Opette

[Opette]

OPETTE Appearance Race: Akvatari Gender: Female Age: 21 Birthday: 13, Spring, 892 Birthplace: Abura Appearance: Opette measures a full five feet and seven inches, from the tip of her tail to the top of her head. Like all Akvatari, Opette's most distinguishing features are that instead of a pair of legs she instead has the lower body of a seal and what can only be described butterfly wings on her back. Her smooth tail is a startling sky blue. Her wings are a vibrant orange, accented by black and speckled with white dots. Opette's skin is evenly tanned, evidence of her long hours spent sitting in the sun and composing poems. Her hair is long, wispy, and a golden, almost honey color. Rarely does she put it up and much prefers to keep it messy and unkept. Her eyes are pale green, almond shaped and somewhat sleepy looking, showing off Opette's generally laid-back and carefree demeanor. The part of her body that resembles a human is toned and muscled if a bit on the flat side as far as the chest area goes. Her hands are somewhat blistered and calloused from writing and sculpting and often one can expect to see them bandaged after Opette has spent a particularly long time writing. As custom for Akvatari, Opette's only piece of clothing is the wide strip of black cloth around her upper torso, although Opette herself often complains about how restraining it is, and sometimes will go completely without it without a care as to how such a thing may appear to others. Character Concept Opette is an extremely laid-back and indifferent Akvatari, in fact if she shows any interest in anything at all, it's in her writing. Opette loves her poetry. Even her name is an anagram of Poet , with an added t and e for "poetic effect". Her poems' subjects range from morbid, to blissfully melancholy. Her secondary interest is sculpting, a mere "hobby" as she dubs it. Although this hobby has kept her funded, regular trips to Zeltiva are made to sell off her latest statue. All earnings earned from that particular sale go into buying supplies for yet another sculpture. Her daily routine is simply, write most of the day, sculpt the rest, taking a two breaks for meals. She is quite fond of the sunshine, and one will most often expect to find her sitting in the sun while she's sculpting or composing her next poem. Opette prefers flying to swimming, although she is skilled at both as most Akvatari are, but trips are usually taken through the air if she can manage it. When talking with strangers she has a tendency to over use long words and metaphors making it incredibly difficult to keep up with what she is saying. However she is less cruel if she actually knows the person, and will make an effort to simplify things for them. Opette is a self-proclaimed pacifist, and does not believe in using physical violence as a solution to problems. She also has absolutely no faith in the gods, and worships nothing, finding praying and bowing down to deities "just silly". Character History To be added to at a later date... Language Fluent Language: Common Basic Language: Arumenic Poor Language: Nari Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Sculpting 15 RB 15 Novice Writing 20 SP 20 Novice Philosophy 15 SP 15 Novice Intelligence 10 SP 10 Novice Lores Lore of Poetry: Format for an Epic Lore of Sculpting Human Anatomy Possessions 1 Set of Clothing 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Wood) -Brush (Wood) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 100 Gold Mizas Heirloom: A quill fashioned from an eagle's feather, given to her by her mother. Housing Location: Abura House: Opette's house is a 20x20 room at the very tip top of a spiraling tower in Abura with no furnishings but a cot. Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Banshee]

Hello hello!

My name is Banshee, and I am here to help you with the daunting task of joining the Mizahar Community. It is my duty to assist you with your Character Sheet, so that you can get to writing quickly and properly.

And I've noticed several things that need addressed in your Character Sheet, that will need to be fixed before you can begin roleplaying here. You will need to read all of the tabs below, make the appropriate changes, then send me a Private Message. When that has all been done, I will remove this Intervention, and you can get back to roleplaying. Have a great day, and I can't wait to see more of your writing soon!

 

Skills

You are missing 10 Skill Points. As an Akvatari, you get 50 Starting Package (SP) skill points, and 10 Racial Bonus (RB) skill points for a total of 60 points. You only have a total of 60, so feel free to add 10 more.

 

Lores

Your lore of composing epic poetry isn't quite right. Poetry is a skill itself. Now, if you wanted you could have a Lore to supplement that skill, such as Poetry: Format for an Epic. or something along those lines.

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