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Garret recalls the first time he arrived at Sunberth

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A New Arrival

Postby Garret Sawyer on December 2nd, 2013, 11:37 am

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Timestamp - Morning, 27th of Summer, AV 494

The figure walked tentatively up the street. It was strange to see it so exposed to the wilderness behind him; he was unsure whether the lack of gate or guards comforted him or made him uneasy. In truth it was latter as he fidgeted, gripping the heavy backpack that was slung over his shoulder tightly he wandered into the deserted street. He was no doubt a strange sight to anyone that had bothered to look at him but in Sunberth at least the sight of a dishevelled, half-starved nineteen year old with thick clumps of dirt splattered through his hair and whatever you could call the youthful facial hair on his chin was quite common in this dump.

It had been a long journey for Garret, after stealing all the money he could lay his hands on and his father's spike mace "No it's yours now" he reminded himself. Either way, after he took everything he could carry he found himself in the company of a merchant caravan transporting food between Syilras and Zeltiva. Amongst the company of merchants, travellers and guard he dwelled on his future. He couldn't turn back now, his father was the most law abiding citizen and guard would be forced to punish him for theft, he had to go somewhere that he would blend into, somewhere that didn't care about a thief on the run.

Sunberth fit the bill perfectly. He heard his parents constantly complain about the lawless city, how it should be burnt to the ground and since he knew they would never set foot in there that was where he would flee to. So when the caravan left the mountains he joined a small group that splintered off towards Sunberth. This smaller second group was made up of violent thugs, shady merchants and various conmen and for the next couple of moons he travelled with these men and women, for a fee of course.

And for too long he was subjected to their vile tales, their disgusting language and had to witness their depraved needs but Garret did what he always did and sat in silence staring into the bowels of the fire that brought little warmth to his bones under the shadowed wilderness, night after night. After walking for what seemed an age amongst the scum, Sunberth finally came to view on the horizon. He left the group in the early hours of the morning, eager to arrive at his new home and leave the company of the caravan.

The final walk had taken him several hours, it had been an excruciating trek as the sun broke the horizon, sending the scorching summer heat to blister any exposed part of his body. So with a dry throat, aching feet and dirty, sweaty skin he stumbled into what he had once been told was the backside of the world.

The street was deathly silent, his breathing was only noise he could hear coming from the street. The houses were no doubt either empty or filled with squatters high on drugs. He wouldn't want to be them right now, all the houses were in a state of disrepair, all were adorned with smashed windows, rotting wood and roofs covered in holes. As a refreshing breeze rolled in behind him, churning up dust that layered the street every house seemed to creak and groan, desperate to collapse under their own weight.
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Fallon, I didn't thread because I was scared you would kill Garret, I know the rules perfectly. It was simply because I didn't like you, when I logged on and saw a bunch of veterans complaining that they couldImage not find threads and newbies should approach them because they are so much better us new people, I just thought one thing. What a bunch of cunts.

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A new arrival

Postby Garret Sawyer on December 2nd, 2013, 11:38 am

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He wandered down the street and turned a corner to found the first signs of life. A couple of naked, skeletal orphans lay in the street eating what looked like a dead rat. An old woman stood in the doorway of her weathered old hut, chucking a bucket full of crap and piss which splattered against the ground, spraying out in a fan shape as it steamed under the brutal summer sun. He stepped cautiously up to a bearded man who sat in the porch way of a house.

"Excuse me" Garret spoke in a dry, croaky voice but the man simply ignored him "Excuse me" He spoke again, louder this time. The man turned to him and it wasn't a pretty sight, he had a face even a mother couldn't love. It was bright red, covered in weeping cuts and gashes, his beard was pitch black and wiry but with several bald patches where his face appeared to have been burnt. To top it all off he was covered in shit stained rags that stunk to high heaven.
"What do you bloody want?" He demanded, revealing a distinct lack of teeth and severe rotting in the remaining few.
"I just wondered where I could find a place to stay?"
"Aye, it's back the way you came. We don't need any more foreign scum in this place"
He barked before spitting at the ground right in front of Garret's feet. His fists clenched, his knuckles pressed up tightly against his skin. He wasn't used to anyone treating him like that as if it was nothing and he had seen some on the worst Zeltiva had to offer. He stepped away from the man who had already lost interest in him, muttering curses in some ancient tongue under his putrid breath.

