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Lavira // When words are as slippery as fish.

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The westernmost tip of Kalea, Wind Reach is home to an amazing group of people and their giant eagle mounts. [Lore]

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Postby Johanne on June 6th, 2013, 8:39 pm

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81st Summer 513AV. The Enclave.

Two Avora had stopped by the Craft Gallery that morning, Johanne tending her stand with all the tender loving care she could afford. Here in this strange city of birds and stone, sometimes the only things Johanne could cling to were the arts she had once known: making paper, binding books. She had had an import of leather, cured and tanned in Thunder Bay, making its way in a caravan up the long and winding Pass, brought first to the armorers and second to the craftsmen. With a thin crafts knife Johanne had borrowed from the tailor the next stall over, she was cutting the leather into a size big enough to be wrapped around a collection of parchment, to make her own leather notebook.

Then the Avora had come. Their heads held high, near the top of the food chain they had nothing to fear. Johanne could do nothing when they asked for two of her notebooks for a discounted price. Handing them over, she received a pittance for them, putting the pinions dejectedly into her moneybox. But that was not all.

"Foreigner, you Common speak, yes?" Their Common was crude, but the message came across easily enough.
"Yes, I speak Common." Johanne nodded in the affirmative. The Avora looked at each other, and then the tall man spoke.
"The Enclave teach us how to speak it. A seminar. Do you know of it?"
"No..." But it was the wrong answer. Looking at each other in disappointment, the two Avora left her stall, leaving Johanne's mind reeling.

Without thinking, without finishing cutting out her leather, without neatening her desk, Johanne picked up her satchel and moved, quickly winding through the Warrens to the Enclave. She had visited the library before, but Johanne could not get enough of the smell of books, and the prospect of a seminar on them was tantalising. Quickly, once there, she made her way to the front desk.

"Excuse me, but the seminar... where is it?" Johanne could only hope the Inarta woman behind the desk would know what she meant, but the learned girl simply rolled her eyes and pointed to the back, where the classrooms were. Quickly, Johanne walked through, and into the seminar.

Two of the Avora were there, with ink and quills and the notebooks Johanne had sold them not chimes before. A few other Inarta were scattered around the room, and at the front of the room stood a blonde tanned merchant. An outsider. Just like her.

Quickly and quietly, Johanne scooted into a seat and waited for the class to begin.
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Postby Lavira on June 11th, 2013, 3:35 am

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The young woman was looking forward to a day off that didn't involve therapy, training, or study. Of course, her preferred study tended to be in the Enclave with any bird-book she could find as opposed to sitting in a classroom learning how to write better. Vira felt inadequate compared to some of the Avora (and even a few Chiets) she had seen in here, her chickenscratch rather paltry and depressing where theirs was at least legible.

Knowing she had intended to attend the classes today, Vira had gone to market yesterday to obtain parchment and lead to write with. It'd cost about two pinions (enough parchment to cover the class itself and then some as well as lead enough to write without stressing) so not a huge dent in her purse made from this.

Presently, the chiet sat mid-class, looking at the blank parchment discouragedly. Really, what need had she of writing other than maybe to keep track of the hatchlings growth? It would help the Yasi when it came time for them to try and bond with the pair, if the eaglets wanted any of this seasons youth, that is. It was still a few years before they'd grow proper feathers for flight anyways. These distracting thoughts derailed her from the rooms chatter for a brief period before she was brought back to it in full and noticed a very un-Inartan woman making her way in, looking about seemingly in search of a seat. She had a very slender look about her, too thin, too tall, too dark of head. Vira wondered if she was perhaps a visitor of the city here to take advantage of the course being offered presently.

When she sat nearby, however, the teen gave her a friendly smile, though that maimed right eye and veiled stare it gave did not do well for the look. For all her appearance, however, the genuine kindness was hard to miss. "Hi there. Wanting to learn some writing too?"

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Postby Johanne on June 15th, 2013, 4:52 pm

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Johanne jumped, looking up wildly, when a soft and kind voice spoke to her in the chirping language of Nari. She knew enough after living in Wind Reach to pick out the basics of the language, but still she did not know enough of the language to feel confident responding. The fact that a stranger was willingly speaking to the skittish outsider was strange to Johanne, and something she was truly unused to.

The girl who spoke up to Johanne was young, perhaps a few years younger than the tall slender Johanne. She was tanned, toned and quite beautiful: or she would be, if it weren't for the mottled unseeing eye that wasted space on her face. Johanne, blushing, was careful not to look too long or stare too hard at the injured organ, instead focusing on the gentle and friendly words that came from the girl.

"Yes," Johanne replied, though in Common. "I'm hoping to better my ability to write in Nari. I'm sorry for speaking Common, my Nari is not very skilled." She tried to keep her language simple, not knowing how much the Inarta would know of her home language. Normally Johanne would keep to herself, but the Denvali was too shy to snub the woman's friendly response so. But still, her self-consciousness meant that she was not the most personable of people.

The blonde woman at the front of the classroom was organising papers on the desk, so they perhaps had a few minutes to chat. If Lavira were to continue the conversation, Johanne would most certainly respond, but focus on the teacher when the class began. Soon enough, the blonde woman would cough loudly and call the class to attention.
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Postby Lavira on June 16th, 2013, 4:52 pm

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"That's okay, my writing's not the best either." She said, keeping an ear open for when the class was about to start. Vira switched to common for the other, a courtesy not many Inartans might have given her, but one the friendlier teen felt more appropriate especially after the other clearly said she was not that skilled in it. "Our language can be hard for others to use, anyways, if you're not accustomed to its nuances." It was an extremely vocal language where as Common sounded more airy, even nasally in some situations. Nari came almost entirely from the throat.

Vira had seen that kind of flush before, more in herself than in another. As gregarious as the Inartans were, Vira was kind of weird when it came to that. Whether due to possible inbreeding, or some other deformity, it didn't seem to cause any problems. Being less sociable let her study more and focus on the things she would rather be focusing on.

Reaching across the space between them with her right hand, the teen spoke once more. "I'm Lavira. Are you new to Wind Reach?" It was better to broach on friendliness than uncertainty; if that time in the crack had taught her nothing else, broadening her horizons and socializing was one of them. The taller woman was clearly not a Wind Reach'r. But the cough from the front halted further dialogue between them and Vira pulled back into her own bubble, lead in hand and poised to begin.

"Good morning, everyone; it is good to see so many interested in this class today! As I am sure you are aware, I will be teaching the nuances of writing. I trust everybody at least knows the Common alphabet? If you do not, you may wish to join the reading course instead. Does everybody have a pen or quill, and parchments?" The merchant teaching the course asked, her hands folded complacently before her.

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Postby Auric on August 14th, 2013, 6:10 pm

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YAY FOR GRADES
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Additional Notes: Sad to see this thread ended so early -- I'm sure it would have been amazing, both of you guys are great writers. Anyway, there wasn't much to give, but if you think I skipped over something, please message me.

Johanne, if you come back, and would like a grade, please message me!

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