Completed [The Kabrin Road] The Dark Messenger

A slave cart travels south on the Kabrin with a small load of cargo. Bound for Kenash. Beware of these scoundrels. (Danough Trema, Rodistair, +) (Marrick Controls NPC Slavers, Radiant Controls NPC Knights)

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Stretching northward along the coastline of the Suvan Sea, the Cobalt Mountains are the home of the Bronze Wood, numerous ruins, and creatures both strange and fantastical.

[The Kabrin Road] The Dark Messenger

Postby Radiant on January 26th, 2014, 6:32 pm

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As the ticks went by, it became clearer to Caelin that this particular large black avian was something, absolutely not a common animal. The knight realized ever since the beginning, the bird was warning the knights of those merchants' true nature as slavers, squawking with a voice that somewhat mimic the Common tongue. Now, it was soaring beside him, shouting out words. Caelin concentrated to comprehend the bird's 'speech'. Delay, huh? Hmm... perhaps I should slow down. His initial judgement told him to give chase over trusting a bird, but if there was one thing experience could teach a person was that things were more than meets the eye.

Caelin gave a nod to the raven as she slightly slowed down his war steed, letting the runaway slaver gained distance... from him, not from the bird. What came next brought a raised eyebrow of intrigue to the knight, his icy blue eyes watched as the courageous raven dived in, attacking the slaver with its talons. The cart went out of control and amidst the screams of caged slaves, it bounced over a hole, launching the driver off the seat. Thankfully, the horses didn't panic and they decided to slow down, stopping the cart. Caelin took the chance, he galloped to the prone slaver and jumped down, brandishing his longsword. Kraul was still alive and he was in deep shyke, a hard slam on the back of his neck, courtesy of Caelin's boot, was all that needed to knock him into the dreamscapes.

The sergeant knight sheathed his sword back, huffing and slighty shook his head. The nerves of these scums, did they think passing through the Order's territory will be so easy? Sometimes Caelin wondered if criminals outside of Syliras were dumber than he thought, well, most likely the smart ones wouldn't even think of going nowhere near the Fortress City. The slaves were bewildered for a moment, before shouting in cheers, extremely relieved at their apparent salvation. Caelin faced them and gave a nod, "Rest easy, you are safe". His words were few, but they carried such presence that the slaves went quiet, happy smiles marring their expressions.

Now, the knight needed to thank his literal wingman, the mysterious raven. Caelin's horse gave a proud snort when Marrick landed on its back, it disliked anyone other than Caelin to ride him without permission, but its master seemed to like the bird so it didn't protest further. The knight took out some bandages from his saddlebag and covered the unconscious Kraul's wound, also using ropes to bind his arms behind his back and his ankles together, the slaver would be questioned, perhaps there were more of their ilk.

Caelin stood up, turned around, and walked back to his war steed. Now the bird was shouting out triumphant words of justice, Caelin regarded the raven and gave it a light salute. "I thank you for your assistance, friend. I am Sergeant Knight Caelin Verellin of the Syliran Knights, may I ask who am I speaking to?" By now, he was sure this raven was a Kelvic, if any of his subordinates dared to question his decision, they would taste what it's like to train under Ser Titus' famous 'drills', not that one of them was here, Caelin was confident his subordinates would handle those two criminals just fine and help the wounded squire.
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[The Kabrin Road] The Dark Messenger

Postby Marrick Corvis on January 28th, 2014, 5:16 am

Marrick hopped lightly from the saddle horn to the seat as the Knight approached him, a curious twist to his head. He fixed the man with one of his clever blue eyes and watched him thoughtfully as he saluted. Much like one might admire a painting he looked on at multiple angles. It wasn’t much more than a wave of his hand, but the Kelvic recognized the gesture. With a fluff of his feathers he expressed his delight, at the Knights manner.

‘Caelin’ the knight had said, and the name bounced about the Kelvics head like a wee lad with a candy in his hands. He considered the Knight, he seemed a good man. He did not murder wantonly, instead choosing honor and taking the scum prisoner. He fixed the man with a sidelong eye before, ruffling his feathers back into their normal position.

