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Part II: After a horrible incident the previous night, Lenz goes out to learn how to defend herself better

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Learning from Experience II

Postby Lenz on March 14th, 2014, 12:45 am

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21st of Spring, 514 AV
Dragoon Training Grounds


If she were sitting, she would have been on the edge of said seat, but she wasn’t. She was standing on aching feet, watching as her master was teaching her how to fight. One of the techniques he was planning on teaching her next included what he said was a horse stance and a side kick.

Those terms weren’t corroborating in her mind at that time, but as she watched Mac show her how to do what he had described, the words clicked together. Like a puzzle, the pieces connected and she finally saw the whole picture.

She followed what she saw, spreading her legs out so that they were farther than shoulder width apart. She straightened her feet so that they were pointing forward. ‘Better for balance,’ he had said.

She breathed in deeply, hoisting her hands up. Her left hand throbbed a little. Her pulse was quick, yet mellow. She was getting what she paid for and that was all that mattered to her.

“That looks good,” Mac mused, more to himself than actually praising the woman he was teaching. She didn’t mind though. This was her time, this was her day, it was her money that got her here in the first place and she was going to take it.

“Now I want you to kick it.”

So Lenz kicked it. She brought up the leg that was closest to the dummy, which so happened to be her left one and struck it, losing her balance and almost falling over. She saved herself in the nick of time, though.

“What was that?” Mac’s voice blurted.

“I thought you told me to kick it,” Lenz stuttered, biting her lip. Instantly, pain radiated through her teeth and up into her nose. She blinked back tears from the attack.

“I did, but not like that,” he retorted.

“You didn’t specify how I was supposed to kick it,” she countered, eyeing him with vast amounts of skepticism. Her statement, standing relatively high was valid, for he hadn’t said how she should have kicked it. He just sort of expected she would kick it how he expected she would.

The man muttered some words that weren’t audbile to her own ears. Paranoia soon settled into her heart. Was he insulting her? Was he dissing how she handled things the first time around?

“Try again,” he told her.

“But I don’t know how to do it correctly. You didn’t seem pleased,” she said, her tone of voice coming out almost like a whine.

“You’re right. I didn’t,” he said, stroking his chin. His eyes wavered over her body, still standing in that daft ‘horse stance’ position.

“Try it again,” he repeated, watching closely as if inspecting her for any particle of dust or debris. She felt violated, but she did as she was told.

She hunkered down into the stance, her knees bent to roughly ninety degrees, her feet facing forward so that they were parallel to her legs. She held up her hands and leant on her back leg, driving her front foot into the dummy. She lost her balance again.

Before her teacher could speak, she took her stance again and tried a different tactic. She pivoted on her front foot so that her back foot could swing around and strike the bag instead.

There was a chuckle from her right and as Lenz turned to see where it came from she was met with aspirated eyes, twinkling in the bright sunlight of the afternoon.

“That’s a way,” he said to her, smiling a little bit to reveal yellowed teeth. Probably from age, she thought. He must have been around fifty years old or so.

“But it isn’t the right way,” she stated.

“Right.”

“Which way is the right way?” the woman asked, brushing her hair behind her ears so that they weren’t in her face. She wished she would have put it up this morning before coming to learn how to fight correctly. Why hadn’t she thought of that then?

“I want you to find that out by yourself.”

“You’re making this very difficult for me when it doesn’t need to be. I paid you to teach me, not let me guess your riddles,” she dared, glaring at him with cold, hard green-brown eyes. They faltered when his own orbs glared back.

“Life is difficult, and from those cuts and bruises on your face I’d say you know that. Now, I want you to figure this out by yourself. There will be no one to teach you these things in the future unless you come back and pay me and pay me again everytime you do.”

He had a point that wasn’t easy to argue against. She understood that creativity in the mind helped ignite the powers of the imagination. She knew she could conjure up new techniques herself in times of desperation.

“What are you saying?” she asked, pleading latently for clarity.

“I’m saying you better keep on practicing until you find the right technique.”

This was not the response she was hoping for, but alas, it was one nonetheless. She took it without pouting. She was learning something. She was learning diligence, discipline and the art of taking care of yourself, all by the strange teachings of this ‘Mac guy’.

“Okay,” she said, proceeding to re-gather herself in the proper stance. At least she had that part done.

