Llew's CS

[Llew]

Llew Appearance Race: Pycon Gender: Male Age: 1 Birthday: 1st of Summer 512 Birthplace: Ravok Appearance: Llew is 6 inches tall, 11 inches long with an auburn coat. Character Concept Llew is generally happy, but very conceited and believes he is above all other people he meets. he generally sees the shortcomings of others, thus making him unpopular with other people due to his arrogance, thus not having many friends, Llew tends to have long conversations with himself. Character History Llew was born in 512 A.V. His parents were old and sickly due to their bad tendencies‎. Llew was lucky enough to inherit their parents funds and bought a boat ticket to Lhavit. which is where he found himself outside the golden gates. Language Fluent Language: Common Basic Language: Poor Language: Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Stalking 5 SP 5 Novice Running 35 SP 35 Novice Escape Artist +10 RB, 10 SP 20 Competent Lores How to not correctly act in a social situation The proper way to hitch hike Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Simple Shirt -Simple Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Cloak -Simple Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Wood) -Brush (Wood) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 600 Gold Mizas Heirloom: Small emarald ring Housing Location: Lhavit House: Currently wandering Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +600 GM 600 GM Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Jupiter]

Hi Llew!

I’m Jupiter, one of the Character Sheet Liaisons here in Mizahar. I’ve taken a look at your character sheet, and I’ve found some issues with it that need to be resolved.

• Your year of birth in your history should be 511 to match your year of birth stated at the top of your character sheet.
• Your third skill in your skill list says “Skill 3”. Since this includes your racial bonus, please change this to Escape Artist.
• Your lores don’t work. Your Lore of Teeth/Claw Combat needs to be more specific. Your other lore isn’t really a lore, and should be something that is instead included in your character’s concept.
• In your possessions, please choose between a cloak or a coat.
• Even if you’ve turned in your housing, you will need to list where in Lhavit you’re staying. Most players choose to have their characters stay in an inn.

Once you’ve made these changes, send me a PM. Then I can remove this post and approve your character sheet. If you have any questions about anything at all, feel free to contact me about them!


Jupiter