“Cae-Lin.” He croaked in a poor imitation of the knights own voice. For a moment he balanced on the great warhorses back as it shifted uncomfortably at his mime. Marrick tilted his tail feathers and wings until at last he managed an awkward looking bird bow, bringing his beak low to the seat of the saddle. With the gesture honorably returned he flapped his wings a moment to rebalance himself in a more comfortable position, almost like a man adjusting a suit at a party after getting out of a seat.

“Marr-ick.” The Raven croaked, in the voice of an old woman whose tonality sounded distinctly loving. “Kel-Vic.”

With a hop and a gentle flap of his broad wings he landed on the ground at the brave man’s mailed boots, and bobbed his head. “Hon-or-ed.” He garbled briefly before hopping sidelong toward the halted Caravan. “Free-dom.” His imitation called out with a sound distinctly Symanestran.

He looked back over his shoulder to see if ‘Caelin’ was following him. “Cae-Lin. Free-Dom.” He called awkwardly, the two words sounding mismatched. Then with a sidelong lift of his black wings he took flight, gaining altitude and landed near the wood rim of the cart. With an urgent purpose he pecked at lock and loop trying to get the other slaves out of the wagon. Single minded in purpose and focused in task, he would stop only to croak out his poor mimicry of “Cae-Lin! Free-Dom!”
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[The Kabrin Road] The Dark Messenger

Postby Radiant on January 28th, 2014, 11:41 am

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Assumptions turned to fact when the black bird introduced his own name, along with his race. Kelvics, a unique race composed of beast-humans, able to shift in the blink of an eye to their animal form and vice versa. Unlike in other cities, Kelvics were treated with equality in Syliras, the Order saw them as equal and Syliras even had a Kelvic council member along with Kelvic knights. It was a shame some of them had such a short lifespan that it only took a couple of years before turning elderly. It seemed their lifespan followed their animal counterparts and to Caelin's knowledge, ravens could live up to twenty years, still short compared to human standards but better than, let's say, a mouse Kelvic.

"Marrick". Caelin nodded, his blue eyes staring into the Kelvic's azure. Usually, they turned into human form to speak Common, but this one had limited ability in doing so while in bird form. The knight had heard that some birds could mimic human speech quite well, combined with a kelvic's intelligence, it proved to be an interesting trait. The sergeant knight followed the bird as he - assuming he was male due to his name - hopped to the caravan. From his word, Caelin deducted Marrick wanted him to free the slaves. He couldn't agree more. The knight approached the KO-ed Kraul and searched his pockets, procuring a ring of keys. The slaves' eyes figuratively shone as Caelin approached the cage's door and worked on to unlock the lock.

"You are free now, I advise coming with us to Syliras as the wilderness is dangerous, the Order will provide you with housing and give you jobs according to your skills," He offered, all of the slaves simultaneously agreed, venturing out to the wilderness with little equipment was suicide... unless one was a Kelvic. The slaves cheered with thanks to Caelin, Marrick, and the Knights while simultaneously damning the slaver scums.

A few moments passed and both of them could hear thundering hooves of war horses. The knights and squires had arrived, bringing with them the corpse of Grun and the unconscious form of Kimp tied up on the saddle. "Very good, squires, take him back to Syliras immediately for medical attention," Caelin commanded and the squires rode away, "Knights, help me with taking these free men and women back to Syliras, as for this slaver, you know what to do". At his command, the knights began working immediately, using the cart to transport both former slaves and Kraul back to Syliras. Only Caelin and Marrick were left at the scene. "Marrick, what are you going to do now? As you are a Kelvic, I don't worry for your safety in the Woods, but if you want to come back with us," He climbed up his horse, stroking the majestic beast's nape, "Feel free to do so". With a tap, Caelin's steed began trotting back down the Kabrin Road, to Syliras.

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[The Kabrin Road] The Dark Messenger

Postby Marrick Corvis on January 29th, 2014, 12:44 am

“Freedom!” He crowed. The Kelvic loved the word. It seemed to grow in him, like a tree whose roots was in his heart. “Freedom!” He croaked. Then with a flap of his wings he fluttered briefly over his perch only to land again. The little Raven felt a spring in his wing, and a flutter in his heart. He wanted to cry, with joy, though as a Raven, no tears would come. Instead he simply closed his eyes and enjoyed the moment. He locked it away, a most precious memory. Sliding it in right next to Gypsy’s secreted meals, and the occasional story she would tell him. The first fist fight he had ever won, gypsy, and his liberation day.

