[Note by Whimsy] Sulphor Rath Pitrius

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Sulphor Rath Pitrius

Postby Sulphor Rath on March 24th, 2013, 2:25 pm

Sulphor Rath Pitrius


Race: Isur
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Birthday: 27th of Fall, 493 AV
Birthplace: Sultros


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Appearance

Silvery blonde hair adornes his near-feminine face, along with the darkbrown tattoo on the left of his face. Not to mention the jewel attached to his forehead just above the bridge of his nose. He looks, and is, young. Being only 19 years old in Isurian terms, he's far from an adult and his looks add to that. While he's fairly intelligent and wise for his years, he's still a child in appearance as well as attitude. Often enough to annoy his father anyway.

Regardless, this is about his looks and, contrary to most Isurs, he stands out. Usually in a physical body-utopia where everyone looks like they're perfectly sculped out of marble, only the ugly stand out. But this isn't the case, while he does look slightly feminine thanks to his facial features, he's not an ugly child; His shiny hair, eyes, jewelry and tattoo make for quite a lasting impression to other Isur. His body isn't as honed as most counterparts of his age, mainly because he delved deep into the arcane arts and as such slacked a bit on the standard Isur care for his body development.

He's still considered strong and well built, to humans, but not quite as much to other Isur. He's fairly tall for his age, standing at around 4 feet, while weighing it at nearly 150 lbs; Because of his dense skin, muscles and bones.

Character Concept & History

With his mother dying during a Zith raid, his father succumbing to shame and guilt, he was a lonely child having nothing but the desire to revive his father and his family's pride. As his father fell out of grace from the Silver Tower and the Sentinel entourage, he started to drown himself in alcohol and alienate himself from everyone.

Fortunately an openhearted, tearjerking conversation between Sulphor and his father made him change his ways. He vowed to not let his mistakes affect Sulphor anymore than it already has. After that he started to train Sulphor in different magic branches in order for him to be allowed into the Silver Tower. He'd use any and all means to get his connections in the Silver Tower, as corrupted as those connections may have become after his descent into a constant drunken stupor, to allow his son to at least take a shot at the Silver Tower and all its brilliance.

Soon it'd be time for Sulphor's father to contact those he once called comrades.



Language

Fluent Language: Isur
Basic Language: Common
Poor Language: Ancient Tongue

Language

1 Mark from Izurdin: Izentor I

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Summoning 20 SP 20 Competent
Hypnotism 15 SP 15 Novice
Magecraft 5 SP 5 Novice
Auristics 5 SP 5 Novice
Body Building 5 SP 5 Novice
Blacksmithing 10 RB 10 Novice


Lores

Lore of Reaching for the Stars
Lore of Overcoming Father's Reputation

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: Rath's Pet "Smirky" Iguana Lizard

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Housing

Location: Sultros

House: Housing District; Pitrius City; Block 3 / House 7 (Owned by his father)

Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM
Cashed-In Own Housing +500 GM 600 GM


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Sulphor Rath Pitrius

Postby Whimsy on April 6th, 2013, 6:12 am

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Hello!

I am here to give you some tips and pointers on your CS in order to make your play here at Mizahar a lot smoother and easier. There are two main issues with your CS that we need to address before you may continue roleplay.

Firstly, you state that your PC's mother was killed in a Zith raid. The Zith cannot make it into the underground caverns of the Isur, and so you will need to specify how exactly this happened. If she was on the surface, she needs a reason to have been there, as the Isur are very strict about who they let in and out of the kingdom.

Secondly, you state that you have cashed in your housing package for the extra 500gm, and yet you do in fact have housing listed. This housing in the Isur kingdom is not free - the 500gm of your starting package pays for it.

Once you have addressed these issues, please PM me and I'll remove this intervention.

Thanks,
Whimsy

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