She took a large gulp of warm air, spring time flowing through her veins, and started again.
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Learning from Experience II

Postby Lenz on March 16th, 2014, 6:35 am

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Her eyes started to smoulder, the lids heating up from the flames that flared inside. Her cheeks flushed to a lush and ripe red shade as she hunkered down into a lower stance than before.

“Very nice,” her instructor said, musing to himself about proper technique and vigilance. “It’s a deep and stable stance.”

Lenz huffed and racked her brain of all the thoughts that were reeling around inside. She smashed the unimportant ones to the back, stuffing them inside a cabinet for later use. She then scrounged around inside the common sense compartment, trying to find something useful.

She finally found something and pulled it out, closing her eyes for a moment to read it over. She visualized how she was going to go about doing it, and then started to take action when she was thrown off balance.

A foot connected with her back, driving her forward and into the ground. She received a mouthful of mud, surprise congesting her lungs as she fought for air.

She thrashed around until she found a seated posture, wiping her face of all dirt. She finally managed to collect her breath before rattling off some complaints and shouts of diassproval.

“What was that for?” she cried.

Mac shrugged and then proceeded to explain. Lenz was all ears, avidly anticipating his reasoning behind pushing her to the ground.

“You won’t have time to think like you just did,” he said.

“But this is practice,” she retorted, angrily.

“It may be practice for you, but for me it is something entirely different,” he mentioned.

“And what is this for you exactly,” Lenz asked, seething through her teeth which happened to still be marred with debris and some grass.

“This is my experiences being passed on to others. This is my time being given to someone else. This is my knowledge being handed down to an individual whom I do not know. I am trying to give you a sense of reality before you have to face it.”

The woman dwelled over his words, feeding off of the meaning of each letter that escaped his mouth, through his teeth and passed his lips. She ate it up as if she had been famished for ages.

“This is important to you,” she stated. “Why? I am someone whom you do not know as you have said. Why shall you be so interested in caring for me?”

The man sighed and looked away for a moment before returning his gaze to meet the marbles of hazel again. The woman held his stare with intent. She was desperate to know why he was doing what he was doing.

Any other person would simply show her how to do something and send her on her way, but this man was different. This man wanted to demonstrate to her the concept, the history, the reasoning behind each and every move she made. He felt she was special, no matter how deep down inside he felt it.

She felt that he felt she was special, no matter how challenging that was to perceive. She felt special just thinking about how he felt she was special. Her mind was on fire, trying to understand the philosophy behind his words.

He sighed again and leant back of the heels of his feet.

“There are some people in life that need to be protected,” he finally murmured.

Lenz was confused. “Protected from what?”

“The corrupt minds of individuals like the people that damaged your face,” he said bluntly.

She blushed, cowering into the darkest corners of her subconscious. She hated being called out upon like that. She wished she could just shrivel up and die right then and there, but she knew what he meant.

“I understand,” she replied, standing up and brushing off the detritus that littered her pants and shirt.

“Do you?”

“I do.” Her gaze never wavered from his face as she tried to search for some hidden secrets kept safe inside his pupils. Defeat swarmed around her, for she found nothing that revealed what he truly thought.

“I understand.”

“Well then,” Mac said, crossing his arms and finding his regular composure once more. “Try again.”

“I will.”
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Learning from Experience II

Postby Lenz on March 16th, 2014, 7:20 am

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Without interruption and with more clarity in what she was trying to achieve, Lenz gracefully, yet quickly, attained the proper stance for what seemed to be the millionth time.

She heightened all her senses, her eyes adjusting to her surroundings as she saw out the corners of her eyes. She strained to hear even the slightest of movements, a scuffling sound coming from behind her.

Suddenly her mind manifested the idea to try a different tactic. She was still standing sideways, her legs bent, farther than shoulder width apart. This time she used her back foot to step inward. It almost touched her front foot before she lifted that one to kick the dummy.

After she had driven her foot through the bag, she stepped down. She didn’t feel off balance the entire time she proceeded with the technique. It all felt right and much better than the previous attempts she had made.

Apparently her teacher thought it satisfactory, clapping sounds coming from his direction.

“Impressive,” he said, praising her timidly. “You finally found the correct way to preform this move.”

“…and all on my own,” she added, interrupting him slightly.

He nodded his head, dismissing her of her rudeness. He felt that she had done a good enough job to go off and try a different attack.

