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Vik

Postby Vik on October 29th, 2013, 5:16 am

(As an aside, this is Dominic Havelocke's would be Player; my writing partner currently cannot be around and he and my other 'character' are brothers so that is a bit of an Impasse for me since I do wish to play. I would love knowing what is wrong/needs fixing. Thank you all.)

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"So, you wish to hear about me yeah? Well, we always gotta start wit' th' basic story see; there always is one; regardless of why, of how, there always is. And I feel that tellin' ya won't hurt none, s'come along, I'll share some sausage wit'cha."

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Basic Information
Name: Vik
Birthdate and Age: Spring 25, 487 A.V./26
Place of Birth: He doesn't remember.
Secret :
It's Syliras

Race: Human
Gender: Male


Physical Description
An admittedly ratty man stands before those giving him a likely disgusted look over. Standing well under six feet; at a meager height of 5'3", his hap-hazardly shaven chin and rather thin; gaunt, face sets the stage for a nearly unpresidentedly dismal looking fellow. He's a wirey, scrawny, scarred looking vagrant at even the most basic of glances; which is all anyone ever gives him really. His body is, muscular; to say the least- obviously the work of running from the law; should anyone truly guess. As it stands, the man before them is obviously not the sort of person you'd want around. His rather worn, dirty, but surprisingly untorn pants explode outward near the bottom; before reaching to his booted feet. Slightly tarnished iron and leather boots; obviously well worn and treated with a lot of care, it- really becomes apparent he isn't wearing more than a vest with a hood however. Not all that out of place; for a Vagrant.

To be honest, many who look upon him with disgust, pity, or even outright scandal; rarely see another look on his face. A smirk, always, plying upon his lips like some sort of vandal. As if there was a joke only he, really; got.

The Scar Upon His Chest :
There is a rather large; slithering wound that runs from around his right pectoral down and toward his groin; where it seems to keep going. This wound is a ragged; unclean thing that looks to have been made with something more along the line of a heated razor; but- it does not match up to a wound that could; possibly have been made by an attack with a hand. A claw perhaps, but certainly not a hand... Right?

As with many things in the world; some of the more dangerous beasts out there are men. This wound itself is from an unarmed technique that can rip flesh from bone; albeit, he seems to have been lucky. Or not slated for death that day...


Character Concept
I've never had the chance to do a Vagrant Monk of any sort; and that is, technically what he is. A Vagrant Sage; and it's a fun, if mildly silly; idea I've had for ages. I mean, come now; it's a flavorful character at least! Even if he has a strange accent. He's a bit uneducated of course!

Personality: Vik is, for lack of a better word; aggressively non-aggressive. While he does fight if pressed, for practice, and if need be- for coin, he is as non-violent as a man can get while still being a fighting man. He is a teasing, joking; mildly braggardly man- who's fast rate of speech and almost improbably astute understanding of where he is in the world, might come off as abrasive to most. But, above all of his own personality quirks he attempts to adhere to some sort of code of tolerance and temperence. Preferring to not fight when he doesn't have to. Lazy perhaps?

The real Vik :
He rarely lets anyone see this side of him; but he is a very driven man. He may not hold a job; but he will fight tooth and nail for scraps if he has to. While he is not fighting when he doesn't have to, it is more out of not wishing to incur the wrath of the- admittedly sparse, law-enforcement. He has a man he wishes to kill when he has both the strength and ability. And that man will die by his hand.


Ethics: He follows an Ethic called the Rhetoric of Wisdom, it follows as such:
  1. A single drop of blood is as enlightening as a page in a book; fight well, learn well- they are one and the same.
  2. To live is to learn.
  3. To learn is to fight.
  4. To fight is to live.
  5. Find wisdom even in the smallest of things.
  6. Follow the Law so long as it is Prosperous for all.
Such is the way of his father, such is his way.



History: Now with Ultra Special Awesome Tabs.
 
The Story Starts
T'be honest, I's had a rathur normal childhood before I'sa hit th' age of ten. That age was when things; changed. An' not fer th' better I'mma add. M'life, m'da's life? All that changed... with a Fire.


Life had been a rather steady pace for the boy; as life was an alright thing- his father and mother being in the same city most of the time certainly helped. They certainly didn't really seem to want for anything, it was obvious his father had been somewhat successful; he had even opened a training... Area? He still didn't remember what it was called, a Dodge-Oh, or something. But, he had a passing interest, originally; in the arts that his father taught to students in his 'School' as it were. He remembers the name of the 'style'- his father, ever arrogant; had named it the 'Style of the Undefeated East' for a slight balm to his pride.

Almost a decade had gone by; before his father felt the sting of his arrogance. There were men who appeared; to challenge him, his students; even threatening Vik and his mother if they were not fought. While many fell to his Father's furious style...

One man did not wait for the challenge to be taken.

It was that night; in the roaring sound of fire; that things changed. Vik, to his credit; had escaped from the inferno when he woke to find smoke spilling into his room. His mother, when he went to wake her; was already dead. Butchered in her sleep by the so-called 'challenger'.

