[Flashback solo] A curious day at home.

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Considered one of the most mysterious cities in Mizahar, Alvadas is called The City of Illusions. It is the home of Ionu and the notorious Inverted. This city sits on one of the main crossroads through The Region of Kalea.

[Flashback solo] A curious day at home.

Postby Nas on July 11th, 2012, 11:14 am

21st Summer 423

Nas was bored it was almost evening and he had gotten lost again his mother woulnt be happy at all but it wasnt his fault the city had changed again.
Looking down this road it had somethign fammiliar he thought dint i pass here before...i think i may be doing circles darnit!

He took a deep breath it was early evening so it wasnt this bad but he needed to be going home hmm oh i know i will go to the sanity center Nas picked up his pace towards there sometimes he would swear as he walked that someone watched him but it was propably his imagination.

Walking a bit more nervously he heard something crash behind of him without turning back to look he runned and runned till he was out of breath looking up saw he had reached the center outside was someone he hoped it wasn't his mother.

Nas walked as the person dropped their hood revealing her face was his grandmother "you are late boy i figured you had gotten lost so i waited till you thought about coming here come with me your mother is waiting for us" Nas just nodded and followed his grandmother he was glad his mother dint come otherwise she would want to inquire where he was not that she care that much.

"You know i used to explore in the past the city its quite dangerous under it have you visited teh underground litle one?"
"Yes grandmother but i have a question are you gonna be teaching me magic?"asked Nas she just nodded as she pointed at a house looking closer he saw they had reached
"I have a job to do so go to your mother and be a good boy i will be visiting you later tonight for your lesson"and with that she left him.

Nas walked to the house and opened the door entered and said to his mother who was eyeing him "sorry to be late" "Its fine we will talk about this later now eat with me and then we will talk" she replied.

After eating dinner they waited close to the fire as they heard a knock to the door and the door opened it was his grandmother "hello my babies i hope you ate" she motioned them to stay there as she locked the door and wore off her cloak.

Coming closer to them she sat down and looked Nas in the eyes like she was peering into his soul before speaking "boy have you used any magic since we initiated you or talked to anyone about it?" Nas was about to answer when he felt a bit strange like words were hammered into his brain he answered truthfullly "No" .

His grandmother smiled and hugged him then she got back "ok get up but first a few things remember that all magic has overgiving as a danger it might damage your body mind or soul especially with projection one has the danger of leaving their body when they know how so dont try anything big about reimancy take care of where you use the elements and your res production"she stopped speaking as if wanting to say more and motioned him to get up and pointed at the table.
She starting speaking again
"Now i want you to pick anything from the table dont choose anything big just remember like i taught you use your projection to pick up something"

Nas looked over the table he saw a piece of fruit from their dinner he was feeling nervous yet excited he took a deep breath and tried to concetrate as he pushed his astral body out with his djed he could feel his hand he tried not to waste nay time and pick the fruit but he instead pushed it away in his hurry.

He looked at his grandmother and she looked at him back before saying "good job i dint expect you to actually push it in fact touch it" she motioned him closer and then spoke "Now whilst projection can make you lose your body or be unable to use it you should also know that the loss of a limb can make you unable to use that astral part on reimancy reimancers when they overgive sometimes lose control of all or most their bodily functions this is very dangerous but its even more dangerous if res enters your body as it will mutate it res is like djed dangerous and potentially destructive in the worst possible ways keep this in mind its better to underperfom in practice than overperform as things can get very dangerous so beware and keep practising its like a muscle as you exersize it the bigger and stronger it becomes and so one day you may do this" she pointed at her cloak and then.

It suddently came to her still being holded in the air she maked it open without going close and then she walked up to it and wore it casually like it was nothing "of course you can do even more things like pranking others but you are too young to do this maybe a bit later now i got to be going i will leave the key on the door keep in mind to take it it helps you find the way back home litle boy" with that she practically picked the pace to the door and left.

"Mother why grandmother was in a hurry?" asked Nas "she has lots of things to do my child now rest tommorow will be a long day" she replied Nas just nodded at that and prepared himself to sleep.
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[Flashback solo] A curious day at home.

Postby Nas on July 11th, 2012, 12:22 pm

As he prepared himself for sleep in his bed Nas thought
he hand't heard any myths nor from his father neither his mother so he spoke up "mom before going to sleep will you tell me a story?"
he asked hopefully "well i guesss i could tell you one

Long ago when the world was created and animals too were being created Eywaat also known as the crow brother came to his mother Caiyha the goddess of Flora and Fauna
and said : Mother all gods have a domain over which they reside for yet i dont have that many what should i do?

His mother being wise and knowing her son all too well said if you give me some of your feathers i will create and give you animals in your form over which people will know it is you the crow brother accepted but he had one problem it was painfull to remove them so he flew to Eyris and asked for her help with this problem Eyris knowing the pain he felt and why showed him and easier way to take his feather's in return she made him promise to help people with his Ingenuity and thus he returned to his mother but at the road back some of his feathers falled down and were found by Ionnu Ionnu knew these were the crow brother feather and brought them back to him as his mother began to bless them but not before he played a litle trick he kept few for him from those Caiyha blessed and later painted them and thus afterwards the first crows were created and from the painted feathers came the rest of the birds with the various colors Eywaat was happy with his creations but he was displeased at first but relaxed later when he found out what Ionu did but forgave him and thats why Ionu sometimes apears as a crow with all the colors and why so many diferent birds exist all in various colors but his firstborn the crow's still exist around here as for his promise to the godess they say he now helps the Chaktawe survive in the desert.
"
she took a deep breath as she finished
this was a big story "woah this was a great story i guess i should sleep now i feel tired" said Nas yawing as he turned in his bed to sleep
"sleep tight my son" she said and kissed him in the cheek.


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[Flashback solo] A curious day at home.

Postby Fallacy on July 11th, 2012, 7:32 pm

XP Award!


Name:Nas
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  • Projection- 1
Lore:
  • The Dangers of Projection
  • The Dangers of Reimancy
  • Story of Ionu- Legend of the Colored Feathers
  • Shifting Alvadas
  • House Key- Compass Home
Notes:

Hey there. First off, I really like the creativity you showed when creating that story and why Ionu appears as a crow sometimes. Very cool. Secondly, while this isn’t a big detail, I would like to ask you to look over your posts before you post. While I wont dock you points for use of grammar or how the posts are presented, when we look over our work for a second time we will find many errors we overlooked when writing. Thirdly, magic is dangerous, and Im glad you are realized that. The Grandmother seems interesting. Just when you are doing magic, this is the reason you only got one point in Projection, I like to see detail. Not only detail, but magic is a process. It goes in steps and it takes conscious effort. Show the effort, show the mindset, show the steps to get more points! The points are in the details and how creatively you use the skill.

I know you asked for Running XP too, but I didnt see it fit to give you it. Again, the points are in the details :)

Other than that it was a good thread! Nice beginning solo, and I hope that you are having a good time writing here.

Any questions or concerns about the rewards gained please send a PM :)


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