupils are vertically split. She has black outlining her eyes (similar to eyeliner) to protect her eyes from the sun.
In cat form Yuma is the size of a normal house cat and has large expressive ears. She has pale, sandy yellow fur and two black rings around her front legs and tail. There are long hairs growing between her toes to protect them from the hot sand in the desert.
Personality:
Yuma is usually very quiet but is sometimes seen having in depth conversations with her bond mate, Shina. When provoked Yuma can be very violent, and although she is small in size can cause very serious injuries. She is very calm and collected and always thinks before she acts. She has a very dry sense of humor and only shows it when she is around Shina.
Morals:
Yuma only believes in the protection and survival of her bond mate and nothing else matters.
Likes:
Shina loves to sleep in the sun and because of this she is more active at night. She always loves being around her bond mate and enjoys watching her weave baskets. Yuma is very curious about the world and likes to just sit and think about it and how it works.
Dislikes:
Yuma hates being around many people and prefers just to be with Shina. She also loathes learning unless it’s something Shina teaches her.
Family:
Yuma’s mother, Layna, raised her until she was about 1 year old. She cares very deeply for her mother and went into a deep depression when she died. Yuma knows very little about her father besides the fact he left her mother before she was born.
Clothing:
Yuma wears a leather halter-top that cuts of just above her belly button and a pair of light brown gauchos that stop at her knees. When outside Yuma puts on a pair of thin leather sandals that protect her feet from the hot sand. She occasionally ties a thick rope around her left bicep to cover a scar she received when she was younger. When she is outside she wears a brown silk scarf around her head that her mother gave her.
Equipment:
Small Pack
Water Skin
Flint and Steel
Small Eating Knife
Wooden Brush
Small Bar of Soap
Precreation:
When Yuma was still in her mother’s womb, Layna wandered into Eloab to find refuge from the scorching sun. She gave birth a few days later and had no choice but to stay to keep Yuma alive. The eerie presence began to take hold of Yuma's mother after a few months. Her mother began speaking of voices that spoke to her in her dreams. After a year Yuma's mother tried to stab herself and said the voices told her to do it. Yuma decided that they must leave Eloab for her mother's sake. After a few days of travel in the desert Yuma's mother stopped eating and drinking. She became to weak to move and collapsed in the sand. Yuma cried for her to get up but a few hours later the desert took her mothers life. Yuma went into a deep depression and she herself stopped eating. After weeks of traveling she found her way to Ahnatep and met her bond mate, Shina.
Lore:
Knowledge of Eyktol plants and animals
Knowledge of How to Find Water
Languages:
Fluent- Tawna
Basic- Common
Poor- Arumenic
Post creation:

Threads:

Skill Points:
Hunting- 10 RSP
Land Navigation- 15
Wilderness Survival- 15
Unarmed Combat- 15
Tracking- 5

Ledger:
Start +100
Sold Home +500
Total- 600

Last edited by Yuma on April 20th, 2012, 12:25 am, edited 5 times in total.
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Yuma

Postby Ghost on April 19th, 2012, 5:55 pm

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Liaison Intervention
Hello!

I’m Ghost, and I’m a Character Sheet Liaison. I’m here to help others with their Character Sheets and the Lore. There are a few things you need to fix:

1) Your birthdate is wrong. We currently have Spring, 512 AV in Mizahar. So if you want her to be 4 years old, her birthdate needs to be in Spring, 508 AV or earlier.

2) What is a “silk scarce”? Do you mean a scarf?

3) Is your bondmate a PC or a NPC? Please state that. PC bondmates are okay, but NPCs need to be applied for in the Help Desk.

4) You should rethink your background story about Hai. Hai is not a normal city, it’s basically some kind of big prison. One doesn’t simply wander into it and leave again.

5) It would also be great if you could make a simple list of all your items. While there’s nothing at all wrong with writing it in full sentences, it’s easier for readers of your CS to get an overview if there’s also a list.

Send me a PM when you have editted your Character Sheet, and I’ll remove this intervention. Have fun in Mizahar and don’t hesitate to PM me if you have questions.


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