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This northernmost city is the home of Morwen, The Goddess of Winter, and her followers who dwell year round in a land of frozen wonder. [Lore]

The Plundered Apple (Coren)

Postby Valkyrie on January 11th, 2013, 8:52 pm

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Coren trudged slowly through the thick, powdery top layer of snow as the darkness of the night pressed down on him. Clouds filled the sky and prevented the luminance of Morwen’s Lights from brightening the ice city leaving only shadows and grayness in its wake. The city was quiet at night, it’s inhabitants enjoyed play and recreation but they were also hard workers and rose early in the morning. A few late night citizens and some patrolling Icewatch were the only rare signs of life.

The buildings seemed dark and lifeless as Coren continued through the city. There were no lights to be seen. Strike that thought. Coren slowed his purposeful stride as he noticed the shimmer of light on the snow coming from the crevice beneath the door to the Drunken Apple. The Drunken Apple, the only place in town that manufactured alcoholic beverages, was an important building to anyone who enjoyed a good drink in a pub. The place was owned by two Vanthas, both of which were unlikely to be awake and working at this time. Oona was far too uptight and structured with her schedule to be awake this late when she rose so early in the morning while Keltiss was too concerned with sampling the product to maintain consciousness past the early evening.

Coren naturally felt curious about the light, and with no other plans but perhaps some sleep that night he figured he had the time to investigate. Perhaps Keltiss had merely fallen asleep and forgotten to extinguish the light. If that had happened Coren wanted to make sure he prevented the place from burning down which many pub-goers in the city would find a tragedy indeed.

Coren approached the door to the Drunken Apple and reached forward to tug it open gently and with as little noise as possible. No use waking Keltiss unless it was necessary. The poor drunk would have a bad enough headache in the morning as it was. As Coren peaked inside the building he saw a young man rummaging among the barrels of hard cider. Coren’s eyebrows scrunched together as he realized the man had a much smaller build than Keltiss.

As the door continued to swing open it emitted a small creeeeeak and the man immediately turned towards the entrance and locked startled eyes with Coren. Now that the man was facing him, Coren could plainly see the man’s hand was filled with gold mizas. As his eyes traveled across the room Coren could plainly see that the chests and desk inside had been pulled apart and looked through as drawers and objects were scattered around them. Coren’s attention was immediately returned to the man who had panicked and begun to charge towards the smaller door at the back of the building.
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Postby Coren on February 11th, 2013, 10:11 pm

Whatever Coren had imagined to find in the drunken apple, a startled thief who was helping himself to the hard won earings of Oona and Keltis, making a bloody mess of the entire tavern while doing so. The surprised thief and mage looked at each other for a few tense moments, a stunned silence hanging over the scene. The young man quickly regained his wits and made a mad dash for the backdoor. Barely moments later Coren managed to get over his atonishment at the situation and gave chase after the thief. Not really bothering to yell anything at the thief. It wasn't as if yelling anything at the bloody thief would make him change his mind, it would only waste his breath.

Coren barreled through the messy room, barely retaining his footing as he nearly tripped over a bottle on the floor. Still he managed to keep upright and continued on towards the door, gritting his teeth and taking an extra effort as the thief was already vanishing through the door and to coren's annoyance slammed it shut behind him. The distance was way to short for Coren to come to a halt, so the robed mage just braced for impact and vowed to pay the guy back in kind later.

He rammed against the solid wooden door with a dull thud, groaning a bit in pain, that was going to leave a mark tomorrow. He quickly worked the handle and threw open the door. There was no time to waste now. He quickly glanced around the seemingly deserted street. He didn't see anybody running down the street, he didn't even hear any rapid footsteps in the vicinity so that meant...
Coren's train of thoughts was interrupted as something sharp was suddenly pressed into the back of his robe, poking irritatingly close to his spine.
“Right, hiding somewhere, clever.” Coren deadpanned.

“Don't petch with me hoody.” The thief snapped back, not amused by his retort in the least. “Just keep looking that way, throw your money on the ground and then walk forward. Then you don't have to get hurt.” A small prod with the knife. “Well, get on with it!”

Coren suppressed a sigh, this was just plain embarrassing. “Yes, just give me a moment,” he took a small step forward as he began digging around in his robe with his left hand. Smiling underneath his mask as he didn't feel the knife pressing in his back anymore. “Just give me some time to find my purse in this robe between all the other things I have stuffed underneath it.” Coren said in the same deadpan as before, slowly gathering his djed in his right arm, slowly beginning to push out his astral body of the limb. Letting it hang beside his body, hoping that the darkness wouldn't let the thief pick up on it.
“I don't really know why you are doing this though. You don't sound foreign and you still seem quite young from what I can hear and have seen of you. Any reason you are paving the road to criminality this early in your life?” Coren just needed to keep the guy talking for a while as he seemingly searched for his purse, just long enough to get his projected arm out.

“Petch you slow old man.” The youth snapped back in a mocking tone. “I'm not here to talk, just get that purse on the ground and step forward.”

“Of course, of course.” Coren threw something he picked out of his robe on the ground. He knew that the dark night would obscure whatever he threw away from the boy's eyes, just as he took a few steps forward he completely freed his astral body from its fleshy prison, and without any warning he quickly turned himself around and rammed his astral fist in the abdomen of the young man.
It wasn't that hard of a punch, but it completely blindsided him. Giving coren enough time to coil his astral fingers around the boy's throat. Giving the boy's neck a squeeze for good measure as he felt the guy stiffen underneath his touch.
“Now if you don't want me to finish what I started throw the knife at your feet and kick it over towards me.” Coren stated in an icy tone. Ignoring the boy's sudden babbling and frightened mutters of mage and the fact he just wetted his pants judging from the puddle forming underneath him.
“Did I stutter? Drop the knife and kick it over to me.” Coren repeated in what he hoped was an authoritative tone. He felt the boy nod maniacly as he dropped the knife and kicked it towards him. Coren gave it a slight glance before picking it up. Making sure to tighten his hold on the boy's neck as he did it to make sure the kid didn't get any ideas.
“Now you'll march towards the main street where I'll hand you over to the first patrol I see and get the rest of this matter settled. I'll be walking behind you and any attempt to escape will end up costly for you. Understood?” Coren felt another fit of maniacal nodding.
“Good, now march.”
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The Plundered Apple (Coren)

Postby Valkyrie on March 5th, 2013, 4:06 pm

It wouldn’t take long for a patrol to find Coren and his captive thief. All the guards look harried from long nights watching out for petty criminals like the one Coren had his hands on. Two guards accepted the criminal into custody, using short lengths of rope they carried on their persons to tie the man’s hands. The leader of the small patrol approached Coren with a tired smile.

“Thank you for your help citizen. I think I’ve seen you around the barracks before, I will have to let my superior know you helped us out. We appreciate the help in apprehending this young man, his mother will certainly be displeased to hear about it. I don’t have much to reward you with, but I hope this is satisfactory. You have my gratitude.” The guard smiled and dug around in his pocket searching for something. He held his hand out to Coren and gave the mage several gold mizas.

Waving in farewell, the patrol hurried back towards their barracks to question the young criminal and find the Vantha mother who would certainly have a few choice words about the petty thefts.


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Coren :
Experience
1 Observation
1 Investigation
1 Projection
1 Intimidation

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Chasing a Thief
Taking Your Opponent By Surprise
The Gratitude of the Icewatch

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Notes: Sorry this took so long, I hope you enjoy the extra change! This was a quick but thorough thread. Coren certainly didn’t waste any time in dealing with the thief.


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