Skin and Scales [Blythe]

Serrif and Blythe meet again, the relationship between them deepens.

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Home of the Konti people, this ivory city is built of native konti stone half in and half out of the sea. Its borders touch the Silverwood, and stretch upwards towards Silver Lake, home of the infamous konti vision water. [Lore]

Skin and Scales [Blythe]

Postby Gossamer on February 10th, 2013, 5:21 pm

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Character: Serrif
Experience: Observation +3, Seduction +3
Lore: Being Seduced by a Konti, Loving a Konti

Character: Blythe
Experience: Observation +3, Seduction +3
Lore: Seducing a human, Loving a Human,


Additional Note: Because the thread was incomplete, there wasn’t much I could award for it. Lovely reading a Konti and a Human falling in love and expressing that love. It felt a little forced in places, but again it was incomplete, so that might explain it. I didn’t give the full points for seduction I could have even though there was a lot of writing because there was a lot of the same thing repeated over and over and mimicked by each of the PC’s in the thread. A little more creativity or a rewrite without the mimicry would result in more XP.

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