Gideon Kys

[Gideon Kys]

Character Name: Gideon Kys Race:Human Age:24 Gender:Male Appearance Height: 5,11 Skin Color: Caucasian Weight:163 Lbs Blonde hair Bicolor eyes Slightly muscular build Home Region/City/Domain Region:Sylira City:Nyka Character Concept: Charming theif, Humorous and charming in nature laidback sneaky and devilish, Friendly to the right people and never afraid to fight for whats right. History: Gideon grew up in the poor area of Nyka and was raised by his mother and his Abusive father. He had another brother who was 2 years older than him.His mother protected him and his brother from his fathers rage and often took many beatings for him. in her spare time she taught him how to play the lute. His mother died when he was 13. His 15 year old brother would often try to protect you gideon and in one instance actually stabbed their father in the leg with a home made silver dagger. Out of rage Gideons father beat up his brother so terribly he was Hospitalized. His brother died 2 days later because of the Horifficness of his wounds. Gideon swore revenge on his father and inherited his brothers dagger. Gideon ran away. And for a long time he did not return home. When he finally did however he had almost nothing left. He became an orphan. but became fasicnated with pick pocketing and forgery and Larceny. He decided then he would pursue a life of theft and not let the bond of normal society hold him down and limit his amount of fun or wealth. Personality Merits and Flaws Loses Mental control When Family or Fatherly topics are interjected into a conversation Is pretty laidback and thus makes friends easier through his charm and humor Equipment 1 Set of Clothing (cloak/coat & footwear included) 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: 1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap) Food for a week or 1 bottle of embalming fluid (for Nuits) 1 eating knife Flint & Steel Family Heirloom Carries his Deceased Brothers Dagger. Ledger Ledger 100 gold rimmed mizas Purchased Black Cloak -10 sm Total 98 gm Housing 1 basic 20x20 single room cottage (400 sq feet) with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table. Skills Skills Stealth:8 Locksmithing:9 Larceny:8 +15 RB Escape Artist:10 Running:8 Forgery:7 Lore: Lore of Steady Breathing Lore of Quick Grabbing Language English-Fluent Zithanese-Basic Tukant-Poor

[Siren]

Hey there!

I'm Siren, the local and completely harmless Character Sheet Liaison. In order to help you get the most out of your experience on Mizahar, I have taken a look at at your Character Sheet to make sure that everything is up to par!

Unfortunately, there are a few changes that have to be made before we can move forward! Please see the tabs below for details on these issues. Once the issues have been addressed, feel free to send me a private message, let me know you've fixed what I've pointed out and I will gladly remove the intervention!

 

Birthday

I noticed that you just have Gideons age listed! It would be great if you could also include a birth DAY, Seaons and Year

 

Skills

I am not quite sure what is going on here, but you have 50 Starting Package points and 15 Racial Bonus points to use. It doesn't look like you have used up all of your Starting Package Points, since your skill point total should be 65.

 

Lores

Your lores aren't quite there yet. The Lore of Quick Grabbing isn't specific enough. If it pertains to Larceny, try wording it something like Larceny: Pickpocketing Quickly.

 

Languages

English isn't a language on Mizahar. Perhaps you mean Common for your Fluent language?

Write on!
-Siren