Life changed, the inferno that engulfed the small facility and home destroyed everything for his father. So, they began into the wilderness- his father, being more experienced, allowed for them to survive the long trek to the next city.

And the next.

 
The Realities of Training
Yeah, yeah, me an m'da traveled a whole lot- I dunno specficsucally wher I's from. But, I's told that I look like a desert folk type person. But, I's frum th'east. So m'da said t'me anyway.


The fact was that the boy and his father had to flee the city of his birth; the men challenging had slain his mother in cold blood and would have burned him and the home down to nothing but cinders. Not even a proper burial could be attained for his mother. He wept, many days, many nights. But, it was these days that his father began to mercilessly berate him. Becoming more of a slave-driver than father figure.

He began training in the art of Brawling; a precursor to the style that was 'Undefeated of the East'. His father would attack him at random times; whirling about and striking a blow upon his brow; chest, face- shoulder. It wouldn't matter when, save in absolute danger- of which in Mizahar's wilds there are many and training opportunities were few and far between with the body; albeit the mind itself was trained easily enough to react and counter-react.

 
Another change in his life
Th' style? S'combination of things- I's know've the teachin' 'kin remember th'cantirs n'shite; but... S'been a while- I's prollably not remember any of it anymore, but I'mma try when I's feel right yeah?


A month had passed in the wilds, but, they were close to another town, small- unassuming; when they settled here, one of many times they would. His father revealed to him a secret of the style that he had not told anyone but the highest of practicioners in the style itself. It required the ability to manipulate one's Djed into the muscles of the arms, legs, and chest. While this seemed innocuous at first; there were stern warnings as his father began preparing him to train in such a thing. It, to be fair; was exhausting to do such a thing! Meditation was a key component of this ability, to 'feel one's flow' as it were was stated to make this so-called style better. In reality it strained the body to a point of exhaustion that; the child was forced to train for multiple hours afterward.

They left the town after a mere three months.

Almost ten years later, as he had become competent in brawling; having begun to fight his father one on one; honing his skills as a combatant while simultaneously improving his use of the Flux magics- The Challenger appeared once more....

A note on 'Small Towns' :
Anything smaller than the city he was born in is a 'small town' so to speak. As in, they have a smaller population than the city he was born in, which is Syliras. It should be noted that his perception of such things is not really noted for being all that 'kosher' as he is, mildly; racist. Plus he may or may not be telling the whole truth. There is always time for a good story.

 
Defeat becomes a Cause
Y'thinkin' it'll end all nice'n'happy? Pfft, yeah, y'ra not in fer a shock 'reya?- I wouldn' be here, discussin' over some fire roit now if it ended happily.


This time, in the wild; where there was truly little place to run. Father and son stood, Master and Student; beside one another. They were filthy from a days training upon the trees within the forest- splinters and bark along blooded knuckles and scraped forearms. They stood together; but, to the surprise of the boy; and to his father- when the first blow was struck by The Challenger himself.

The boy fell first; his body writhing in agony as he watched his chest split open like a rotten bit of meat. He crumpled; he fell... But was unable to help it as he watched, helplessly, as the Challenger ripped his Father's heart free of his chest. The Master to the Student; was dead.

The Challenger did not even deign the boy with a glance. The assumption of death had been there- as obviously the father was a Master of the art; yet still fell. That, thankfully; was wrong. He clung to the hatred within his heart; even as he lost consciousness.

He had found a cause. And it's name was Revenge.
How he survived. :
It is no real question on how he lived; a fluke, accident; bit of luck. As it stands he does not truthfully remember the way he survived being assailed by such a powerful user of Djed and Martial Style; but- he did. It is due to the close proximity to the city walls that he still has his life. Death, while it may be a commodity that is within grasping distances; it is not without those who cheat it.

He owes his life to the Sylirian Knights. He does not; truthfully; know what to do on the matter. His code of conduct doesn't offer advice.

 
Currently
N'so ya know why I'mma 'ere wher I's frum n'such. C'n I go? Gonna need t'git into th'city t'find some werkin' type things. Maybe adventurin'll be alright. Heh.


Six years of traveling on foot; a pack animal; a mule of some sort at his side. Carrying whatever meager equipment he required. He was a man who was as close to a sage as one could get in these tumultuous times.From small town to large cities to small towns again he has gone. Meandering his way and learning what he can from the world around him. He has come from the heart of Syliras, the Heart of Human Civilization to Ahnatep's Sandy Berth and back again once more. His homeland? Forgotten; but for now; he calls the road home and where that takes him? Well, he'll find out soon enough.

Such as it is. He rarely does he stay longer than a month in the same place, usually hanging on with a Caravan to insure maximum survival. Such a time as now; having broken from at almost a week before arriving at the City of Syliras. He knew full and well of what was expected; and prepared without much of a worry. These were the lands that he and his Father had traveled the most. To escape; to run, albeit in vain. This, was as good as anywhere else- to train.

A note on 'Small Towns' :
Anything smaller than the city he was born in is a 'small town' so to speak. As in, they have a smaller population than the city he was born in, which is Syliras. It should be noted that his perception of such things is not really noted for being all that 'kosher' as he is, mildly; racist. Plus he may or may not be telling the whole truth. There is always time for a good story.

