[Note by Jupiter] Mie

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Mie

Postby Mie on June 29th, 2013, 7:06 pm

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Appearance
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Race: Human
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Birthday: 45, summer, 494.
Birthplace: Sylira
Appearance: Mie has long very dark brown, straight hair and light blue eyes. She is 5'7 and with with a slim frame. She is slightly tanned.



Character Concept

Mie is a curious and adventurous person, she can often be wild and erratic in her behavior but also enjoys the quiet moments for herself where she can ponder her life. She loves the outdoors and traveling and she rarely miss an opportunity to get out of the city. She has a hard time discerning common lies from truths and tends to be naive when it come to people. She likes company as long as it's not a crowd. She can get very claustrophobic with too many people around and tend to spend as little time around larger crowds as possible.

She speaks her mind, often without much concern for the consequences and see little use in formalities. She is not striving to be rude but can sometimes, to the more fancy people, come off as such.

Character History

Mie's mother died when she was born due to complications. Her father struck with grief turned all his attention to his new little girl and got his friend wife to be a wetnurse for her. Without any close family, her father turned all his attention to his new baby and he brought her up with all the love and care a child could hope for.

He was a great hunter and often went on hunting trips, and while this stood on, she had her wetnurse babysit for her. Maria, the wetnurse, was a strict woman with many rules to uphold, not at all like her father, and she would often sit in the window and wait for him to return with his trophies and hunting stories.

When Mie got older she got to go on minor trips with her father, trips that she adored above all else. She had always loved the feeling of being out in nature surrounded by all its glory with her dad. He taught her many things of his trade and she was a fast learner. She would always beg her father to stay out longer, dismissing the dangers altogether.

One day her father had been out on a longer hunting trips, his comrades came home with his dead body. No matter how hard Mie tried, the others in the party would not tell her just exactly what had happened out there, but the wounds were grievous and something ferocious had surely attacked her beloved father.

Alone and in sorrow she collected what she had and moved out of the expensive house and got an overnight stay at an inn. She had collected what she could from her father, his tent, his horse and his tools, but there was no fortune for her to inherit so she decided to do what her father did. She went on hunting parties with his fathers friend, whenever she got the chance, and sometimes went out on her own to fetch what fur and meat she could strap on her horse and carry with her to sell. Feeling restless in the huge city she always looked for a way to leave and secretly saved up for the day she could do something else with her life than just exist.

Language

Fluent Language: Common
Basic Language:
Poor Language:

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Bow and flethcing 5# SP 5# Novice
Archery shortbow 15# RB 15# Novice
Archery longbow 10 # SP 10# Novice
Hunting 10 # SP 10# Novice
Wilderness survival 15 # SP 15# Novice
Riding, horse 5 # SP 5# Novice
Skinning 5 # SP 5# Novice


Lores

Lore of Bronze woods.
Lore of tracking


Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
-1 large tent (4 persons)
-larpe tarp
-100ft rope
-flint and steel
-lantern,
-2 torches
-bedroll
-blanket
-fishing tackle and hook
-a riding horse
-a full set of tack
-large set of saddlebags
-Hunter/trappers kit
-Flethcers kit
-Shortbow arrows 20
55 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: Shortbow

Housing

Location: In the bronce woods in Syliras

House: Mie has a large tent in deep green and brown colors.


Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM
Hunter/trappers kit -25 GM 75 GM
Fletchers kit -20 GM 55 GM
shortbow arrows 20 -1 54 GM


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Mie

Postby Jupiter on August 6th, 2013, 5:19 am

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Hey Mie!

I’m Jupiter, one of the Character Sheet Liaisons here in Mizahar! I happened upon your character sheet, and upon looking over it I’ve found some issues that will need to be fixed!

  • In your skills, the skills Archery shortbow and Archery longbow should be Weapon(Shortbow) and Weapon (Longbow).
  • Your lores are far too broad. a Good way to fix this would be to focus on a more specific aspect of the Bronze woods and tracking. For example you could have something like Lore of Bronze Woods Flora, Lore of Herbs in the Bronze Woods, Lore of Tracking Small Animals, or Lore of Tracking Footprints. Hopefully this will help you to fix them!
  • In your possessions, please choose between a cloak or a coat.
  • You need to choose a specific breed of horse. Here is a list of the available horses! Just remember that the one you choose must be 200 gm or less.

Send me a PM once you’ve completed these changes! I’ll then remove this post and approve your character sheet! Until your have fixed these problems, please refrain from playing your character. If you have any questions about anything at all, feel free to contact me about them! I’ll do all I can to help you out! :)


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