He listened quiet, and happy as Caelin spoke to the slaves. “You are free now, I advise coming with us to Syliras as the wilderness is dangerous, the Order will provide you with housing and give you jobs according to your skills,” He said. He sounded the way the Kelvic might imagine the root of a mountain might, if it could speak, strong, old, and wise.

With a swift hop, he leapt off of the cart, and glided to the ground, cleverly keeping out of the way. A couple of the slaves spat on Kraul, one even called him names. Though there was one, the Kelvic noticed, who kept quiet. The silence concerned him. He couldn’t remember her name, though Marrick remembered her whimpers as Kraul had done foul wickedness upon her. He shuttered with a flutter of his wings as he tried to shake the memory of it from his head. This wasn’t over for her, and the Kelvic made a mental note to find her and make sure she was ok once he had his shackle off.

The other knights announced their arrival with the drumming of hooves, long before the Kelvic could see them. For the briefest of moments he wished he had been born a hawk, or an eagle. ‘Enhanced vision would have been a koindness.’He thought to himself. Though just as quickly as it had come his envy left him. They had gotten them all. Grun, Kimp, and Kraul. Not a single one of those bastards had managed a retreat. Even Kimp. Marrick was sure he’d have slipped their grasp.

Caelin gave his men and women the order to return to Syliras and they moved almost as if they were one single animal. The Kelvic was impressed, yet the overwhelming emotions he was experiencing with his freedom at last achieved, the concept vaguely registered in his mind.

Marrick breathed erratically as he watched them go, the Knight Caelin only staying behind. With a twist of his head he looked at the man with a sidelong cast of his pale blue eye. "Marrick, what are you going to do now? As you are a Kelvic, I don't worry for your safety in the Woods, but if you want to come back with us," The man spoke warmly to him and the Kelvic couldn’t help but devote his full attention. The man was an enigmatic combination of charisma, and stoic strength.
The Little Raven watched as the man mounted his horse, with a soft chime in his spur. “Feel free to do so.” He said with a stroke of his horses neck. And with that he spurred his horse forward into a light gate. Marrick watched him as he rode away. The Kelvic didn’t have to think long. The knights were a pillar of strength, and Marrick had never been a free man in a city before. There were so many things he wanted to do. Get a job! Get paid! Buy a drink! Mother Raven, the options were endless.

With a swift flap of his wings, he leapt as he took flight after the brave knight. When at last he had reached Caelin as he rode on his horse he circled lazily over head. They were homeward bound, and Marrick could scarcely believe it. That he, the garbage picker, the punters slave, the Dark Messenger, at last had a home.

The slaves now found, held each other in their tearful joy as he flew low, and called out to his liberators. “Heroes!” He cried. “Saviors!” He called. “Freedom!”
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[The Kabrin Road] The Dark Messenger

Postby Radiant on January 29th, 2014, 7:51 am

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Marrick :
Experience
Skill XP Earned
Observation +3 XP
Socialization +1 XP
Tactics +2 XP
Leadership +1 XP
Endurance +1 XP
Acrobatics +1 XP
Unarmed Combat +1 XP


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Lore Earned
Kraul, Grun, and Kimp: Slavers
Kelvic: Collars Prevent Shifting
Syliran Knights: Defenders Of Justice
Caelin Verellin: Sergeant Knight
Location: The Kabrin Road


Loots


Danough :
Experience
Skill XP Earned
Observation +1 XP
Riding: Horse +1 XP


Lores
Lore Earned
Caelin Verellin: Sergeant Knight
Rodistair Mooring: Squire
Location: The Kabrin Road


Loots


Rodistair :
Experience
Skill XP Earned
Observation +1 XP
+ XP


Lores
Lore Earned
Caelin Verellin: Sergeant Knight
Danough Trema: Knight
Location: The Kabrin Road


Loots


Notes :
Good thread, Marrick! A shame that Danough and Rodistair went inactive, but one must move on.

I really love how you portray Marrick and the slavers, his actions were amusing indeed! :lol:

One thing of note, try to avoid copy-pasting your other PC's response, if you can, use your own words to describe their speech. :)

Also, thank you for your grades. :P They are awesome!


My radiance is not bright enough?
If you have any questions or concerns regarding your grade, beam me a PM and we can work it out. :)
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