Just a Touch Up (Aka)

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The unassuming den of the Constrictor Dhani, it is truly a pit of snakes. Travelers should take care, because the Dhani are always hungry... [Lore]

Just a Touch Up (Aka)

Postby Traverse on October 16th, 2013, 6:27 pm

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30th of Fall, 513 AV

Aka caught herself glancing over her shoulder to see her reflection in the Steam Bath once again, watching the ripples reflect her new Gnosis Mark embossed upon her pale human flesh. It was beautiful, and matched the hue of her res perfectly, she had checked multiple times. Glancing away hurriedly, wondering why she was feeling so self conscious, the Viper stretched out in the bath and took a deep sigh of relief.

She spent another good bell in the steaming waters, thinking how now she seemed to be able to sink into the hottest bath and acclimate perfectly to the temperature, before rising out and striding into the rocky hall to get away from the dampness and dried off. An old cotton cloth served to dry her skin as the Viper collected her clothes and began to make her way down the halls back to her rooms, she wondered where Yuki had gotten herself off to now...

And that was when it happened, somewhat like a bolt of lightning coming out of nowhere.

Two strong hands grasped either shoulder like vice grips from behind and spun her around like a top. Suddenly Aka was face to face with one of the more gorgeous Constrictor females she had seen during her time in Zinrah. Her features were glossed with golden powder, bright green shades around her eyes making her look somewhat like a colorful bird of prey that was swooping down upon the unsuspecting snake.

"You...you are perfect!"

Aka stuttered a question that was immediately glossed over. "You are the viper, the one with the flamesss, yess? I have heard of you, your ssskin isss like ivory, your hair ssso dark, come we will make you a work of art!"

Without waiting for a reply, Tryl dragged Aka into her cozy cave, bottles of perfume and containers of finely ground make-up lining the walls. Aka was seated upon a smoothly carved stone bench as the female swept around collecting the necessaries.

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Just a Touch Up (Aka)

Postby Soshakuakamamushi on October 19th, 2013, 2:26 pm

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"Ha..." The small female sighed in contentment as she fully relished the hot steam bath water, her waist-length black hair splayed out behind her, the long strands floating on the water. The particular spot she was using was mostly unoccupied because the water was deemed too hot by most Constrictors, but the Viper found it just fine due to her natural elemental affinity and... the fiery mark she received in early fall.

"...." This kind of moment always brought her deep in thoughts, reflecting the events that led to her current state, most notably the visit by the Fire God, Ivak. Aka instinctively put her right hand to her left shoulder, massaging the mark for a few ticks before putting away her hand to let its image reflected on the water surface. It was beautiful, how the flames intertwined in a complex pattern with reddish color, matching the color of her own res.

Occasionally, Aka would glance at her sides or behind her, feeling rather self-conscious, she didn't want any Constrictors to find out about her mark. Fire was not exactly welcome in the tunnels and having the mark of the fire god would bring ill to her reputation, especially since a proper Dhani should be worshiping Siku or Caiyha instead. Nevertheless, she could take solace in the fact that most of her cousins would see her mark as a mere tattoo, representing the Viper's fondness to flames.

After spending another bell of silent bathing and self-introspection, it was time to get up. Her small frame rose from the hot water, whole body wet with dripping water, she climbed out of the particular pool and picked up the cloth she would use to dry herself. While drying herself, her feet moved to take her to her clothes, she didn't bother to completely dry herself before putting her clothes on, the usual simple black robe and red sash.

"Phew..." Wiping her forehead, the Viper walked through the hallway, heading back to her cavern-room. What would be better than sleeping after a long session of hot bath? However, her plan crumbled apart when she felt two hands gripped her shoulder. "!?" Her scarlets opened wide as she felt her small body being forcefully turned to face... a beautiful woman, most likely a constrictor Dhani. Unlike Senka, who was all muscle and brawn, this particular constrictor in human form looked delicate, well-groomed, and all around pretty. Her face was decorated with various kinds of stuffs that Aka never bothered with, it was called "cosmetics" or something.

"You...you are perfect!"

"Uuh..." If that statement came from Senka, Aka would immediately assume she was going to be used as a sparring partner or other activity that involved hard physical labor, but the beautiful woman's tone was that of astonishment, like a girl seeing a new doll that fit perfectly with her desires; it was similar to... Aka's reaction to Yuki. Oh no, was the woman going to enslave her like Aka did with Yuki? That wouldn't do, as much as she hated to admit it, she already belonged to Mamoru. Still, it would be better to clarify what the female constrictor meant by the random statement. "Uh... Sssister, w-what do you mea-?"

