Il'adru Nefris

[Ranakadia]

Into the Gaping Jaws : Charoda Male Twenty-six 32nd Day of Winter, 487AV Falyndar, Charbosi ~Physical Structure [i]Standing at an advantageous six feet in total, Il’adru is far above the prime average height of most male Charodae. Even amongst the most common mouth breather, he is consider to be tall. His frame is more so bulkier than most, yet that is merely an estranged mutation , to the adverse current and tidal conditions of his most commonly traversed habitat. In ocean floor light, his skin is a typical taint of dark green with cascades of deep blues, yet in naked sunlight it appears to be of a lighter spectrum of green. What parts of his skin haven’t retained their youthful rubbery lineage, have ascertained a slightly rougher degree of texture, although maintaining a somewhat sleek appearance above water. Nicks and minor scarring persist throughout his body, highlighted by unique reparation textures which give the scars a youth like’ image, as though pertained but a day ago. Those which are most prominent are still barely visible, and the stories they tell are not those of battles but merely of close encounters with other sea-dwelling creatures. Although Il’adru is still young in many ways, his face is that of a chiseled nature, that which belongs to a matured being yet somewhat adhering in many ways. Appendages and features that make up his face, are mostly striking and opposed to anything too bulbous or annular. His most prominent features are his cheekbones, chin and the ridges that form his brow and crown. Unlike most, the rear section of Il’adru’s head, where most would find tentacles or other common Charodae appendages, forms to make a symbolic trine. ~Accessories: Coral fixtures paint and mar the Charosa’s body quite marvelously, sections of the tricep and the shoulder boast beautifully colored formations on either arm, and the same can be found on the base, either side of the mid section and the head of the spine. ~Personality There is much to be desired with Il’adru’s temperament, for he is not of your usual Charoda, who might still bear you with gifts, after you spat in their face. The less than jovial Charoda is much akin to aa sculptors ice block, frosty by touch yet if you strike the right vein, he may well become the sculpture you have desired. He is distrusting, most of his encounters with sea-farers have left a salty taste within his mouth, and that in itself is a feat considering his natural habitat. Yet, should one prove their value to him, like most worthy objects he will hoard you and protect you. ~Character History: ~ Starting out: Naturally, like most Charoda Il’adru was somewhat of a versed explorer, spending the majority of his time away from predestined duties. Although Il’adru never dreamed of neglecting said duties, such as schooling or benefiting the coral city with construction tasks, it could be held that the sprightly adventurer may/should’ve spent more time doing so. His thoughts alas were often filled with wonder and intrigue, thus he sought mostly to endeavor in finding valuables of fictitious birth, seeking marvels and wonders that were mostly ‘more far fetched than tea-from-china.’. ~ Ah’, here we are: As cynical retribution to his unsatisfied hunger, he often found himself in the most ill-begotten circumstances, those of which left there gift upon his rubbery exterior. Towards his early twenties, Il’adru had already become somewhat sour, battered and much of a veteran at mind. He has forgotten much of his jovial nature, it has absconded and in it’s stead it left a skeptical and hollow shard. Yet, this has not bound him to being a hermit nor a home-stead dweller , it has simply sharpened his mind and roughened his once smooth edges. Skills & Lores   Physical Skill EXP Total Proficiency Swimming 10 SP 10/100 Novice Pole arms 10 SP 10/100 Novice Combat 5 SP 5/100 Novice   Lifestyle Skill EXP Total Proficiency Herbalism 5 SP 5/100 Novice Coral Manipulation 10 RB 5SP 15/100 Novice Wilderness Survival 5 SP 5/100 Novice Appraisal 10 SP 10/100 Novice   Languages Char (Fluent) Common (Basic) Fratava (Poor)   Lores Wilderness Survival (Ocean/Sea): Lore of Svefra Culture Lore of Religion: Laviku Possessions & Ledger   Clothing Shirt Breeches Undergarments Boots   Equipment Backpack Waterskin Balanced Rations Flint & steel Eating knife Wooden comb & brush Bar of soap Razor Pike (Heirloom)   Armor N/A   Weapons Pike   Misc. N/A   Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 Gold Mizas 100 Gold Mizas Shelter-Cash In + 500 Gold Mizas 600 Gold Mizas Heirloom: A pike, which before receiving Il’adru’s hands had never seen the dawn of battle.

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