Completed A Perfect Day of Hunting

What's a more beautiful than a deer running for it's life, the sound of thudding hooves an paws, plus growls? Wait-- WHAT?!

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Stretching northward along the coastline of the Suvan Sea, the Cobalt Mountains are the home of the Bronze Wood, numerous ruins, and creatures both strange and fantastical.

A Perfect Day of Hunting

Postby Sei Tendo on July 27th, 2013, 11:58 pm

Sei Tendo
47th of Summer, 513 A.V



The air around the bronze wood was tense with silence. The usual rustling bronze and gold leaves were silent. The only sound was the lapping of the deer drinking water from a puddle. Suddenly the deer rose it's weary head, as a white blur dashed before it's eyes, to fast to see. The deer stood absolutely still, as the rustling of a near by bush sent it packing. The buck sprinted for it's life, followed by the white blur.


The white blur growled, it's paws hammering against the twigs and leaves beneath it. Slowing to the point the buck was out of eye sight. Now the buck slowed. The thudding sound behinde it had vanished, and the growling and snarling had faded as well. Slowing to a stop, the buck trotted to a crevice in the ground a lay down, exhausted from the blur that had surprised it.


Sei had slowed on purpose. Though the buck was bigger than him, he'd have no problem taking it down. Sei keeped silent, noticing several twigs that would have given him away. Sei checked every inch around the buck that were possible escape routes. Finding none, Sei sniffed the air, receiving a good wiff of the bucks fur. Sei quietly advanced for the buck, using nearby trees for cover until he was close enough to see it. When Sei was within range, he leapt from behind a nearby and connected his teeth to the buck's side, and fiercely grabbing it, digging his nails deeply into it's skin.


The buck was to it's legs in no time, twisting and kicking in an attemp to shake Sei off. Sei bit down harder, causing the blood to stain his fur, before he was knocked off. The buck ran as fast as it could, leaving behind a trail of blood. Sei lay were he'd been knocked off. Apperently the buck had manged to kick him in side in his attempt to bring it down. Sei gritted his teeth, his side was sore, and it hurt to walk. His ribs weren't broken but it was painfull enough. I punctured the side so if I can find the trail of blood, I can track it down. Sei observed the area around him, until he found a tree stained in red. Sei examined the stain, and determined it was blood. [i]From the way it's stained... The buck is heading west! Sei thought, after a close examination.


Sei followed the deer up the path until it settled once more. Advancing silently toward the buck,he lunged from the nearby bush, piercing the bucks throat with his teeth, and hooking his claws into it's skin. Sei savagely twisted his head, puncturing and mucles, veins, or arteries in the path of his teeth, as the buck collapsed from lack of blood. The buck still showed resistance until Sei jerked his head and ebded the buck's suffering. Sei draged the buck to a puddle, dropped it, and began to drink. You'd better be worth it bud. Sei thought


OOCSo I'm not used to solos and I'm not sure how the work. I didn't really have a clear idea of what I want, so this is probably a complete mess...
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A Perfect Day of Hunting

Postby Perplexity on August 18th, 2013, 2:59 am

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Skill XP Earned
Running + 1 EXP
Hunting + 1 EXP
Tracking + 1 EXP
Brawling + 1 EXP


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Stampede and Stealth in Equal Measure
Tracking A Defiant Buck
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As a solo you did very well in conveying what you posted it for. My only advice would be that you make it longer and more in-depth in the future. PM me if you have any questions or concerns regarding your grade!
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