"You are the viper, the one with the flamesss, yess? I have heard of you, your ssskin isss like ivory, your hair ssso dark, come we will make you a work of art!"

She didn't even get to finish her question before the woman cut her off and literally dragged her by her collar. "W-wait! Ssstop!" She tried to wrench herself off, but as always, her Viper strength was no match for a Constrictor, the only way she could escape was using her Reimancy, but that was out of the question, the woman didn't look hostile, just fascinated. Her praise confirmed one thing, Aka was going to be the woman's play doll... so this was how Karma felt like.

After a moment of dragging and futile struggles, they arrived in one of the most cozy and well-decorated caves in Zinrah. Aka didn't have time to be awed as she was soon placed - gently - on a high-quality stone bench. "Uuuh... mind telling me what'sss going on?" The answer she got from the pretty woman was not of the verbal nature. The woman immediately began enacting whatever plans she had for the Viper, collecting various kinds of colorful powder, perfumes, oil, cosmetics... The smell of the cave was getting to her and Aka found it inviting, causing her to slightly relax her tension.

"I'm Tryllissle, the owner of True Beauty, marvel at my abode for I'm going to turn you into a ruby!"

Great, a rhyming Constrictor...
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Important Note: Aka is currently pregnant (with eggs, being a Dhani) at the moment and as such, her belly is slightly bulging and she moves noticeably slower than usual.
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Just a Touch Up (Aka)

Postby Soshakuakamamushi on October 19th, 2013, 4:27 pm

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"Uuh... Sissster Lissle, I'm no-" She wanted to protest, Aka appreciated the attention, but... not like this, this was all so sudden. It was like being offered something a favor, but against her will.

"Hush, child!"

Of course she would cut her off again, Aka grumbled in annoyance, she was not a child. Sure, she looked like an early teenage girl, but she was a genuine adult. The Viper got tired of having to correct people, surely the woman knew that a Dhani in human form meant she had reached adulthood. She wanted to stand up and bolted away from the place but the woman was suddenly in front of her on a chair that was reserved for the "artist" to work upon her "canvas". Unfortunately, the canvas was herself.

Aka noticed there was no one else in the cave right now which meant the woman would unleash her full attention on her... which also meant she had no escape without using violence and violence was out of the option... In short, she got into an odd sticky situation.

"Now, I shall begin! There's nothing to be nervous about so hide your chagrin!"

Aka had to admit, she found Tryl's rhyming speech to be amusing, it was flowing elegantly unlike the usual brutish speech of most constrictors. Aka assumed she was one of those Dhanis who was fond of their human form like Senescaaspia and herself. Tryl finished her preparation, picking an array of powder, oils, perfumes, and some accessories made from beetles, courtesy of "The Art of Cunning" jewelry shop. Furthermore, a black fabric identified as a black dress, more elaborate and stylish than Aka's plain robe could be seen among the goods... it was clear to Aka now that Tryl was planning a total makeover for the Viper.

With deft and trained delicate hands, Tryl began her work, she suddenly untied Aka's sash and removed her plain black robe, causing the Viper to blush and covered her washboard chest. As usual, she didn't wear any underwear. "O-oh h-hey! W-what are you doing?!" Deja vu washed over her, Senka had done this to her before, but the nature of the forced undressing was obviously different, Tryl simply wanted the Viper to try on the new dress.

"Your robe is so ugly, it drives me crazy! Instead, wear this dress to impress!"

"Uh... uuhm... kiih..." Aka gritted her teeth, she liked her robe. It was comfortable, she didn't care whether it was plain or not, no one was interested in her body anyway. Nevertheless, with her favorite robe confiscated, she had no other choice but to put on the black dress. She fumbled with it, she was not familiar with the strings and straps of the dress... if this was required to be "pretty" then Aka would rather be "plain and ugly" instead. Tryl helped the poor Viper in the end, teaching her how to properly wear it. After she was done, the Constrictor wasted no time to begin the next step.

