[Note by Crosspatch] Kraeger Duskwalker

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Kraeger Duskwalker

Postby Kraeger Duskwalker on March 8th, 2014, 10:30 pm

Character Name


Appearance

Race: Drykas
Gender: Make
Age: 25
Birthday: 14, Winter, 488 AV.
Birthplace: Endrykas

Appearance: Tall, athletic man of a swimmer build, harboring tribal tattoos on his left pectoral, collarbone, upper arm and upper back. He sports messy brown hair of a fairly short length, and a pretty scruffy five o' clock shadow.

Character Concept

I don't really know what to put here.

Character History

He was born in a rough household, with two brothers, and his parents having a strong dislike for eachother. After his mother disappeared, he stayed with his father, eventually becoming insane for various reasons, all completely understandable but unknown by Kraeger. Same father who, after being struck by a terrible disease which caused him to lose his mind, and kick Kraeger and his brothers Osmag and Harold out, all left to fend for themselves in the wild. When Osmag succumbed to the same disease as his father, he wounded Harold to eat him, and was going for Kraeger, when the latter kicked dust in the former's eyes and ran off, leaving both to their fate. After roughly living in the wild on his own, living on plants and not animals, refusing to see blood be shed in front of him again, he eventually realized he'd die sooner or later, and struggled to find Endrykas again, moving back in at his dad's, and begging for forgiveness, when he hurled himself at him with a trophy, in an attempt to knock him out, Kraeger was disoriented for a few minutes by the attack. He brought his father to the guards due to his insanity, and wished him good luck, before he started living a relatively peaceful life in his tent.

Language

Fluent Language: Pavi
Basic Language: Common.
Poor Language: Tukant.



Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Weapon : Shortsword 10 SP # Novice
Carving 10 SP # Novice
Riding 10 SP 10 RB Competent
Hunting 20 SP # Competent




Lores

Lore of Sea of Grass Geography
Lore of Drykas Culture


Possessions

1 Set of Clothing (Colorful)
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Bone)
-Brush (Bone)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom:

Silver Ring from his Mother

Housing

Location: Endrykas


House: 1 large tent (4 person)
1 large tarp
100 ft of rope
1 lantern
2 torches
1 bedroll
1 blanket
1 set of fishing tackle & hooks
1 bonded Strider
1 Yvas
1 large set of Yvas bags

Note on Yvas:
The Drykas use what is called a Yvas on their horses rather than bridles and saddles. A yvas is what equates to a girth with an attached breast collar combination hung with hooks and topped with a small flat hand grip that lays along a horse's shoulders. The Yvas is often placed over a colorful pad that acts to protect the horse from the rider. The grip fits over a strider's withers which holds the yvas in place. It almost looks like the type of thing vaulters used on their draft horses, though it is more functional than a vaulter's pad. The horses can free themselves from them if they got separated from their riders, and do not have tack to entrap or tangle them when they are running loose. The yvas has ring tethers on it for handling a set of wither bags and a waterskin, and is often decorated in knot-work beading that identified the horse and rider as part of a specific pavilion.

Drykas ride without any headgear or bridles on their horses at all. They do not use any halters either.


Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


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Kraeger Duskwalker

Postby Crosspatch on March 19th, 2014, 9:31 am

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • Please link your CS to your profile. This can be done through the user control panel.
  • A character concept covers things such as personality, likes, dislikes, ethics and morals.
  • As a Drykas your racial bonus (RB) is +10 in Riding (Horse). Please add this.
  • 'Crafts' is not a valid skill as there are multiple types of crafts (leatherworking, Carving, sewing, etc) available as skills.
  • Please label your weapon skill as “Weapon: Weapon name.” For example to use a shortsword it would be labelled as “Weapon: shortsword“.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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Postby Kraeger Duskwalker on March 23rd, 2014, 11:03 am

Thanks crosspatch, i'm in the process of doing all the things you said right now!
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