Ppirika

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Ppirika

Postby Ppirika on April 6th, 2012, 9:31 pm

Ppirika

Basic Information:
Race : Human, Inarta
Birthday : 87th of spring, 498 AV
Age : 14
Gender : Female

Languages:
Fluent : Nari
Basic : Common
Poor : Isurian

Physical Description: Pirika's most striking feature is her red hair common in the Inarta (although it is not quite as vibrant as many of the other Inarta) and her height (5'10"), she weighs 120lbs and has very pale skin. She has hazel eyes with flecks of gold that are considered quite mundane by her fellow yasi. Her hair is long and normally in a plait so as to keep it out of the way while she does her bendi.

Character Concept: Pirika has a good sense of right and wrong but is happy with her life in wind reach and hopes to be picked by an eagle to become an endal. Having never left her native city she sometimes finds herself slightly baffled by what goes on outside it. She enjoys spending time listening to traders in the market picking up languages.

Character History: Pirika was abandoned on the doorstep of the communal nursery as a baby, this is a commonplace in wind reach and as such she was raised as any other dek would be. The only thing left with her was a rosewood comb with river pearls embedded in it, this was considered unusual as very few dek have access to such things. Since then she has grown up with the other dek children in the nursery. Her favourite bendi is helping in the aeries. It was there that she found a raven fledgling with a broken wing, she took it home and raised it, luckily her races love of birds meant a healer treated it for practically nothing. She has tried to bond with a wind eagle several times but has so far failed.

Training and Skill Points:
Falconry 30 (+10 racial bonus, +20 starting package)
Archery 10 (+10 starting package)
Hunting 5 (+5 starting package)
Unarmed Combat 15 (+15 starting package)

Lores:
Ravens and their Habits (s)
Climbing a Sheer Wall (s)

Equipment/Possessions:
1 pair of Bryda (black)
1 Vinati (black)
1 Katinu (black)
1 pair of Knee Length Leather Boots (brown)
1 Waterskin
Food for a Week
1 set of toiletries
1 eating knife
Flint and Steel
Rosewood and River Pearl Comb
1 Raven called Ashtak

Ledger:
100 Pinions (S)
600 Pinions +500 pinions (cashed in housing)
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Ppirika

Postby Shepherd on April 19th, 2012, 12:09 pm

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Hello new adventurer!

Welcome to Mizahar! My name is Shepherd, and I am here to assist you in completing your Character Sheet in a manner that is respectful to the Lore and overall theme of Mizahar. I have found a few areas of confusion and error, and I'm here to work with you to set things straight.


Things Needing Fixed
 
Skills
Archery is not an appropriate skill. All weapon skills are made weapon specific, such as Weapon: Longbow or Weapon: Shortbow.

 
Lores
Climbing a Sheer Wall (s) is not an appropriate lore. This lore would be included in the skill Climbing.

 
Purchases
You must purchase your Raven from the Price List. If it is not in the price list, you must request it from this thread. http://www.mizahar.com/forums/post160411.html#p160411


Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here.

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