Tryl picked up a small powder container then applied some white powder to Aka's face, further accentuating her pale skin tone. The Viper protested but Tryl hushed her and kept on going. "H-... hmpph!" She closed her mouth lest powder would go into her mouth, closing her eyes, Aka hoped this would be over soon... but some part of her mind actually liked this, being showered with attention by a fellow Dhani. This was not so bad, absolutely better than "sparring" with Senka.

After a few moments, the powdering was done and Aka opened her eyelids to find Tryl combining some kind of oil, it smelled good, but what was it exactly? "Uh... Sisster Lissle, what isss that?" She decided to ask, the tension in her voice no longer obvious.

"This is a perfume which will make your beauty bloom!"

Oh so that kind of good-smelling liquid stuffs were called "perfume", Aka liked it. Tryl then used a sprayer to sprinkle the perfume to the Viper, on her face, neck, and shoulder. It was by then Tryl noticed the flame-shaped mark on Aka's left shoulder. She found it interesting, it was fitting with the viper's fiery reputation, she thought of it as a tattoo of some kind.

Aka noticed Tryl's fascination at her mark, not good, she had to make an excuse. She couldn't tell her it was Ivak's gnosis. "Uh... eh, I uh.. painted it myssself." Aka stammered, she hoped the woman would believe her. Fortunately, she did and Tryl continued her work.
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Important Note: Aka is currently pregnant (with eggs, being a Dhani) at the moment and as such, her belly is slightly bulging and she moves noticeably slower than usual.
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Just a Touch Up (Aka)

Postby Soshakuakamamushi on October 19th, 2013, 4:47 pm

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"Ha... isss it done ye-"

"Hush!"

"...." Well now, like a true artist, Tryl didn't like to be interrupted, but she seemed to forget that her "canvas" was a sentient, breathing, person. Not wishing to annoy the constrictor further, Aka stayed silent through the whole process. She felt Tryl putting something on her neck which the Constrictor confirmed as a "choker", some kind of accessory to match with her dress. Aka couldn't see it yet, not without some kind of reflective surface.

After putting the finishing touch, Tryl marveled at her own work for a full chime before telling Aka to stand up. The Viper complied and was lead to a large mirror.

"Marvel at my work, sissster! I have transssformed you into a stunner!" :
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"W-woah..." Aka put a hand to her cheek, she looked different... she looked beautiful. Different from her usual plain look, she didn't look so much like a young girl anymore, but more of a petite young woman. The dress clung nicely to her body, accentuating her other assets such as her slim waist and hips, even complimenting her flat chest. She could see Tryl standing behind her, looking very proud.

"It's... it's beautiful, Sistery Lissle... h-how should I repay you?" She figured all of those cosmetics would be expensive, but she didn't mind, she had a lot of money and Tryl's expert work was worth it..

"No need for payment! Think of it as a compliment!"

"W-what really? Really? T-thank you ssso much, Sissster!" Aka grinned, a big wide toothy grin at the Constrictor. Even though she refused to be paid, Aka would hold the favor, should Tryl asked for her assistance in the future, she would gladly help. Giggling like a little girl, Aka twirled around and examined herself further, the powder, the beetle jewelries, and the dress all matched up nicely. She would leave the True Beauty shop with light steps that day.
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Important Note: Aka is currently pregnant (with eggs, being a Dhani) at the moment and as such, her belly is slightly bulging and she moves noticeably slower than usual.
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Just a Touch Up (Aka)

Postby Traverse on October 23rd, 2013, 3:02 pm

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Aka


Experience:

  • Endurance 1 XP
  • Observation 3 XP
  • Tactics 1 XP

Lore:

  • Tryllisle: Owner of True Beauty
  • Tryl: A Constrictor the Rhymes
  • Getting An Idea of How Yuki Feels
  • A Forced Make Over
  • Enjoying Some Girl Time

Inventory

  • +1 Fine Black Dress
  • + 1 Beetle Choker
  • + 2 Beetle Bangles

Additional Notes :
A short and cute thread. I enjoyed your portrayal of Tryl and Aka's dismay which turned into that feeling that girls have a tendency to get when they realize how fun being made up is! I threw in the Endurance for putting up with the make over and the tactics for assessing her situation in the store if you were curious.

Just one note that is rather unrelated to this thread: Aka's Gnosis is actually on her left shoulder blade, which means on her back not in the front. Apologies if I didn't make that so clear!


If you have any questions, concerns, accolades, complaints, etc about your grade, drop me a PM and we can most certainly talk it out.

As always, Safe Travels!
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