“So,” he said smiling in the smallest way he allowed himself to. “I have taught you the back stance, you have figured out the horse stance and before we even truly began, you corrected yourself on the basic forward punch.”

Lenz nodded her head.

“What else are you interested in learning today?”

She whirled around and scanned the sky for any signs of what the time was. The horizon was wounded with colours of red. Bloody seeped throughout the sky, meshing in with the indigo tints and violet hues. It was growing late, but she was too amped up to want to leave so soon.

“Everything,” she admitted, a smirk forming at the corners of her lips. Her teeth glowed in the afternoon light. Her eyes twinkled amidst the darkening sky.

“I suppose I could teach you some more moves, but my dear,” he started, the woman’s heart already dejecting until it scuffed the surface of despair. “I cannot teach you everything.”

“That’s alright,” she said. “Just teach me everything you can.”

“I admire your formidable attitude,” he began. Lenz smiled halfheartedly, accepting what she thought was a compliment. However, he wasn’t finished as he continued, “but do not get this confused with arrogance and hastiness. Those border lines are often blurred together in the heat of actual combat.”

She blinked rapidly, becoming consumed by images of possible futures. Fate played a great toll in life, for it was the end of an individual’s days. How would hers play out if she had continued to be her natural perky and attentive self? Would she end up getting herself killed or would she manage to escape, holding onto the last remnant strings of life?

“I understand,” she whispered. “I completely agree with your theory.”

The man chuckled darkly. “You think it a theory?”

With wide eyes, she was increasingly started. His entire demeanor changed. His eyes became darker, his face contorted into a mask of stern ferocity. It was as if he had just witnessed a brutal and morbid murder and he was about to take it out on her.

“My love, that was no theory. This is the truth, the adamant fact, not fiction. If you think this is a fable, a faerie tale, you have no minds about you.”

Astonishment replaced the vivid amount of bemusement that filled her to the brim. She licked her lips and wrung her hands, looking downwards.

She knew she had said the wrong thing and after being yelled at like such, she wished she could have shut her mouth. She wished she could have withdrawn those words before they made contact with her instructor.
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Learning from Experience II

Postby Lenz on March 16th, 2014, 7:22 am

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“I apologise,” she muttered, taking a small step backwards.

“There is no need for your condolences, girl,” he replied his expression as stoic as ever. “I just want you to know how you should act. Heed my words when I tell you this. Never let your guard down, always been vigilant and aware of what happens. Never take situations for granted until you are sure you are safe.”

Lenz was never more sure about anything before. She would cherish those words of advice throughout her years. She would be sure to revert back to those sentences and the meaning behind his tone of voice in the future.

She would have a future now that she had met such a kindred spirit, she was sure of that.

“Now,” he shouted abruptly, scaring the woman out of her skin. “What else shall be said and done?”

“How about something along the lines of subtle escape?” she suggested.

“Excellent idea,” he beamed. “How about we start with breaking out of hand holds?”

“Hand holds?” she inquired quizzically. She didn’t recognize the terminology he used. She was morally confused. When had hand holds ever been mentioned?

“Hand holds are what I like to call the position of someone’s hands anywhere over the body. I will show you.”

Mac started to wrap his hands around Lenz’s wrists, grasping them tightly so that he posed no easy way for her to escape.

She started to panic, fear welling up inside her stomach. She wanted to impress him by showing him what she knew, but alas, she hadn’t a clue how to release his hold on her wrists.

She struggled to try to break free, but to no avail. She remained stuck in his grip, his fingers pressing into her flesh like nails into a ripe tomato.

“You’re hurting me,” she said loudly so that he could hear and let go before he punctured her skin.

She could already see the blood dripping out of the tissue even though none was. Her imagination played vivid and drastic tricks to her.

“And so will your assailant,” the man said, his face holding no empathy for her wellbeing. It was scary, yet very understandable. He needed to act this way for her to teach herself how to escape from such a situation.

Like she had been told before, she wasted no time in trying to find a direct route to survival. She wanted to keep her limbs like any normal person would.

“How about,” she mumbled to herself, digging around her brain for clues.

Finally something drifted to the surface. She decided to bring up both her wrists so that they were over her head. She inverted her hands and then brought them down very quickly so that Mac’s hands slipped off them with minor ease.

“Astounding,” he said. “You’re quite the quick learner, aren’t you?”