He decided to leave this street and delve further into Sunberth, with one more corner turned the scenery changed rapidly. The first evidence of civilisation became present to him. Workers wandered the street carrying various crates and sacks on their shoulders, children played in the street and the smell of cooking meat, goat by the unique aroma, flooded his nostrils.
"Hey you, five silvers for shag" His head whipped round to find the source. It belonged to a rather pretty young lady, about the same age as Garret. She had rounded cheekbones, a high trimmed brow, full pink lips and sparkling blue eyes but Garret was merely being respectful by appreciating these features, she also had a full chest and wide hips that filled out her clothes that no doubt indented to clad her scantly.
"Umm, sorry what?"
"You deaf or something? I said five silvers for shag, a quickie mind you it'll cost more if you take your sweet time"

"No " He looked over the woman once more before repeating himself, it sounded like he was trying to convince himself "No, I just need directions."
"For a copper I'll give 'em to you"
"Fine"
He picked the copper out of his pouch and flicked it to her "Where can I find somewhere to stay"
"Try the tent city"
She pointed in the general direction "Just pitch your tent somewhere and you'll be fine. Don't tell anyone you're a foreigner though, and tone down that Zeltivan accent if you don't want to be gutted by the end of the day"
"Thank you"
He began to step away when she called out again.
"I'll be here all week if you want a taste, bring money though; you ain't cute enough for a freebie"
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Fallon, I didn't thread because I was scared you would kill Garret, I know the rules perfectly. It was simply because I didn't like you, when I logged on and saw a bunch of veterans complaining that they couldImage not find threads and newbies should approach them because they are so much better us new people, I just thought one thing. What a bunch of cunts.

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A new arrival

Postby Garret Sawyer on December 2nd, 2013, 11:39 am

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Garret wandered down the dirt path, heading deeper into Sunberth. As he went through Sunberth, heading towards the river he found himself twisting and turning through the crowds of workers, pickpockets and beggars. The smell of sweat, shit, and spirits hung heavily in the crowd, flooding his nostrils with its pungent odour as he traversed the crowd. He found himself being knocked from side to side, unable to successfully dodge the oncoming torrent of people. Garret promptly took a sharp turn into a alleyway as soon as he could to escape the crowds but in there he learnt one of the golden rules of Sunberth that every foreigner has to learn; never step into an alleyway if you aren't part of the gangs.

He leant against a damp wall, catching his breath as voice called out from the darkness "Drop the backpack, and all your money and I won't gut you" Garret turned to find a silhouette of a skinny teenager standing in alleyway brandishing a dagger. The mugger must have only been a couple of years younger than Garret but unlike Garret who had always had plenty of food on the table and had grown into a strong young man this lad was far from developed. He stood about half a foot under Garret and his small clothes hung from his bony figure. All the same he would have been a handsome lad; he had a strong jaw line with high cheekbones and soft brown eyes but his face was gaunt, his eyes were wild and when he spoke he revealed missing teeth that no doubt been punched out.

"Come on, I mean it. Drop the bag and leave now" He waved the dagger around, it was clearly blunt and was more useful as a spoon than a knife but could still do some damage with enough strength behind it but Garret refused to be intimidated, he had seen his father confront more dangerous criminals. He turned to face his mugger and stared him down but the mugger didn't relent "Look, I don't want to hurt you. Just hand over your stuff" Sweat coated his forehead as a single drop ran down the side of his face, his eye screamed out to Garret, begging to him but he didn't care. Slowly he pulled out his morningstar, gripping it tightly as he could in his sweaty hands.

"Walk away now" He said calmly, trying to convey as much confidence as he could manage "Walk away and I won't have to hurt you". The boy glanced at the vicious weapon then looked back at Garret, he fidgeted nervously since this was hardly the way he pictured things happening.
"Please just hand it over. I will hurt you if you don't" He said meekly, his words sounded hollow and they were, it was obvious even to Garret. So he stood his ground, raising his weapon menacingly. The mugger stepped forward and Garret couldn't tell whether he moved in to attack him or to move past him so before he knew it he had swung his spiked mace through the air with all the force he could muster.
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Fallon, I didn't thread because I was scared you would kill Garret, I know the rules perfectly. It was simply because I didn't like you, when I logged on and saw a bunch of veterans complaining that they couldImage not find threads and newbies should approach them because they are so much better us new people, I just thought one thing. What a bunch of cunts.

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A new arrival

Postby Garret Sawyer on December 2nd, 2013, 11:42 am

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The heavy metal ball soared through the air, the deadly spikes that adorned its surface tore the air asunder, forcing currents of air to circumvent it. But the morningstar swung too far and too fast, its own weight and momentum prevented any force Garret exerted on it in an attempted to rein it in to have any effect. With a dull thud it had embedded itself in the wooden wall of the alleyway, he tugged on it heavily trying to pull it out with no visible effect. He turned around to see what the mugger would do next, no doubt Garret would at best be forced to give up his possession and at worst... he tried not to think about that. How naive had he been to think he could simply saunter into this place and walk through it unscathed? How long had he thought about his decision to leave home? He had been a fool and now he would have to pay for it.

