[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 4.0

[Crosspatch]

Hello there!

Now, we should - in theory - be up to date with the CSs! Hurrah! Be sure to check yours for possible interventions and what not!


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[Jax Bradshaw]

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic44222.html

Here we are.

[Majunior]

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Majunior

[frame2=#FFFFFF][color=#004080][indent]Appearance

Race: Akalak
Gender: Male
Age: Around 250 years old
Birthday: Forgot after a blow to the head
Birthplace: On the road to Riverfall

Appearance: He is 7ft4. His skin is an uncommon green and his eyes are a soulless black. He wears a white Cape and Turban (which is his family heirloom). Majunior also wears baggy purple trousers, which tucks into his white boots, and wears a light blue belt and a black shirt.

Character Concept

Majunior is a natural born leader, people instinctively follow. He is extremely intelligent and is one of the few people interested in knowledge. Although understanding the benefits of having money Majunior is willing to forgo payments if someone can tell him something interesting or teach him a new skill. He is a foremost authority on Spiritual concentration, which he uses to great effect when combining it with his natural mastery of martial art forms to create powerful magic to increase his speed and strength. While not having many friends he has got a lifelong friend of his master, who rigourusly trained him in Martial arts - although he is in extremely old age and is near death. He has trouble trusting people and is a loner except for when the situation calls for it (preferring to find solutions by himself). His ultimate goal is to be able to best every sentient being in every aspect of unarmed combat. Because of his solitary lifestyle and his knowledge gathering he has a better mastery of the common tongue.

Character History

Majunior was born on the road to Riverfall, while the caravan was being attacked by monsters. He then spent the next 50 years in Riverfall training in Martial Arts, Concentration, Magic and being the fastest being in Mizahar. By the time he turned to 100 years old he was recruited into a skirmish group to defend Riverfall from a group of Human bandits - who were raiding a trade route. Although the group won the battle Majunior suffered a blow to head which gave him memory loss, only remembering how to fight and who is master was (forgetting everything like his name and other basics). For the last 150 years Majunior has been slowly recovering his memory and has been training alone to reach his ultimate goal.

Language

Fluent Language: Common
Basic Language: Tukant
Poor Language: Ancient

Skills

Skill	EXP	Total	Proficiency
Skill 1	# 20	#	Martial Arts
Skill 2	# 20	#	Spiritual Conentration
Skill 3	# RB, # 10	#	Magic

Lores

Lore of Rite of Trial
Lore of Rite of Manhood


Possessions

1 Set of Clothing (Colorful)
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Bone)
-Brush (Bone)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: White turban, which he was told was from his father

Housing

Location: Outskirts of Riverfell

House: Solitary and empty cave with a door built by Majunior.

Ledger
100 gold (starting)

[Neviah]

Please check my new character sheet as I'm new here.

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic44205.html

[Kaliel]

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic44200.html

I think she's ready to be checked. Any feedback is also appreciated! c:

[Selesnyus]

Cs Posted and hopefully fine and ready for review
http://www.mizahar.com/forums/post341461.html#p341461

[Darren Tidecaller]

CS ready for review hope its okay http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic44232.html

[Edric Wingard]

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic44242.html

Lawdy, what a time.

[Resuna]

Hi, I have the basics of my sheet all ready for inspection!
http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic44209.html

The concept, history and appearance are all very basic notes at the moment, but they are the general gist of what will be expanded on. Everything else is hopefully okay.

[Crosspatch]

Hello there!

We should now be up to date with the CSs once more. So please check them for interventions.

Majunior, could you please create your CS in a separate New thread in the CS forum with your character's name as the title. Once you have done this, and I have been notified here with a link I will begin reviewing it. Thanks!


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