Closed To Reach the Top(Oitera)

[Red Daghul]

Daghul pulled his wings end as the three landed with ease at the bottom of the cliff where they had met, and the Endal climbed down letting Daghul then lean over to help the girl off. Red stood by offering his help in a more subtle way by just standing close just in case Oitera was light headed or anything. Having a little bit more understanding of the girl helped him understand to give her a bit more room when it came to offering his aid in things like climbing down from Daghul, or even flat out help. In the end all seemed to work out, and he hoped that Oitera had found what she was seeking so many hours ago.

The night was setting in and Daghul seemed to be tired, so the Endal wanted to let his friend rest back at home as soon as he could, but first he wanted to bid fair well to Oitera. "well, that was nothing short of a adventure" he said bowing with a friendly smile "thank you for allowing me to accompany you on this fine evening" it was formally said but in a playful way and when he finished he started towards Daghul, but still listening just in case the girl had anything else on her mind before he left.

[Oitera]

As they landed Oitera realised that she was having her arm around Red and took them away from him. Red dismounted Daghul and then waited for her to get off. She tried to dismount Daghul in the same way that Red did, it looked very professional. She didn't think she succeded very well at it, but she got of without ripping any feathers off at least.

Red thanked her for being alowed to follow her, he thanked her! That's weird, but nice. "I'm the one who should be greatful" She smiled as well, realising that she had enjoyed meeting this man. "Thank you for answering my questions and sorry for behaving so rude before. I've got... bad experience of men. You're really nice." She was honest when she thanked him and for herself she confesed that this was a man she could socialize with.

She stood waiting for them to fly away, both because it seemed most polite and she wanted to see the Eagle to fly again. This had been an adventure to remember, she had climbed a cliff and meet a nice man, that was an Endal! She smiled to herself and watched Red and Daghul, before walking back to her room to rest.

[Red Daghul]

The Endal nodded to Oitera letting her know all was forgiven, and wouldn't be held against her. Leaping onto Daghul he gave him the go ahead to take to the sky once again. The Eagle gladly took his que opened his wings and let the air take them into the darkened sky heading higher into the cold night air.

Soon the two entered into the cave they called home high upon the Reach in the aeries, and Red found himself tired though final thoughts of the day ran through his head like a river flows through the land. It was strange to see a young person who desired to be a endal so much, and it really gave the Endal a sense of what he must have been like. There was a great feeling of joy to help someone, and be able to see them reach their full potential.

As Red finally lay in bed he slowly put his thoughts to rest as he sent a good night to Daghul through his mind as he was sure the giant bird was slowly slipping away into a peaceful slumber. Then the last thought was on wondering if Oitera would one day meet a Wind Eagle who would choose her, and he could only hope it would happen.

[Whimsy]

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Experience Award

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Red Daghul

Exp
+1 Acrobatics
+1 Storytelling
+2 Climbing
+2 Rhetoric
+2 Riding: Eagle
+3 Observation

Lores
Patrolling Wind Reach
Rescuing Damsels in Distress
Being Perceptive
Providing Encouragement

Oitera

Exp
+1 Acrobatics
+1 Endurance
+1 Riding: Wind Eagle
+1 Socialisation
+3 Climbing
+3 Observation

Lores
Finding Footholds
How Red Became an Endal
The Wind Eagles
Fatigue

Comments
I really liked that this thread had such a clear objective and that both players worked well with each other to achieve it. However, I have just a few comments. To both of you, please be careful about overplaying your skills. Neither of you have any points in climbing, and so realistically, there is no way you would get to the top of a hundred and fifty foot cliff, no way at all. With 0 points in climbing, you'd have a tough time getting to the top of a tree, let alone cliff. Oitera, please be a little more realistic about getting injured: falling from three metres onto solid rock would be incredibly painful, and it's not likely that she would jump straight back up and start climbing again with perfect ease. To the both of you, please be careful about spellchecking your work. There were a lot of spelling mistakes and grammar errors, and sometimes it was hard to understand exactly what you meant. It makes it easier to read if you perform a simple spellcheck on your posts before posting them. Please PM me if you have any questions or concerns.