Rogo the Morphed

[Rogo]

Rogo Appearance Race: Human. Gender: Male. Age: 31 years. Birthday: 16 day, Fall, Year 482 AV. Appearance: I was mad, I was ignorant and I was a fool. I wanted to become a god and it ruined me. The memory of what I intended to shape-shift is lost in the darkness of my mind, but the pain of my failure is as painful as always. First I felt my muscles breaking, they where stretching and changing. Growing bigger and bigger by the minute. I felt that my beautiful face was torn apart. The most painful part was when another set of arms was growing out of my body. My mind was twisted and my body was broken. They had turned me into a monster. Character Concept Rogo is a victim of the failure of morphing. The change has damaged his brain and twisted his personality into a half-monster. He thinks and speaks in the third person. In the same time there are some traits of his old self. He is very observant, he is capable to learn and still has his knowlege of morphing magic. If he is not provoked, Rogo is capable living amongst humans. The problem is that they do not want to be near him. Character History The memories before the change are scarce and foggy. Rogo remembers that he was an apprentice of a powerful morpher. He instructed the boy his wisdom and became like a father to the child. But, when the kid became 10 years old, his teacher was killed by one of the gods' champions. No one know which one it was, but Rogo really did not care about it. The next 12 years were an intensive training in morphing. His goal was one. To become exceptionally strong and...gain the power of a god. This target turned out to be his doom. Something went wrong. When he changed his body became a corpse of a monster, but his mind stayed the same. He went to live in the woods. Rogo hunted the weak and fought the strong. It went on like that for 5 years. Then he was found by a mage. The old man did not kill him, like most would do. He trapped him...and talked to him. In Rogo returned the urge to live in a society. The wizard left him alone again, but the urge of vengence was again in full force. Rogo returned to civilization, only was he human now? Language Fluent Language: Common. Basic Language: Nader-canoch. Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Wilderness +15 SP 15 Novice Hunting +20 SP 20 Novice Morphing +15 RB, +15 SP 30 Competent Lores Lore of Sahova Layout Lore of bat-type wing anatomy Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Simple Shirt -Simple Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Cloak -(Feet not ment for boots) 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Wood) -Brush (Wood) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 100 Gold Mizas Heirloom: There is nothing left from his home town or family. Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Cash In Housing +500 GM 600 GM Thread List

[Translucent]

Intervention

Hi there! My name is Translucent, one of Mizahar's Assistant Storytellers. I was reading over your CS and found some things that go against Mizahar Lore and other problems. Below is a list of them, you will have to fix before you can RP on this forum.

History: While Morphing runs a chance that a person using it will forget their natural shape and become misshapen ed Gods would not have punished you in this way. They would have given you a negative Gnosis rather then turn you into a monster.

There were also so many spelling errors that you might want to check into using a word program that has spell check. While we are not so much grammatical Nazi's to be bugged by a word here or there, it is very difficult to read if there are as many as there are in your CS.

Also if your character is this crazed monster then how is he going to be able to support himself? every Character must have living expenses paid in some way at the end of each season. And you have no wilderness survival skills, Mizahar's a rough place and even a competent morpher who is competent in hunting would be killed quickly without WS training if you really want to live in a forest.

Skills: you have 50 SP skills, you used 60. Please fix this.

Birthday if your character was born in 482 he would be 31 not 30.

Once these issues have been fixed you can pm me and I will remove this intervention.