She shrugged her shoulders with significant modesty. She was a humble human being who often didn’t like the attention of being commemorated for simple things.

Now, if she were to save a life, she would want to gratitude, but for something like this, she would rather run away that be acknowledge for it. This was the opposite of how she thought during the beginning of her training. It was amazing how quickly someone’s disposition and mental state changes in less than a few bells.

Suddenly the man’s hands wrapped around one of her wrists this time. She tried to use the same technique this time, but it didn’t work. His fingers were digging into her skin again, and this time they sliced through her flesh.

Blood started to drip down her arm as she cried out in pain. She was not easily swayed, however, for she had never been an easily deterred woman. She was passionate and persevered in anything and everything she set her mind to.

Please think of something, she thought to herself desperately.

Please.
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Learning from Experience II

Postby Lenz on March 16th, 2014, 7:24 am

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She looked into the man’s eyes and tried to read his mind. Of course this was impossible, for no words transmuted from his brain to hers. She remained empty of any tips until a thought popped through and triggered something in her mind.

“What if I,” she started to say, her voice trailing off.

“Might I suggest you use your other hand to your advantage?” Mac suggested, raising an eyebrow in both concern and moral interest.

“Good idea,” she said to him, squinting through the pain that stung through her forearm and up into her lower shoulder.

She rotated her arm one way and pushed on his arm, but it wouldn’t budge. Out of a random act of chance, she rotated her arm the other way and used her other arm to push his arm. It was a miracle that his fingertips dislodged themselves from her flesh.

She was no longer hysterical as her face lightened her no longer somber facial features. Concentration retreated back into its cave, pleasure flooding her emotions with a rapid pace.

“Congratulations,” Mac said. “How did you come across making such a decision?”

The woman inhaled a gasp of cold air, the temperature dropping around her, accompanying the dismissal of the sun. It started to set beyond the horizon, only a fraction of light still visible to the human eye.

“Well,” she began. “I used the strategy you mentioned to me earlier. Without unintelligent haste, yet with a diligent matter, I used all the possibilities I thought of from simple observation. I tried knew things quickly until I found the most logical one. I broke free and managed to keep my arm.”

She inspected her new wound, gracefully becoming a new addition to the other ones that littered her body. Thankfully it was minor, something that wouldn’t be there for long. A simple scab would cover it for at most, a few days.

Mac knew what he was doing. He knew how to be careful and how to treat someone without harming them terribly. She was grateful for that.

“Thank you,” she told him.

“What for?” he asked, naturally bewildered.

“For teaching me all of this of course,” she said. “…and for not hurting me too badly.”

He smiled and looked to her side. “Shouldn’t you be going home? It’s rather late,” he mentioned, pointing behind her back to the exit of the training grounds.

“Are you trying to get rid of me that badly?” she asked, feigning hurt. She lowered her eyebrows until they were strewn together with only a patch of skin separating them. She frowned, the corners of her mouth forming creases.

“I didn’t say that.”

“Then no, I’m not going anywhere. I still have at least a half day left.”

“Are you inferring you’re going to stay until the early bells of the morning?” he inquired, raising another eyebrow.

“I didn’t say that,” she mimicked, grinning slightly with childish enthusiasm.

He chuckled and bent down, a hand stretched out in a gentlemanly gesture. “Well then. What shall I teach you next my lady?”

Lenz thought that over a bit before a thought rose in her mind. There were still so many other techniques for her to learn in the areas of the unarmed, but she remembered she still had her dagger, having been untouched until now.

She pulled it out, the blade glinting in the only remains of sunlight left. “How about this?” she asked.

Mac put a hand to his chin and started to stroke it. “I think I know a little about how to use such a weapon. I could teach you a thing or two.”

He paused and walked away, returning with a dagger of his own, only this one was a little bit shorter and obviously not double sided.

“The only question I have for you is-“ he stopped, adding anticipation to his words. Lenz was on the edge of her seat, be it if she were sitting on one- “are you ready?”

She giggled dramatically saying, “Of course I am.”

“Then let us begin.”



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Learning from Experience II

Postby Zandelia on April 10th, 2014, 1:04 am

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Lenz :
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Observation – 4
Socialization – 3
Unarmed – 4
Philosophy - 1

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Unarmed: Horse Stance
Unarmed: Step Kick
Unarmed – Wrist Hold Break


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Nice. Keep it up!
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