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Built into the cliffs overlooking the Suvan Sea, Riverfall resides on the edge of grasslands of Cyphrus where the Bluevein River plunges off the plain and cascades down to the inland sea below. Home of the Akalak, Riverfall is a self-supporting city populated by devoted warriors. [Riverfall Codex]
by Gossamer on October 7th, 2012, 6:08 pm
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Character: Naeya Experience: Planning +1, Observation +1, Socialization +1, Negotation +1 Lore: Traveling with a Sym proves difficult, Drykas can be rude, Being Con’d out of coin for a voyage, Having few options, not being able to say lengthy goodbye s Character: Ayanna Experience: Socialization +2, Negotation +1 Lore: Informing People of Her Vast Experiences, Desmus: The Drykas is Arrogant, Naeya: The Konti is kind.
Character: Desmus Experience: Socialization +2, Interrogation +2, Negotiation +1 Lore: Skipping the niceties and getting down to business, Knowing the right questions to ask, Demanding to be Entertained, The Ladies are particular.
Additional Note: Ayanna, I don’t allow centered text in my city. I will not grade anything else turned in that is centered. And because you have dark on dark, the graduated dialog is almost impossible to read on the back half. The light side is fine, but when you go really dark it be Thanks for understanding.
Couple of pet peeves too. Naeya, everyone read the posts that came before. There is actually ZERO excuse for cutting and reposting what others say. It’s considered slightly annoying to those that have to reread again and again dialog they’ve already read. You aren’t considering the average reader is smart enough to have read the previous posts and know what you are responding too in terms of questions other PC’s ask you. Believe me, they are smart enough. You may want to limit this in the future.
Otherwise the thread was good, a little slow with not much going on to grade. I’m glad you guys got passage to Syliras. Withdraw the funds from all your ledgers. | . |
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