As his head turned hesitantly he spotted something strange out of the corner of his eye, the mugger was no longer standing. As the spiked mace had swung at him he had stepped backward avoid getting his skull smashed in but his foot had caught on a small rock rooted in the ground. Then he fell backwards, his arms must have flailed helplessly as he plummet to the ground, Garret could even see where his fingernails had dragged uselessly again alleyway walls. Garret steeped cautiously over to him, the noises of Sunberth had merely faded into the background like a distant sound while his muffled breathing sounded heavy and laboured as he peered over to look at the lad "Please don't be dead" he pleaded to himself.

Even to a moron the lad was clearly dead; blood seeped out from under his skull and flowed off in all direction directions, his face was frozen in place, his chest remained unmoving and his eyes unblinking. A sudden sense of realism dawned on Garret; he was dead because of him. He took his life because he confronted him and attacked him. It wouldn't matter, he was just some street rat who probably would have never seen a ripe old age. Garret used that thought to comfort him "He is just some kid no-one cares about" he muttered under his breath, he had hurt people before but never had he taken a life even one of so little value.

A sudden thud came from within the wall "What's going on out there?" a gruff voice demanded from within the wall, suddenly Garret felt himself being pulled back into the real world. He was standing in a alleyway, with people nearby and a dead body. Gripping his morningstar with both his hands he tugged on it forcefully. It jolted out, sending the damp, dark wood splintering off "What is bloody happening?" The voice yelled out again, the sound of a chair being pushed along the floor followed but heavy footsteps echoed through the house but Garret was already gone, sprinting down the alleyway with his spiked mace in one hand and his backpack tightly clutched in the other.
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Fallon, I didn't thread because I was scared you would kill Garret, I know the rules perfectly. It was simply because I didn't like you, when I logged on and saw a bunch of veterans complaining that they couldImage not find threads and newbies should approach them because they are so much better us new people, I just thought one thing. What a bunch of cunts.

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A new arrival

Postby Garret Sawyer on December 2nd, 2013, 11:49 am

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Timestamp - Evening, 27th of Summer, AV 494

The fire cracked quietly as the thin dry wood slowly burnt down, soon only embers would remain. It mattered not to Garret, he wasn't cold since there was still enough warmth to be found under the nights sky tonight. He sat in front of his tent, one tent amongst a plethora of tents yet it was strange that he felt so alone. Only a couple of fires downwards a poor family cheerfully recounted tales and myths of old, a few tents down from them several thugs much like the ones that made up the caravan he travelled with to get into this city told dirty stories and bloody tales. And in the tent next to him came the sounds of a couple enjoying each other's company; far too loud for Garret's liking.

Garret poked the fire with a stick, sending a shower of embers drifting off into the darkness of night. As he curled up into his own arms he recounted the day's events. After he had fled from the alleyway he had walked around Sunberth for a while afterwards lost, alone and confused. It was by some miracle that he wasn't robbed again, the sight of a young man looking very out of it should have drawn in thieves in like a candle attracts moth but no, whether it was dumb luck or a blessing from the gods he had managed to remain unscathed.

After he managed to regain his senses he had to go about asking for directions again. It was a question that attracted quite a few "Piss off you little petcher" and "Do I look like I give a rats hairy arse about you?" but once again a pair of prostitutes came to the rescue and gave him the directions though at the expense of a copper each "It seems that prostitutes are good source of information" he noted, for a price of course. He followed there directions to the letter, negotiating the labyrinth of slums that made up Sunberth, walking quickly with his head down, eager to avoid any more attention. Then he pitched his tent on the outskirts of the camp, scavenge around in the dirt for any wood he could find and started a small fire.

That was where he continued to lay, not bothering to crawl into his tent for the comfort of his bedroll. His face had reddened in the glow of the fire and his eyes watered from the dust churned up in the wind. In his hand he fondled the spiked mace, pushing his finger against the spiked tips until the smallest beads of blood appeared on the surface of his finger. His eyes stared blankly into the bowels of the fire, hypnotised by the flame as it flickered and fought for life, slowly dying down as the wood beneath it burnt out. When the flames had finally given up Garret clambered into his tent, only the glow of the embers illuminating his new home. He collapsed into his bedroll and clutched the blanket, the face of the dead mugger still firmly imprinted into his mind, an image that, unlike the fire, would never fade.
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Fallon, I didn't thread because I was scared you would kill Garret, I know the rules perfectly. It was simply because I didn't like you, when I logged on and saw a bunch of veterans complaining that they couldImage not find threads and newbies should approach them because they are so much better us new people, I just thought one thing. What a bunch of cunts.

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A New Arrival

Postby Vanari on January 30th, 2014, 7:44 pm

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Lores :
  • Sunberth: No Gates, No Guards
  • Getting Directions from a Whore
  • Tent City, Tone Down Accent
  • Unintended Murder of a Mugger
  • Prostitutes: Good Sources for Info
  • Pitching a New Home in Tent City
  • Dead Mugger, Forever Imprinted


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