Looks great, Tsu! Curiously though, why are there 2 names for the Erihpas/Hara? I saw from the physical description that they're different when it comes to size, so does that mean that these are actually two types of the same species?
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Everything else seems clear to read, there's just that one thing I want to clarify.
Lonely Island - Love this. To clarify though, you said the frequency is 1-2, but then you also mentioned that there are younger members of the species.
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As an extra bonus, maybe you could expand upon when exactly do they appear and how they react to humans? Like, if a sailor gets on their back, what would he see and what would happen? EDIT: Btw, creatures which are monstrous in size actually need to go through World Development. I reaally like this idea and I hope you're willing to WD it O:
Btw, we got a new subforum for development, so go ahead and post any replies/edits
here.
Again, thank you, Tsu. Really appreciate all of this!