Completed New start | Summer 513

[Yumi Seishen]

Yumi shifted uncomfortably for bit as she walked in and stond near the door. This was the first time she walked into the house of someone she planned on watching, or stalking in her case. While she was a bit hesitant about being so close to her, she did kind of want to. She did like being around Kujyaku, and seeing an open invitation to stay with her did make her a little happy, but still a unsure. She hesitated a bit after Kujyaku asked her about why she came here and about her parents; it wasn't something she liked to talk about. After a few minutes of silence she spoke quietly, "They were killed by a Zith when I was really young... I decided to come to Zeltiva because people kept trying to capture me in Ravok because I'm a Kelvic..." She looked down with a mixture of emotions on her face and was starting to shake a bit while squeezing one hand into a tight fist.

[Kujyaku]

Kujyaku was silent, in fear she would she would say the wrong thing. Then she decided to speak. "I never knew my father, but most of what I remember from my life before my second life is how I died... Me and my mother were taking a walk, when suddenly something struck her in the neck with an arrow. I screamed for her, and for help, but none came. I started to run, but was struck too in the back...." Kujyaku saw Yumi's emotion and her fists. With a sudden urge of emotion, Kujyaku went over and hugged Yumi tightly. "Even though its hard, the past is the past. There is nothing we could of done to change it." She let go of Yumi. "I moved to Zeltiva because this is a place where everyone is accepted. I am sure no one will ever try anything with you. No one should ever do that to you." Kujyaku looked out the window, it must of been 3 or 4. You should get some sleep, it's too late for you to go. There are drunk sailors and thieves at night. You can take the bed." Kujyaku kept staring at the moon, then looked at Yumi. "You know, you don't need to put your guard up with me, I won't do anything to hurt you, state your mind when you need it." Kujyaku quickly made a bed for herself next to the bed. "It must of been hard for you before you met me."

[Yumi Seishen]

Yumi didn't look up but nodded in agreement about staying the night. She stayed near the door for a few minutes before calming down and taking off her clothes to chang into her tiger form. After she changed she walked over to the bed and curled up next to it as Kujyaku went to sleep. "... Good night..." Yumi closed her eyes and slowly settled into a dreamless sleep.

[Eldritch]

Yumi :

Skills
Socialization +2
Observation +1
Astronomy +1

Lores
-Planning to find a source of income
-Kuj: Ethaefal
-Dragged to the library at night

Kujyaku :

Skills
Botany +1
Socialization +2
Observation +1
Astronomy +1
Herbalism +1

Lores
-Identifying Mint plants through scent
-Yumi: new to Zeltiva
-Taking Yumi to the library
-Yumi's parents were killed by Zith

Notes :

Hmm... there was not really much to award here for you Yumi, your posts were rather short and lacked a deal of substance to them. I'd suggest you attempt to lengthen your posts out in the future, describe the character's thoughts as well as the environment perhaps. Just my advice. Also... there are no forests near the city of Zeltiva, the terrain in the immediate area is rocky and hilly. You'd probably have to go out a couple of bells from the city before running into a forest.

If you have any comments/questions/concerns about your grade please PM me and we will work something out.

Keep on writing!