 
His Heirloom a Pipe
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The Long Stemmed Traveling Pipe
A gift from his father when he turned 15, it was one of many pipes that his father owned and this one was the most dear to his old man. It was a pipe that his grandfather had used, and his grandfather's father had used. The pipe itself was worn in places where fingers had held it over the long years it had survived. But, even so; he treasures this deeply as it is one of the few happy memories he has of his time with his father, and it brings back nostalgia of their talks on the nights after training- enjoying a bit of a smoke before retiring. That is why it is so important to him, it is his happy memories.
  • Made of a Wooden Outer Coating with a brass pipe running through it forming the mouthpiece and the bowl where water filters the smoke.
  • It is tarnished a bit but is remarkably well kept; obviously old but not an artifact.
  • Something he will become quite irate about if it is touched without permission.
  • It's technically worth 40 Gold Rimmed Mizas, but , market value is likely lower due to wear and tear on the pipe itself. Albeit he will not sell it for any reason.


 
Skills, Lores, and Languages
Skill

SkillCompetencePoints Spent
30 BrawlingCompetent 15pts + 15rb, Starting Package
10 Unarmed CombatNovice10pts, Starting Package
10 Wilderness SurvivalNovice10pts, Starting Package
5 PhilosphyNovice5pts, Starting Package
5 RhetoricNovice5pts, Starting Package
5 FluxNovice 5 pts, Starting Package


Lores

As a sidenote, I included descriptions in case people want to know. It might not be needed but a little flavor never killed anyone... Unless someone made a killer chef here...
LoreActivity Done to GainDescription
Man of Iron Training Technique(Starting Package)Understanding of the Techniques behind hardening one's hands, legs, feet, and body for use in combat.
Rhetoric of Wisdom(Starting Package)His ethical core and outlook on life itself. Learning is Living.

Languages

LanguageFluency
CommonFluent
ShiberGood
ArumenicPoor

 
Inventory
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ItemAmountCost
Worn Traveler's Clothes Including
  • Vest with Hood
  • Pantaloons
  • Undergarments
  • Heavy Leather Boots
1 of EachStarting Gear
Legs, Greaves160gm
Traveler's Pipe1Heirloom
Waterskin1Starting Gear
Backpack which contains:
  • Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
  • Food for a week
  • Eating knife
  • Flint & Steel
1 of EachStarting Gear
Pack Mule'1 (Note: He is NOT riding it.)'Housing
Large tent (4 person)1'Housing'
Large tarp1'Housing'
100 ft of rope1'Housing'
Flint & steel1'Housing'
Lantern1'Housing'
Torch2'Housing'
Bedroll1'Housing'
Blanket1'Housing
Fishing tackle & hooks1'Housing
A full set of tack1'Housing
Large set of saddlebags Containing:1'Housing
32oz Jar48sm
Pearl Millet (in jars)64oz7gm
Salt (in Jars)64oz8gm
Beef, Sausages1020gm
4 gallon Cask17sm
Ale, Gallons48sm
16oz Jar24sm
Pipeweed, Kline14oz7sm
Currants16oz1gm 6sm

 
Expense Book
ItemAmountCostTotal Money
100 Golden Mizas(Starting Money)+100gm100gm Left
Pair of Greaves160gm40gm
32oz Jar48sm 39gm 2sm
Pearl Millet (in jars)64oz7gm 32gm 2sm
Salt (in Jars)64oz8gm24gm 2sm
Beef, Sausages1020gm4gm 2sm
4 gallon Cask17sm3gm 5sm
Ale, Gallons48sm2gm 7sm
16oz Jar24sm2gm 3sm
Pipeweed, Kline14oz7sm 1gm 6sm
Currants16oz1gm 6sm 0gm
Total Spent100gm Spent
 
Experience Expendatures
Starting Points: 50
  • 15 (+15 RB) Brawling
  • 10 Unarmed Combat
  • 10 Survival (Biome: Forest)
  • 5 Philosophy
  • 5 Rhetoric
  • 5 Flux
  • Free Lore: Iron Hand Training Technique
  • Free Lore: Rhetoric of Wisdom
 
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Edit (Thank you to Meville Brightshade for giving it a look over.):
  • Added Date and Season to Birthdate, forgot to do that.
  • Added Height, he's a little guy.
  • Fixed my Expenses to include a 'Money Left' tab so mathing isn't required too much.
  • Removed cursing from his 'story dialogue quotes'.
  • Adding in a description of his Heirloom, why it's important, and a picture.
  • Edited 'Currently' location, going to 'start at' Syliras.
  • Addendum: I got an explanation of what Lores actually are. Changed.
  • Removed 15pts from flux
  • Put 5 more points in Survival
  • Put 5 in Philosphy
  • Put 5 in Rhetoric

Any other errors will be fixed when pointed out.
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Vik

Postby Vik on November 12th, 2013, 9:46 am

I think I got everything. I'll... Try to update as soon as I can I guess. Just bumping so people don't need to look five pages in.
  • Should be fine.
  • Emphasis on should.
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