[Issues found by Torchlight] Emily Croselend

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Emily Croselend

Postby crossmyheart on November 15th, 2012, 12:18 am

Character name: Emily Croselend
Type of creature: Ghost
Age: Appears to be thirteen, however is almost a hundred years of age.


A long time ago, when the grasses were green and the trees were tall and powerful. There was a young girl, named Emily. Her long abnormal white locks would fall gently over her sickly pale skin, as she trotted through the beds of flowers. Her parents, proud and lovely, stood at the brim of the window, peeking out happily.And all was well, until the town they protected revolted against them. Crying out they were witches, frightened by the outbursts, the priest shoved his wife towards the woods, holding his sword in defense as it would do none against the bloodthirsty crowd. Hearing the screams of her husband, Emily's mother foolishly returned to the aid of her father. Leaving her alone in the forest. not minding much, since she was ten. Emily climbed the nearest tree, keeping her eyes trained upon the cottage that was aflame several feet in front of her. Her vision sliding down to notice that her parents were being hung from their own house, their limp bodies dangling from the shingles. Emily screamed in panic
"mommy! M-mommy!"
Falling from the tree, to run back to them. The villagers all watching in horror as the flaming building groaned, sending mountainous piles of wood atop of her small body....
Emily never forgave them.
Refusing to leave the villagers content with her actions. She returned to her grounded grave, her clear form misting over the crumbling leaves of Autumn. That night all that could be heard through the peaceful night, was many bloodcurdling screams, crying for mercy. No one believed the shaking victims as they took their last breaths, petrified of the creature they had seen. However by the end of the week, none of the eighty villagers remained alive.
To this day she haunts the earth, her pinning crystal blue eyes searching for the young boy who had given her parents away to the crowd. Making up the false lie of witch craft. He was around her age, and she had fancied him at one point however, now, it was only revenge she desired.
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Character description: Emily has long white hair and a weak fragile state. As she had returned to the earth, she is now in her mid-teens with sharp features, and almost white skin/pale. She can run quite fast, and has exceptional aim with her bow, and throwing knifes. Her weaknesses are other people crying. She can't stand to hear the noise, and immiedatly crumbles to her feet in agony reliving the day she suffered.
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Emily Croselend

Postby Torchlight on November 15th, 2012, 11:07 pm

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Sorry. Try again. :) This is not correct formatting for a character sheet. We are not a freeform roleplay site, and we definitely don't have "angels" in Mizahar. You're a very creative writer, but our site has a certain structure you must adhere to.

You CAN play a ghost who died when she is young, and is hundreds of years old, but it has to be within the rules of our site. Give the Starting Guide a read! It's long, but I promise it'll be worth your time if you choose to follow our guidelines and join our community. We don't get many Ghost PCs. Maybe you could make our next great one.

Remember to read ALL the rules, as well as information about magic, different cities, and ghosts. Your username, for example, violates our most basic rule about account names being the same as your character's name.

We have a lot of great writers here. Consider giving us an honest shot! Torchlight

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