Flashback Foreign Music

[Xiani]

"I am called Xiani," she pronounces the name proudly, smiling as she crawls over to the wall, and leans against it, wings wrapped over herself sleepily. "It was very... nice meeting you. I wish you well in the future." And with that statement, the Zith falls asleep in the same cave as a human, sheltered from the raging storm outside.

[Valkyrie]

Xiani :

Experience
1 Detection
4 Dance
1 Acrobatics
2 Anthropology
3 Rhetoric
2 Interrogation

Lore
Almost Freezing in the Northern Reaches
Sounds of a Lute
The Urge to Dance
Vantha: Eyes like the Aurora
Vantha: Marriage and Bride Prices
Morwen, Goddess of Winter
Rhaus, God of Music
Avanthal: Ruled by Morwen
Contact: Inessa Snowsong, Vantha Musician

Other
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Notes: A very nice thread! I loved the festive atmosphere you two created and I really enjoyed how you both discussed your respective cultures. The only note I have is to remember that your character is a novice dancer and is likely to make mistakes now and then or loose her balance. I also like that in the beginning you paid attention to the nature of a Zith and how they would probably consider Inessa as a potential food source. Good job!

Inessa :

Experience
1 Observation
3 Lute
2 Singing
1 Hypnotism
2 Anthropology
3 Rhetoric
2 Interrogation

Lore
Dance Moves of a Zith
Placating a Zith with Music
Attempting to Explain Marriage and Bride Prices to a Zith
Desire to Hear the Music of Rhaus
Zith: Multiple Mates
Contact: Xiani, Dancing Zith


Other
N/A

Notes: A great thread! You guys made a good duo. I enjoyed how Inessa used her music to placate Xiani. I also enjoyed how you both explored each other’s cultures and it was pretty adorable to see Inessa trying to explain the Vantha norms surrounding mating. This was a fun read.

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