Completed A Meeting Before Departing

Ariann decides to see Ricky one last time before she leaves on her venture.

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A Meeting Before Departing

Postby Ricky Maze on June 13th, 2013, 5:29 am

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Ricky watched as Ariann went off, never once did she look back after finally saying goodbye. There was a troubled look in his expression for a while but the guard found it erased with a smile and chuckle, as she no longer came to be in sight he returned to keeping watch as was his post. "Silly girl, don't matter what you say." He mused with another chuckle, the idea behind her words failed to change his mind. "No matter what ya think lass, I'm always gonna think ya important. Leila and I convinced ya to take a chance and I promised to keep ya safe when ya did. Ye'll always be that same girl to me who I'll gladly keep safe, and I've faith that ye'll come back."

He then looked out to the sea that stretched ever far out of the docks, a small breeze hugged him gently as his smile became warm and infectious. "Whether it be Zulrav's wind or Laviku's water to guide ya, ye'll come back someday in the future. Of that I've no doubt." He assured himself with a nod and silent prayer, his mind ready to tend to the task of duty once more.

"Ricky's words.", "Ricky's thoughts.", "Telion's words.", "Hannah's words.", "Other's words."
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A Meeting Before Departing

Postby Eldritch on July 22nd, 2013, 3:43 am

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Ricky :
Skills
Socialization +3
Observation +2
Interrogation +1
Persuasion +1

Lores
-Worrying about your unborn child
-Keeping your mind on the job
-Worried about drive as a Wave Guard
-Morphing: The magic of changing the body
-Ariann is important to you


Ariann :
Skills
Socialization +3
Observation +1
Persuasion +1

Lores
-Telling Ricky goodbye
-Wanting to change your body
-Loving Ricky



Notes :
Sorry this took so long to get to, once again great thread Ricky.

Ariann, I'm curious as to where your PC heard of Morphing. I checked your CS and you did not seem to have a lore pertaining to Morphing. Did your PC research it in a thread not graded yet? For future reference you may want to keep in mind that just because your PC is a wizard does not mean they will know about other magic disciplines. Research or education from another wizard who knows the discipline fairly well is necessary for such knowledge. Otherwise it was lovely. :)


If you have any comments/questions/concerns about your grade please PM me and we will work something out.

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